rain is falling.
The sun is gone-
Masked behind
Those clouds.
It drips endlessly
From the roof
To the gutter
And then slowly…
To the ground.
I don’t really…
Know why.
But in my reflection
I don’t see me.
I see you.
The day you walked
Down that road
Past the trees…
Oft past the hills.
There was no light
To cast my shadow.
So instead I have yours
As but a memory.
If you existed
I would not know-
For all I have
Are the tears
Which fall
From my eyes
Down my cheeks
And then at last…
To this locket I hold.
I don’t really…
Know why.
But I keep it
To remember.
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Re: Imaginary ( )
by ViceVersus on Mon Dec 05, 2011 5:54 pm
Hey again! xD
I'm getting a sense that you like working with the elements. They're elegant symbols; accessible, and yet power-packed with meaning. I'm trying to look at this one separate from Just Kidding, but considering the relationship between fire and water, I'm having a hard time separating the two.
Have you ever tried writing emblematic poetry? Your work here might suit the shape of a teardrop well. With some fancy BBcoding you could get it looking pretty fantastic. It's not necessary of, of course, but it would serve as a supplement for what's already posted here.
Ah, the "you" in poetry .. what an all-encopassing term.
Thanks for posting!
-Sato
I'm getting a sense that you like working with the elements. They're elegant symbols; accessible, and yet power-packed with meaning. I'm trying to look at this one separate from Just Kidding, but considering the relationship between fire and water, I'm having a hard time separating the two.
Have you ever tried writing emblematic poetry? Your work here might suit the shape of a teardrop well. With some fancy BBcoding you could get it looking pretty fantastic. It's not necessary of, of course, but it would serve as a supplement for what's already posted here.
Ah, the "you" in poetry .. what an all-encopassing term.
Thanks for posting!
-Sato
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Re: Imaginary ( )
by Curiose on Wed Dec 21, 2011 4:24 am
Thank you very much for your response!
I apologize that it took me so long to respond. Life and other things got in the way. I never actually thought about it as being elemental... that's definitely a new way of looking at it.
I will certainly pass on the favor. : 3
I apologize that it took me so long to respond. Life and other things got in the way. I never actually thought about it as being elemental... that's definitely a new way of looking at it.
I will certainly pass on the favor. : 3
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