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Re: Character Development ( )

Postby LitomoSilver on Mon Mar 10, 2008 7:25 pm

For everyone's info, I generally wait till everyone has posted while reading over them and thinking on them.

Then I make corrections or suggestions.

Also, I make my post during that time as well. :)

Though it's tough to not include RP posts with the corrections here. I'll be posting RP posts and posts like this one separately to prevent confusion.

The other reason why I haven't said anything is because I'm waiting on other students.

Do try to keep in mind that we can't leave everyone behind. That's not fair to the others.
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Re: Character Development ( )

Postby Sir Alban on Tue Mar 11, 2008 4:22 am

I know, only everyone is take an age to post.
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Re: Character Development ( )

Postby Sashay on Tue Mar 11, 2008 7:22 am

(( Sorry to make a completely OOC post here (I've got class in a few minutes). Just letting you know I've been having a lot of school stuff coming up the past few days, and I might not get to post until Friday if I can't get to it today. Just letting y'all know. Feel free to go ahead without me, I can catch up if needed. ))
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Re: Character Development ( )

Postby Sir Alban on Wed Mar 12, 2008 10:23 am

*looks meanigfully at limito. starts tapping table, beating out a rythym*
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Re: Character Development ( )

Postby LitomoSilver on Thu Mar 13, 2008 9:42 am

Hehehehe, impatient aren't you?

As I said, Alban, I want to see what others have posted.

In any case, here goes my post.

So much goodness was in this park... how could anyone ever not enjoy the tranquility and happiness, contentedness found here? He wondered, walking slowly towards the park 50 feet ahead of him, on the sidewalk to the left side of the street. I can remember as a small kid that I loved playing here. He did, and could almost see it before him as he came closer.

The sounds of laughter came as the young child at 7 years old, swinging on the swings, his father standing tall and strong, seemingly like as if he'd live forever. The man seemed to be in his 50s, hair still full of brown hair, not yet dulled by Time. But traces could be seen here and there in his hair, that Time was catching up to him.

Yet, the man was happy, emerald eyes set in a handsome scarred face almost made for smiling and broad chest, clothed in blue shirt and black pants, large hands gently pushing his son higher and higher but never too high to hurt his son. "Higher, Kelric?"

His son happily replied, "Higher! Higher!"

To which the father replied with a gentle but firm push, sending his son higher up, watching his son swing his legs to help with the forward motion, smiling. So much time lost as a soldier... I should've came home earlier. Lived longer with my son. His eyes glistened softly with tears, almost invisibly.

War and training had taken the boy's father from him at an early age, leaving his mother to carry on the task of raising the son alone, trying to raise him as a man who would make for a good friend, through thick and thin.


Kelric snapped out of the daydream, smiling as he walked towards the park, walking slowly through the path, looking around and seeing flashes of his memories of spending time with his mother and father. His mother had passed some time back, due to an illness. But he was now a man, one who cherished his memories. Indeed, he was a familiar sight to most of those who played and exercised in the park.

"Hey Kelric! Catch this!" A young boy's voice came, a brown football flying through the sky towards him.

His head snapped around, catching sight of the football moments before it smacked into his chest then falling to the ground with a thump. Bending down, he picked it up then looked towards the boy that had thrown the ball at him, a grin playing on his lips as his green eyes found that of the boy's brown eyes, twinkling with merriment and stifled laughter playing upon his lips.

He shook his head slowly, laughing, his brown hair bound back into a ponytail flying about as he did so. "Ahhh, Keith. You just had to catch me by surprise, didn't you? Huh? Huh? Huh?" He grinned as he ran towards the boy.

Seeing what Kelric had in mind, Keith ran from him, laughing and dodging kids and other obstruction, vainly trying to escape.

A few moments later, the young boy was on the ground, being tickled by Kelric. Peals of laughter could be heard coming from the child beneath him, hands flying over the small stomach, fingers dancing upon the young boy's shirt, finding the ticklish spots.

"Uncle! Uncle! Uncle! Please stopppppp!" But the boy was laughing, and could only utter it out every other breath.

At long last, Kelric let up and helped the child up. "Got you didn't I, huh?"

"Yeah! Want to play football?" He picked up the football that had fallen to their feet when Kelric caught him, then backed up a few steps. "Please?"

