Glimpse of Heaven

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Glimpse of Heaven ( )

Postby #Chance on Fri Dec 30, 2011 11:53 pm

Authors note: Wow, second poem to produce. I'm a lyrical machine as of lately so don't except me to stop anytime soon. I also plan to possible make a showcase thread with all my poems so i don't over flood this section with just my work.
Authors note: Would love some CnC.
Inspiration: Relaxing Piano Music - My Dreams by Kathleen Spence.


A Glimpse of Heaven.
Watch the light, watch the show;
Watch how the fireflies glow,
Watch the rain, hear the wind,
A soft caress across your skin.

See the sea, see the moon,
See the flowers in full bloom.
Feel the warmth, feel the air.
Feel the smile creep light and fair.

Feel his touch, feel his grasp.
Feel the peace while it lasts.
Lean on him, touch his lips.
Touch his heart, feel the bliss.

Drink the scene, drink the joy.
Hold the stars, hug your boy.
Sniff the scent, lick the dark,
While the firefly lights a spark.

Watch the night, watch the stars.
The moon, the sea, the firefly dance.
Drink the beauty, drink the life.
It’s you and me in paradise.

by #Chance
Last edited by #Chance on Sat Dec 31, 2011 12:03 am, edited 2 times in total.
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The Rainbow Phantasm
A child B o r n o f t h e S u n is something [NO MAN] may grasp
For his H e a r t burns with the ambivalence of an U n c o m i n g D a w n

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Don't try to tell me awesome p o w e r can corrupt a person,
You haven't had enough to know what it's like.
You're just upset because you [ wish ] you were in my position.
Now nod your head because you know that I'm right.

J E H R I C O |Dystopian Crusader| F A U S T
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Re: Glimpse of Heaven ( )

Postby ViceVersus on Fri Dec 30, 2011 11:59 pm

Hey there, #Chance. Nice to hear from you again.

Thanks for posting in the Creative Realm, first of all! Activity in here is always good to see.

There's something oddly soothing about the rhyming in your poem, here. And the images take me away from a cold, pale winter in Michigan to somewhere a bit nicer, a bit warmer, someplace that actually is cool and sweet. It actually makes me miss the boyfriend a lot, haha. And it makes me miss walking on the beach!

Sure does sound like paradise .. way to convey that. :/

I'd recommend editing those [url][/url] tags outta there. Besides that, great post! Thanks for sharing!
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Re: Glimpse of Heaven ( )

Postby #Chance on Sat Dec 31, 2011 12:04 am

I didn't even notice that Sato, thank you so much for your comment. Plan to post as much as possible and I wish you all a happy new year from Australia.
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