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Lars slept fitfully. His dreams filled with winged creatures, dark and destructive. Everywhere he looked he found himself surrounded by a surging tide of fear. His faith challenged by the crawling demons of the vile pits, taunting him, chiding him for his failures as a knight, as a believer. Lars found himself face to face with seven resplendent knights astride mighty chargers. Their armor glowed and shimmered in the swirling ethereal mists that surrounded them.
Lars looked down at his own tattered armor, the sheen chipped away by years of combat. His hooded tunic worn, ragged and faded from years of constant wear. His once great steed, as tired as the knight who sat perched atop him. Lars faced the seven gleaming knights across a great wide field, the winds caressed the favors hung on the lances and spears that rested lightly couched in the arms of their bearers.
Lars peered through his great helm, blackened by the years, stained with blood from countless battles. Dented and imperfect, like the man who wore it. Hefting his simple shield and leveling his long spear at the seven who stood before him, Lars trotted lightly towards them. The seven knights returned the gesture and began their ride. The distance slowly eaten up, the mounts increasing their speeds until both Lars and the seven were at a full gallop.
The rush of the wind through the slits in his great helm whistled a screech not unlike the fabled banshees. The thudding of the heavy hooves impacting the earth, jarring Lars teeth, rattling his bones. The looming knights closing, their lances and spears pointed at Lars. Their voices ringing in his head "You are naught but a shadow of our glory. You are naught but a pale imitation of we."
As they collided together Lars woke in a sweat, his voice echoing as he cried out "By strength of my steel I am your equal! I AM YOUR EQUAL!"
Those in the tavern stopped. The normal sounds of jovial conversation and laughter had slowed and stopped as the thrashing of the knight in the common room became louder, until his cries filled the silence.
Lars sat up, his eyes wide as he looked about. His face flush as he ran a hand across his face. He was drenched with sweat. Looking from the gloom of his sleeping corner he watched those in the tavern. Some held concern, others contempt, yet others still prayed silently as they watched him.
A weak smiled crossed Lars' lips as he nodded and curled up in his tunic and tried to return to sleep.
"Goddess, I pray just this night...let me slumber in your embrace, free of the dreams that plague me."
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