"Alright, let me go over here." As he did, turning and walking quickly, he caught the boy's mother's eyes on him, twinkling with merriment and amusement.

Then she called out to him, "Hi Kelric! Having a good time?"

To which he would reply, "Of course, Amys! Who wouldn't enjoy playing football or ticklings with such a cute son?" he teased her, causing her to blush.

"Catch!"

He turned around, just in time to see the boy throw the ball towards him. It flew, high into the sky before falling towards him. A moment later, he was lost in his memories once more.

He laughed, running back, trying to catch the ball while his father watched, laughing as the child's small legs ran furiously, trying to catch the ball in time. Alas, he got there a second too late, the ball falling through his hands and bouncing up and down a few times upon the ground.

He shook himself out of the dream and caught the ball in time.

Both mother and son had seen his eyes turn inward, as if reliving memories. They could not help but smile, somewhat concerned as they watched.

He held the ball for a few moments, looking at the ball, smiling with fondness of the memories.

OOC: Whew, that was a long post. But I loved it. What matters is that you enjoy creating the memories and the past of your characters as much as possible.
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Re: Character Development ( )

Postby Sir Alban on Thu Mar 13, 2008 9:49 am

OCC: you have officially put my post to shame

*pretends he isnt there*
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Re: Character Development ( )

Postby LitomoSilver on Thu Mar 13, 2008 9:55 am

OOC: My apologies, Alban. :)

You'll learn how to develop your character with just as much skill.

This comes from years of experience with RPs.

It takes a while to develop a good character with tangible backgrounds. :)
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Re: Character Development ( )

Postby Sashay on Fri Mar 14, 2008 1:41 pm

((Sorry, had a long few days there. >.< Anyways, I'm back for the time being, but I'll be vanishing again pretty quick. So I might be a while to post again.))

Anna grinned as she waved at her big brother. “Johhny! Johhny! C’mere!” She jumped up and down before sitting in the swing as her older brother came over to her.

“What’cha want, squirt?” John asked, frowning with his arms crossed on his chest. “There’s a cute girl—“

“Push!” The little girl grinned even more as she kicked her feet towards the ground. Being all of six years old, her small legs didn’t reach the ground. “Please?”

“Alright, alright.” He shook his head. He could never say no to her when she was like this. Walking over to stand behind her, he grabbed the chains and pulled the swing back before jogging forward a bit. She was scared of going too high, so he made sure she stayed close to the ground.

“Yay!” Anna screamed as she swung back and forth on the swing. She’d always loved the swings, they were always the first thing she went to when they went to the park. Lately, instead of her whole family coming to the park, it was just her and her big brother.

“When you think Mamma an’ Daddy come?” She asked, looking up at John when he finally stopped her.

“I don know, squirt.” He scratched the back of his head nervously, before his attention was stolen by a small brunette close to his age, who was walking by with a little boy a couple of years older than Anna. Without saying a thing to his sister, John went over to the two, leaving Anna alone in the gravel.

“Johnny mean,” Anna pouted, crossing her arms and sticking out her bottom lip before deciding to walk over to a strange merry-go-round like thing. It had four little bicycles attached to it, but they were on a track and went around in circles. There wasn’t anyone on it, so she got on one of the little bicycles. Before she could start peddling, however, a small voice piped up.

“Can I join you?”

Anna looked up to see the litte boy who’d been with the girl John had chased after. He had the same pouty look on his face as Anna had. Grinning, she said, “Get on!”
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Re: Character Development ( )

Postby Veste on Sat Mar 15, 2008 8:16 am

Sorry I've been late. Life's pretty insane. I'll edit this post with my entry later today. Sorry for holding it up, guys.

EDIT: Thanks for waiting. I'll try not to be so late next time. >> But, hey, I was first for the last one, so all's fair!... well, not really. But oh well!



Vroom, vroom!

An engine revved loudly at the parking lot of the recreational area. The car was dark red, sleek, and low to the ground, almost scraping against it. Josh wasn’t getting ready to leave the place, of course; he’d only just gotten there. The 18-year-old just wanted to show off. More realistically, though, he scared the younger children. Wailing began off at the playground; a young woman ran over to her screaming child, and the group of people she had been sitting with turned and stared at the car’s owner. Not one to pass up a challenge, ‘The Bear’ hopped up out of his triple-parked vehicle and strode over to a table just a few feet away from the group.

