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Avatar: The Broken Cycle ( )

Postby Gabriel_Whist on Wed Jan 21, 2009 9:14 pm

This is kind of a remake of Avatar the Broken Balance, but more of a reinvisioning.

Same starting plot, the old Avatar cycle was broken, the new Avatar is the first in a cycle, and he has turned out to be less of a hero than a tyrant, taking control of the earth, with his 12 extremely skilled and powerful generals who trained him as the greatest powers after him. He was originally an airbender.

A resistance movement against the Avatar and his rule of tyranny has started, and they are based at an ancient mountain temple, with tents and huts built through the woods on the mountainside, and hot air balloons holding structures in the air as well. Amongst the rebel forces a school has been created, instructing soldiers and benders in their crafts, and teaching them how to use their abilities.

This is where the RP will start. This RP will not include the Avatar State ability that the previous one did, and you will only ever be able to use one element.

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Re: Avatar: The Broken Cycle ( )

Postby Anima on Wed Jan 21, 2009 9:46 pm

I'm glad to see this back. I think I'll keep my same character, but make her a bit older.

Name: Jia
Age: 15
Gender: Female
Appearance: Image
Element: Water
Weapon of Choice: Water and her bending, though she is known to create long bo-staffs out of ice as she fights.
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Re: Avatar: The Broken Cycle ( )

Postby Akira_08 on Wed Jan 21, 2009 10:58 pm

Name: Nue
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Appearance:
Image
Element: Fire
Weapon of Choice: Relies on his bending most of the time, but he's learning to wheel a sword.

[[Sorry new to this]]
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Re: Avatar: The Broken Cycle ( )

Postby Cazz on Wed Jan 21, 2009 11:06 pm

Name:Jaxen
Age: 17
Gender:Male
Appearance: Tall, bald, slightly tan. He has subble on face.
Element: Air
Weapon of Choice:Staff, two small fans
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Re: Avatar: The Broken Cycle ( )

Postby Gabriel_Whist on Thu Jan 22, 2009 1:05 am

Anima, accepted cause I know you well enough to know that you can RP well.

Nue, I'm realizing that I can't really tell RPing abilities at all from the character template I created, so be aware that grammar, and writing ability is a must in all of my RPs, and that posts may not be less than a paragraph minimum. And its wield, not wheel.

Cazz, same thing.

Other than that both of you are tentatively accepted.

My character:

Name: Ishi "Oni" Kobushi
Age: 24
Gender: Male
Appearance: http://www.ableekertomorrow.com/wipcomb ... htfang.jpg
Element: Earth
Weapon of Choice: Demon Club/Mace (Looks something like this chicks, http://fc09.deviantart.com/fs16/f/2007/ ... mitrys.jpg )
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Re: Avatar: The Broken Cycle ( )

Postby Protoman X on Thu Jan 22, 2009 3:20 am

Name: Jun-Ko
Age: 26
Gender: Male
Appearance:
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Element: None
Weapon of Choice: Three-Form Blade, a weapon that takes on three different forms.

Form I: Twin Dao.

Form II: Double Voulge. Twin Dao are connected at the tip of the hilts. (Least favored form)

Form III: Full Blade. Swords are attached into a 50% longer two-handed Dao. (Favored form)

[For those who don't know, Dao are the Chinese versions of Scimitars. Zuko wields a pair of Dao when he poses as the Blue Spirit.]
Last edited by Protoman X on Fri Jan 23, 2009 12:28 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Avatar: The Broken Cycle ( )

Postby Chulance on Thu Jan 22, 2009 11:17 am

Name: Kache
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Appearance:Image
Element:Fire
Weapon of Choice: His weapon if choice if a metal pole
Have you ever dreamed of being extraordinary, being able to wield a super-human ability? Tissue Regeneration, Teleportation, Electricity Manipulation? What If I told you could, the way to obtain these abilities is simple. Click the Links.
OOC:http://www.roleplaygateway.com/heroes-heroes-villains-t29924.html
IC:http://www.roleplaygateway.com/heroes-heroes-villains-t29956.html

