In the year 2120, humans achieve city's away from earth, with the new ability to journey to other planets humans come closer to their dream of sailing the stars, however the human nations have little trust for each other, and many of the other colonies now are pushing for independence from earth, though this is not the end of the trouble, a alien race named the Meirion have invaded Human space and have declared war on the human race, with all this strife thieves fill the universe like lotcus.

Our story takes place with a group of thieves as they make their escape from a military facility, grabbing what they though to be weapons, little to their own knowledge they stole a advance AI, which can turnthe tides of war.
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The Characters(sorry I made them simple)

Name:Sunji Armano
Age:22
Height:6'4
Weight:180 LB
Hair:long black, put into a pony tail
Eyes:Hazel, kind
Clothes: aromored long coat(white), white t shirt, and black belted pants, Black buckle boots
Personality: a some what serious guy, he is know to make a few jokes, though he is also a bit too kind to be a thief, he takes on the older role of a theifs code, and acts much like a older brother to the crew, despite his young age.
Postion:Captain, Leader
History: unknown.
Player:codemonkey

Name:Jessica Weathers
Age:19
Height:5'9
Weight: 140 LB
Hair: medium bright red, messy
Eyes: Dark brown
Clothes: dark blue jacket with armored shirt(dark red), black gloves, and blue jean pants with white sneakers
Personality: loud, and strong, she never backs down, and has no fear saying most of her feelings, though when the subject comes to Sunji, she oftens seems to fall silent, but other wise she would have no problem speaking her mind.
Postion:Pilot
History:when she was seventeen she was attacked by several thugs on Mars, during the proccess Sunji stepped in and fought the thugs, but due to a unexpected event Sunji became injured, since that event she has stayed at Sunji's side aiding him on the Ryugen
Player:Katakat

Name:Kyle Burnash
Age: 20
Height:7'1
Weight:220 LB
Hair: short black
Eyes: light brown
Clothes: black sleevless shirt, cameo pants, and military boots
Personality: a joker, Kyle oftens jokes even in dangerous situations, though he knows when to be serious, Kyle is a kind man, who thinks that mabey the universe should talk things over a bit.
History: Kyle was once part of the United Earth Military, but left after only a month, wile wandering through space he met with Sunji and Jessica, and joined them, and since then the three have been thick as theives.
Postion:Gunner
Player:Lord Saladin

Name: Mei
Age:?(looks 20)
Height:5'8
Weight:120 LB
Hair:Long dark blue
Eyes:Dark blue
Clothes: a white tee, with fadded blue jeans and a red jacket, along with white sneakers
Personality: Curious, she ask many questions, she does not fully under stand the world, nor the people who she is now with.
Postion:Advanced AI, Navigation.
Player:
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The ship

Name:Ryugen
Class: Modified Transport
Info: this was once a Transport ship used by royals, and so has a strong outer shield, a electro-sheild, and a three lazer cannons, aswell a 40 auto turrets 400 cal.
number of rooms: 10
Command: Navigation, Ballistics, cannon, and stearing.
AI: Ryu
Player:NPC
(Given to Sunji by his father, will be revealed later)
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Races:
The Meirion: a snake like race the Meirion originate from a planet called Kuntha, they appear human but have many snake like qualitys, such as slit pupils, and scales that cover their body.

Starting: the start is that the crew of the Ryugen having escaped the military base, open a crate to find the bio-android Mei, who questions them about who they are and where she is, and who she is.

(its not much but I hope it works)

May I Play Jessica? :3

Can I play Mei?!? -bounces-

yes, you both can.
(sorry for not replying I forgot to pay my internet bill)

((It happens when can we start rping?))

(i'll do an intro post then everyone can start, as others come they can join in.)

scuffling across the metal floor of Ryu, sunji pushes a large box of what the team thinks is weapons.

The storage room on the Ryu is nearly empty only a few metal crates against the corner make it visible of use, the metal on the ship is worn and rusting, and without repairs will not survive another five years.
Sunji sits against the large box, the genetic lock glowing a soft green, breathing heavily he prepares for the struggle to open the box. 'Why am I the one to do this?' Sunji turning on his ship comm takes a deep breath before speaking, "Ryu, get as far from the base as possible!" the Ai of the ship does not reply but increases speed and changes direction.

'Now for this box' Sunji pulling a a plasma knife from his belt enables the blade on the Genetic detector, and with a swift move unseals the box, the whirling of a machine echoes in the room, as he puts away the knife, and kicks the lid open only to see Mei instead of weapons. "Well thats new, Ryu what am I looking at?" a floating camera comes from the ceiling and scans Mei Ryu;"I am sorry but I do not have this on my records." Sunji slowly takes Mei from the box and lays her on the floor, 'Not even a single knife.'

Slowly the andriod's eyes opened, and they scanned the room. Slowly she sat up, and looked at the man who was kneeling with his back to her. She rubbed one eye softly before she spoke hesitantly. "Who are you?"

Sunji snaps alert and looks to the android, " your operational?" quickly he corrects himself and turns completely to face Mei, " I am Sunji Armano, captain of the Ryugen, so what is your name, do you have one?" Sunji inches closer as the ship's Ai cam floats around Mei scanning for any weapons or possible threats.

Can i still join?
I can make my own character.


Name: Seth
Age: 18
Height: 6'0
Weight: 132 lb
Eyes: Dark brown.
Hair: Earlong red.
Clothes: All black sweater, black jeans and brown sneakers.
Personality: He is a little quiet, don't talk so much more than necessarly. He is also very smart, technical and inventor.
Position: Something with computers, technical stuff or similar.
Player: iggMaN

The Meirion commander shighed. He had invaded many human worlds, and his cruiser, the Razor, was resposible for the destruction of One of the Infdel Stations, Reach-Defense. He had heard from his most advanced inflitrators, that some sort of human "Device" was stolen. This ship, the medium cruiser, was going to investigate this. The Meirion Emnpire wold suceed, the Earth would be warmed, and the Queen Mother would enjoy bathing in the warmed over husks of the humans worlds. "Commander Exiliboa", a young ensign, barley molted, responded "What shall we do about this human artifact?" The Meirion thought, and said, "I shall deal with them... personaly. Have the Razor fueled, and make sure all fighters are prepared. I destroyed their finest cruisers at Reach, and I will..." he slighterd slightly: "Destroy this Device, myself..."
The rest of the crew ran around, preparing the cruiser to launch from the Mothership.

Meanwhile, in the Mothership, several drones were all surronding the Queen Mother, Serpentes. She had true knowldge of Humanity, as her current captive, Fleet Admarial Pace would tell her. The man's memories were foriclbly transfered through some sort of mental link, aand the Queen slowly learned of the plans of the AI. "This... could destroy us..." she said, as she reipped through the man's mind "Have the entire fleet find this WOMAN!" An image of Mei appared, the high commanders launching their fastest messnegerships to warn their feild commanders of this. The fate of humanity would lie on this pirate crew....

OOC: Just a quick question, anyone have am idea of how I am going to enter the story? Because, of what I have read, it seems that they are out in space, and it could be some difficulties entering then xD

hmm this is actually closed I think it didn't take off as first thought oh well that happens.

I'm guessing that's because you made players choose pre-made characters, and when I originally saw this topic, that was what turned me off participating. Add to that that you barely left any scope for other characters to join, and it's not surprising it failed.

As the resident mod around these here parts, I agree. I will close this topic in a few days, if the posters don't figure out a way to start this story somehow.

lets close I'm going to redo everything about it and come back sometime later with a better version.