He wore a plain, navy shirt that was stretched to accommodate his size. It was short-sleeved and had not a single label on it. Josh had even ripped out the tag after he'd bought it. His shorts were the same, but brown - and did he ever like running around in shorts, especially at the park! The young Mr. Archer was also quite overweight, and, despite having been made fun of for it, continues to flaunt it at every opportunity. He typically feels it compliments his short, black hair very well.

Some of the previous stares continued after he had sat down. Some were turned away. A few of the people stood up, presumably to use the nearby washrooms. Children continued to play contently at the playground, only slightly perturbed by the intrusive revving noise; apparently, the screaming child was unique, and his mother had already taken him to the bathroom.

Probably to give him meds or somethin’. Hah! Poor little guy! Hahaha!

"Nice weather we're having, i'n't it?" he said casually, glancing over at the group of people he was taunting. A grin lit the boy's face, and that was the proverbial last straw. A pair of simply-dressed men jumped to their feet and walked right over to confront Josh.

"What is it with people like you?" one of them began, a furious look plastered to his mug. "Why do you assholes feel like you can just go wherever the hell you want and do whatever you please? Why do such douche-bags like you exist?"

"Hey, man," the 18-year-old replied. "It's a free country. More than them Americans down south. And, you know, I actually think it's pretty weird there aren't more jerks like you wanderin' around. I mean, it's not li-"

"Jerks like me? Are you insane!? I'm not the person trying to ruin somebody's peaceful day at the park! I'm not the one running his little machine in here and disturbing the peace! I should knock your face in for this!"

Hah, just like old times.

"First, I'm not insane. Second, you are ruining my day at the park. And third, well, I'd really like to see you try it, little man."

An angry shout was released from the man's mouth as he raised his fist to strike. As quickly as a flash, despite his out-of-shape appearance, Joshua's right arm met the guy's own upper arm as his left hand held the captured arm against the young Archer's. In seconds, the older man was lying on the bench on his back, an elbow firmly planted into his throat and another keeping his closer hand steady against the table. Josh was on is feet, keeping enough weight on his arms to be debilitating, but not life-threatening. The guy was struggling against the grip, but it was futile; he, literally, couldn't escape.

"Now, sit here nice and tight while I explain to you why I revved my engine, understand? Y'see, I was on my way here, cruising along the roads at whatever the speed limit was - yeah, the speed limit, don't look all exasperated at me. All of a sudden, I felt it that my car was gettin' really hot, and, well, it isn't really too hot out here, y'know? So I went and revved up about as much as I could and, lo and behold, I realized something was wrong! Then that kid started yelling and everything went to rat-shit and now you guys are on my case. So, how 'bout you get up and walk away, I'll take my car to a mechanic, or get a tow truck if there's a phone around here or somethin', and we'll just stay our separate ways, eh?"

"That, uh, that's fine with me. C-come on, guys, let's go and sit down."

Josh released the man, and they did, indeed, go their separate ways. The 18-year-old meandered back to his car, thinking the whole way back.

Exactly like old times. Always with the self-righteous people who don't bother asking what the hell's going on before trying to pull some stupid crap on us. God, I hate people like that.

Hm. They're fun to pick on, too. Jerks.


The fat young man leaned against his little car and thought, for a split second, about the ironic difference between the size of him and his method of transportation. He almost laughed out loud, but realized that making a useless loud noise would be rude. Instead, he serenely viewed the entirety of the park - especially the playground. Josh missed the playground. It reminded him of the only time he and his father had done anything other than bicker; his dad and him had built sandcastles, just like the kids were. He had slid down the slide into his dad's arms, climbed the monkey bars with the strong hands around his waist - he was really bad at the monkey bars. They had had snowball fights in the winter, when nobody else felt the sets were safe enough to play on. That never stopped Josh. He never seemed to get hurt by falling over, for whatever reason. Tough-skinned, his dad had said.

If his mom hadn't died, would she have said the same thing? The young man didn't know. Maybe she would've been scared for him, would've scolded his dad. Or maybe she would have smacked him upside the head. Or maybe she would have stayed quiet. Or maybe...