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Re: Avatar: The Broken Cycle ( )

Postby oakash on Thu Jan 22, 2009 11:58 am

Name: Storie
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Appearance: Image
Element: Water
Weapon of Choice: She can do the things that Tai-lee can do, hitting the G-spots and making benders lose their ability, she is better at this then bending, so she is there to learn from the masters.
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Re: Avatar: The Broken Cycle ( )

Postby AngelDreams on Thu Jan 22, 2009 9:50 pm

Hey Gabriel_Whist can I just transfer my character sheet from the last one to this one?
ImageImageImageImageImageHelp me Level them Up PLEASE!!!!!
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Re: Avatar: The Broken Cycle ( )

Postby Gabriel_Whist on Thu Jan 22, 2009 10:41 pm

Mozenrath: Accepted, how does the sword work though? I mean, how does attaching them make it longer in Form III?

Chulance: I'm not sure that you can live up to the expectations I have for RPers in my RPs. Are you?

Oakash: G-Spots????????? Did you perhaps mean pressure points? A G-Spot is very different from what Tai-Lee hits....

Angel: Sure, just make the necessary adjustments.
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Re: Avatar: The Broken Cycle ( )

Postby Chulance on Thu Jan 22, 2009 11:10 pm

Well I'm positive I can live up to the expectations you have in RPers in your rp's. I can post some of my more literate and longer posts here if you want to see a sample of my rp.
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Re: Avatar: The Broken Cycle ( )

Postby Gabriel_Whist on Fri Jan 23, 2009 12:13 am

I've seen you RP before, so yes, I will need to see that you can do better than what I've seen from you.
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Re: Avatar: The Broken Cycle ( )

Postby Protoman X on Fri Jan 23, 2009 12:14 am

Form III is difficult to explain. Lets see, you know how in Power Rangers Jungle Fury, the red ranger eventually gets the twin swords? When he combines them, he takes one and attaches the whole thing to other's blade, making the overall length of the sword longer. I dunno how to explain better than-- *smacks head* I bet I can find a youtube vid that shows him doing it.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DUVimjlhtR8

That was the best I could find. Hope that explains it.

EDIT:

Maybe she means Chi-Spots? <_<

One question, Gabe, have we ever RPed before? I wanna say yes, but I'm not sure.

ANOTHER EDIT:

I got to looking and I'm gonna switch from double edge to single edge (dao-like appearance) to more closely match what the video shows. Cool?
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Re: Avatar: The Broken Cycle ( )

Postby Chulance on Fri Jan 23, 2009 12:29 am

Okay sure I'll post some of my skills in RP. Also just curious were have you seen me rp?


Green Arrow rp

Nathan Wood smiled sitting at table with some of his workers and some chinese buisnessmen. The chinese men wanted to join their company's with his father,usually this would have nothing to do with him. Well that was usually today was different his father was trying to prepaire him to take over the company so he let him be in charge of the company temporarily. They were offering many things that could improve the company and improve the pay of many of the workers one of the pro's but their were rumors that some of the men notorious criminals. He had a smile on his face he personally knew that the leader of the company was a crime-boss obviously he couldn't tell them his sources, but his father didn't know that and he couldn't reavel his secerete as the Green Arrow for obvious reasons. He knew he would have to prove to the world the chinese company was corrupted as the Green Arrow he received help from many anonymous sources many of them were people who thought he was a hero.

He smiled the company was asking him if would allow them to join his father would be dissapointed if he said no so minutes later his father came out his office angry that he had refused to let them join." What were you thinking! He said angry as Nathan shrugged"Don't know I just have a bad feeling about them" He said as His father was clearly angry Daniel Wood his father he was in hs mid thirties and had anger managment issues. His father was a very rich man the kind that took from the poor and gave to the rich the kind of person Nathan disliked. He didn't want to be known as another rich jerk who abuses his power but if he inherited the company he would have many more resources for his arrows and other technology in general. His father wanted to just punch Nathan in the fast and break his bones one by one but that would get him arrested and Nathan would immediantly inherit the company.

