Looking for a fight, any kind welcome. I'd kinda like to keep it a little low key though, keep it under higher manipulations.

Rules:
No Auto hits/kills
Anything goes.

I'll be using Haze, profile below.... And I just took it straight off of my other site, so it's not edited for less content, etc. Save for the abilites. I'll list some of them.


" The Fallen Divinal. "

«Info»

~Name~
Haze

~Age~
*He has Been Alive Nearly As Long As The Almighty One Himself.*

~Race~
Formely Angel Of Death
Now
Fallen Divinal

~Eye Color~
Deep Crimson

~Hair Color~
Black

~Hair Style~
Short

~Height~
5 feet 8 inches

~Weight~
135 pounds

~Alliegence~
The Fallen

~Allignment~
Tis A Very Good Question

~Class~
Warrior/Ninja

~Group~
Bleak (/whois Bleak)
Mitsui (/whois Mitsui)
Darkdemon (/whois Darkdemon)

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«Weapons»

~Ebony~

Summary - Ebony Is A Katana That Is Famous In The Afterlife. It Is Said To Be Endowed With The Power To Take Souls And Cause Mass Explosions. This Is True, Whatever It's Main Attack Cuts, Loses Its Soul, Otherwise It's A Normal Sword. Also The Main Attack Cause Great Explosions. There Is Much More This Blade Can Do, But Its Potential Has Yet To Be Unlocked.

Description : A Long Black Blade, Simple And Easy. Its Handle Is Black, Bound In Rotten Human Flesh. The Sheath Is Also Black, But Bound In A Slightly More Traditional Way. The Sheath Is Black Oak, A Wood Found In Most Forests.

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~Sacriligious~

Summary - Sacriligious Is The More Ostentaeneous One In Haze's Arsenal. Standing At A Total Of Seven Feet Five Inches, Sacriligious Is Most Easily The Largest Weapon He Has. Bound In Chains So As To Keep Its True Side Under Wraps As Much As Possible. It Was The Blade Of A Very Powerful Demon, And It Now Holds The Demons Soul, Which Gives It A Random Personality. And So, It Is Bound In The Chains, And Bolted To Haze's Back, The Bolts Hold Magical Sealing Properties, And Drill Right Into His Shoulder Blades. Its Magic Is Unknown Because Of Its Random Personality.

Description : A Large Blade, Its Size Alone Is Enough To Send Chills Up Your Spine. It Is Bound IN Chains, And Never Leaves Haze's Back. It Has No Sheath, And A Simple Black Hilt, The Hilt Being Bound In Demons Hair. A Simple Silver Blade. It Weighs Close To Half A Ton.

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~Chains Of Twisted Fate~

Summary - These Chains Were Given To Haze By The Demon Who Had Spoken To After His Fall From Grace. The Origin Of These Chains Are Unknown, But Some Say They Came From The Sisters Of Fate, Others Say It Was A Random Happening Under The Nose Of God.

Description : The Chains Are A Simple Dull Silvery, Gray In Color. Spiraling Up And Down Either Arm, And Containing A Kunai Shaped Weapon On The End For Offensive Attacks. There Is Some Magic, But I'll Leave This One For Mystery.

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«Small/Sidearms»

~Kunai~ x15
~Small Shuriken~ x15
~Paper Bombs~ x5
~Diamond Wire~ x50 ft
~Senbon~ x15
~Flash Bombs~ x5
~Flares~ x10

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«Abilities»

Element Manipulation
Biokinesis
Chakra Manipulation


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«History»

Nothing Much To Tell, An Rp May Reveal Much To You. Think You Can Handle It?

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«Haze's Description»

Haze Appears To Be Very Clumsy, If Not Un-Coordinated, Most Of The Time. His Attire Is Simple, A Red Jester Hat, Little Bells On All Fours Corners, A Crimson Face Mask That Covers The Lower Part Of His Face, All The Way Up To The Middle Of His Nose. His Other Clothing Is Fairly Simple, A Black Muscle Shirt, And A Pair Of Black Cargo Pants With Chains Hanging All Around. On His Arms, Chanins Spiral Up And Down, At The Top Attached To Bolts That Are Drilled Into His Shoulder Bones. A "G" Tatoo On His Arm. On His Back Are Two Blades, Ebony And Sacriligious. Ebony Is A Simple Katana, Bound In Black, And Sacriligious Is An Ostentaeneous, Large Sword That Stands At A Height Greater Than His Own. It Is Bound In Chains, And Bolted To His Back, Via The Shoulder Blades. A Pair Of Simple Black Boots Adorn His Feet.

The whole sidearm equipment kind of throws this off from any sort of angel, even death itself. As, I'm sure, none were raised in the Leaf Village. >_>

Ebony sword or, katana, seems to void the whole "I'd kinda like to keep it a little low key though" aspect of things. Not sure if you thought this all the way through, but based on a mere skim, I'm going to say - No.

~Allignment~
Tis A Very Good Question

This character had to fall for some reason, so I'm sure he's not "Good" or "Neutral", unless you just like these sort of contradictory terms. >_>

«Abilities»

Element Manipulation
Biokinesis
Chakra Manipulation

Again, I'm sure the vague description on your part leaves this entirely too open and does cross a line if you're wanting to keep it "low key".

So, while I'm done taring that shit apart, how about you brush up your profile to fit your own standards, rather than be a lazy fellow and throw something out that is sloppy. Also, get rid of all those capitols; hell, that was the main reason I "trolled" (as I know it'll come to that) your post here. Seriously though, answer me this;

There is already an "An Open Spar" thread looking to do a one on one combat, and yet, I get the feeling you didn't even bother to check there. I mean, unless you were one of the three before my view, as it only has four. So, why post another ridiculous thread to take up space with garbage? >_>

Aside from that, though, I hope you can find someone to compete against in "Who can touch the other guy the most and still say they're not homosexual!" at the end! Good luck to you! ^ - ^

Man, i'd have to say that is the first time anyone has ever ripped on any of my profiles.
I'm not going to get all pissy about it though, as criticism was expected, cause i'm kinda new here. So, thanks for the critism, I suppose.

I can understand how you see Ebony as above 'low key', and it's true. Ebony was designed for the site I came from.

The Allignment thing, I wasn't sure what insubordination fell under, so I didn't choose anything.

Abilities, the broad terms are used to cover the basics, perhaps I should have put something like the basics there.

As for the 'Open Spar' room, I did look in there, didn't join because, I do believe it's more than one person fighitng, i'm more for the 1v1 fights myself.

Again, thanks for the criticism, and I may just rake over my profile and add more to it, fix it up a little bit. But, I think i'll stray away from that last room, not my kind of place.

I'll do it, if this forum is still open, I'll use Naruto.