Augh! Stop thinking about her. You never met her. You... you killed her!

Yes, that was what he said. Whenever he shrank into a drunken stupor, he really hated Josh. Right to the bones, his father had hated him - and he hated right back. Maybe not so deeply down, but, on the outside, the rage and pain was always there. There was no female in either of their lives. Both were only children, and Josh's mother's family had given up on the two and left them alone. There were no 'if's about it, either. None of 'his father secretly loving him deep down' bullshit to try to wade into. It was all very depressing.

So the young boy had taken off, just after getting his licence. He went to Toronto, lived there for a few years, and loathed it with such a passion that the outward hate he had for his father seemed like a drop of acid in an ocean of bile.

With a look of disgust aimed at the horrendous playground fraught with giggling children, the Bear leapt back into his smooth red ride, causing it to lurch to the ground. He shoves his keys into the ignition and turned them with malice. Peeling out, he zoomed from the parking lot, onto the road, and back to the highway leading away from the despicable place.

Goddamn memories. Stupid park. Effing parents. Dammit! I hate parks.
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Re: Character Development ( )

Postby AlexRider009 on Mon Mar 17, 2008 4:55 pm

(sorry for posting this so extremely late)
Name:Alex
Age:14
Sex:Male
City: New York
Brief history: He lives with his mom in an apartment in Queens, goes to Queen's Public Middle School(not a real school btw), straight A student, doesn't have many friends, emo(although he'd disagree), African American, Born in Chicago, Illinois, has a pet goldfish.
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Re: Character Development ( )

Postby LitomoSilver on Mon Mar 17, 2008 10:56 pm

Now you'll need to make a post like myself and the others have. :P
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Re: Character Development ( )

Postby Ambassador Ethan on Wed Mar 19, 2008 3:29 pm

Name: Jeff Crowne
Age: 26
Sex: Male
City: Montreal
Brief History: Jeff grew up in Trois-Riviere, just outside Montreal. He was raised English, but learned French in an immersive manner. He was always an odd child, preferring solitude to company. His parents worried about him and sought help from multiple therapists, but they all told them the same thing: "He's just a shy child." Unconvinced, yet assured, his parents let it be, and for his whole life he has had few friends, and those he never really felt any regard for.
"To a blind man his entire body is a ghost. Felt but not seen. Thus, I raise invisible arms, move invisible legs, my invisible chest rising and falling to unseen air. So now I stretch fingers, then make fists. I am everywhere solid--and always have been--if not for the deceit perpetrated by my own eyes." - Steven Erikson's Deadhouse Gates

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Postby Ambassador Ethan on Wed Mar 19, 2008 4:07 pm

Jeff moved at a lengthy yet calm gait, his natural grace and noticable self-assurance very prominent. High-angled brow, defined cheekbones, tall, lithe body, and a clean-shaven face made him a very handsome man, but he would never approach a woman. His light brown hair was cut short, above his striking light-blue eyes. They said the eyes were the windows into a man's soul, and if that held true, then Jeff's soul was gentle, delicate, while reserved, and showed his compassion.

His eyes roved aimlessly, absorbing the city's beautiful aesthetics, his ears consuming the sounds of the city. The horns, the motors, the talk of pedestrians. His walk slowed as he noticed what was to his left. It was a park, settled inside the bustling city like an oasis amidst a desert. He stopped entirely, rested his forearms against the rusted chain-link fence. A small merry-go-round was in front of him, the children laughing and screaming. He smiled inwardly recalling his time spent on the merry-go-round in his home in Trois-Rivieres. His mother had brought him here, when he was young, and he would run to the merry-go-round, it being his first choice of all the childish amusements.

Jeff ran, his little legs carrying him quickly across the playground. His mother stood behind him, a smile across her face as she watched in alleviation her son romping on the spinning disc. Jeff felt exhilirated as he spun, the world around him becoming a blur. Distinguishes vanished and he felt alone, felt safe. Laughing, he spun faster and faster, then lifted his feet of the ground. Spinning, he pressed his face hard against the cold iron of the play-thing, his tiny hands gripping tight as he slowed. When the spinning stopped he looked up to see another boy standing there. Patiently waiting his turn to use the merry-go-round. Jeff shied away, crawling backwards until he fell off of the contraption and landed in mud, then turned and scrambled backwards.