His father simply sighed"You have greatly dissapointed me son but the decission is yours I hope you know what your doing I have to go "He said as he went to an elevator. Nathan smiled he enjoyed ticking off selfish rich people it was another reason why he became the Green Arrow. He smiled as he left to an elevator going to the third floor to pick up a newspaper it talked about Chicago's Robin Good the green arrow he smiled to think the police was after him deeming him a threat for returning stolen property to the owners or descendants of the rightful owners. He had a smile on his face as he saw a small Green Arrow comic in the newspaper he smiled it had him being arrested by police and people cheering. He smiled these authorties actually thought he was a villian most of them served in criminal organizations.

He sighed as he left to his mansion changing into his Green Arrow costume gathering some of his new arrows it was time to test them out this would certianly be a good outing. He smiled as he left on his motorcycle clicking a button going turbo speed driving clicking a button he had a police radar he was going to the crime infested parts of times so far he wasn't able to find anything shocking or anyone in danger except for the strong smell of whiskey. He continued driving through the sidewalks until he heard somone yell hey it was a cry for help he clicked a button activating hid infra red goggles local thugs this would be amusing he slowed down the pace of his motorcycle. He used an arrow that shot the purse out of the man's hand and into a nearby wall. He fired an arrow between two of the thugs it caused a small explosion sending them flying into walls bleeding and unconscious. The other two began to back up as Oliver fired an arrow that launched out an electric net around the other two causing them to get electrecuted. He than drove towards Taylor"You know this isn't really a safe area to be a night there's a lot of bad guys around here" He said with a smile"


Here's one sample of my rp from a private roleplay
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Re: Avatar: The Broken Cycle ( )

Postby Gabriel_Whist on Fri Jan 23, 2009 2:30 am

Mozenrath: Yeah, thats ok, I get the swords now, seems pretty cool. I'm pretty sure we've RPed together before, at some point, I just don't remember when.

Chu: I'm sorry man, but that really wouldn't cut it for me. Its long, but the grammar and spelling are absolutely atrocious. I don't care if people make minor mistakes, everyone does, nobody's perfect. But you.... In the first paragraph alone you make more grammatical mistakes, mispell more words, and ignore more necessary punctuation and capitalization than most people do in an entire RP. Not to mention the fact that you're writing is near incoherent, almost impossible to understand, and in general appears to be the work of a grade schooler. I'm sure that its probably just because you're young, and in time you will get a lot better, but you really aren't anywhere near the standards I set for my roleplays. I'm sorry if this seems harsh man, just keep working on it and get better ok? I'm sure that when you grow up a little bit you'll be a completely adequate RPer, you're just not quite there yet.
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Re: Avatar: The Broken Cycle ( )

Postby oakash on Sat Jan 24, 2009 12:28 pm

OOC: Yeah, sorry about that, I think I meant Chi-spots. On the recordings I watched, the sound wasn't that good, so I wasn't sure what they were called exactly. Are we going to start soon?
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Re: Avatar: The Broken Cycle ( )

Postby Cazz on Sat Jan 24, 2009 10:04 pm

I'm sorry, but I have to leave the rp. To much stuff going on in my real life.
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Re: Avatar: The Broken Cycle ( )

Postby AngelDreams on Mon Jan 26, 2009 9:54 pm

Name:Angel Sant
Age :16
Gender: male
Appearance:Image
Element: Water
Weapon of choice: Black sword in pic

(Sorry I didn't post soon is hard to do it from a psp so I had to use my cuz comp. soon I'll get my computer)
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Re: Avatar: The Broken Cycle ( )

Postby Anima on Sun Feb 01, 2009 11:30 am

Are we still doing this one?
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Re: Avatar: The Broken Cycle ( )

Postby Future on Sun Feb 01, 2009 11:49 am

Name: Mortis Angelus
Age: 17
Gender:Male

Appearance:Image

Element: Earth

Weapon of Choice:A Stone block, Which he uses as a transport method. By bending the stone block he can change it in different kinds of weapons depending on the situation.
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