The child who had been waiting ignored him, simply climbed atop the merry-go-round with an assortment of others, then began spinning it. Jeff dipped his head and walked away, electing to sit underneath a picnic table instead. He saw his mother coming over, but didn't look up when she crouched beside him.

"Jeffy," his mother spoke softly, her words soothing, "Why don't you play with the other kids?"

He didn't look up, hardly moved. He sniffled and shifted slightly, then responded in a barely audible voice. "I don't want to play with the other kids. I- I just don't..." He trailed off, head still rested against his knees, where small wet spots were now forming.

"Do you want to go home Jeffy?" she asked. He slowly nodded. "Alright, climb out from under there." He slowly complied, and when he was out his mother lifted him, cradled the small boy in her arms, his head against her shoulder, and they left the park.


Jeff shuddered, bringing himself back to the present. He had left the park all those years ago, sad, crying, held tightly by his mother, but feeling so alone. His whole life, he had had that feeling, deep in his stomach, the feeling that no matter what he was alone. When he was with people, he felt empty, devoid of any emotions. He shuddered again, trying to shake the terrible feeling clawing its way up from his gut, to wrap around him, tightening its embrace until he felt sick.

He thought about the merry-go-round, one of the few times he felt happy, felt alive at all. All of the sudden he felt a bit better, and he kept walking.
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Re: Character Development ( )

Postby LitomoSilver on Wed Mar 19, 2008 7:15 pm

Good, Ethan!

You still need to work a bit on the developing of the character.

But that's alright! We'll expand on that in the next assignment.

I did notice that you've left out a few things about Jeff's past. Again, we'll expand on that.

Veste, will you be expanding on the things we spoke of in AIM in the next assignment?

Or are you going to make us wait in suspense? :P

Students that aren't able to post on time needs to PM me, so that I know exactly what times/days you can submit the assignments. Matthias, I see that you're free on Tuesday. I'd like a post with everything up till now in this thread, please. You'll post two separate posts, in this thread. One for your character, the other the post describing your character's past.
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Re: Character Development ( )

Postby Matthias on Thu Mar 20, 2008 12:23 am

OOC; We'll see if I can't round somethin' up beforehand. This should suffice for one part. ^__~

Name; Vhanch Riddley
Age; 25
Sex; Male
City; Hope
Brief History; Only son and child of the married couple David Riddley and Mariah Riddley, both in their late 30's by the time he was born. Neither of the two amounted to much of anything, well, when compared to someone who was well known. They were the average and typical parents. Always worrying, caring, and striving to keep everything in one piece. The two had it rough, ironic when considering the cities name, yet they lived by the moment and loved passionately. Curious eyes at a young age tells him so. However, like most parents do, they had dreams for their prized child. And unlike other parents, they didn't step back to take the time and watch his interests, listen to his ideals and goals. Eventually David and Mariah came to live themselves through an aristocratic son. He grew to specialize in the piano, dress formally every day, constant nose in a book, and to set it off, like the next best thing, glasses.
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Re: Character Development ( )

Postby Soup on Fri Mar 21, 2008 7:13 pm

OOC: Sorry about the lateness. I'll get the second one up tomorrow.

Name: Sarah Crane
Age: 10
Sex: Female
City: Beachwood, California
Brief history: Youngest of two children, Sarah's life has been uneventful so far. Her parents are a bit too indulgent, and as a result Sarah is slightly spoiled. Her family moved to Southern California from Washington a few months ago.
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Re: Character Development ( )

Postby LitomoSilver on Fri Mar 21, 2008 11:22 pm

Good, good.

We will now expand more on our characters' past.

This means going further with what you've posted, adding more detail to the characters.

For example: If your character is conflicted and is still fighting within him/herself, you're to expand on that. Or if you don't have such a thing, expand more on your character's past, as in how he/she came to be where he/she is now. (Minimally, please.)
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Re: Character Development ( )

Postby Clyodna on Fri Mar 21, 2008 11:28 pm

So... is this assignment for everyone or just for the new arrivals?
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