I'm assuming you forgot to put half-elves up there. I hope you did, cause it would be a bummer to redo my whole sheet.
Anyway...
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Loche Stratien (Lock Straight-ian)
Biography: Loche was born in a monestary in a remote valley far from heavily populated areas. His mother was a traveler, an human whose father went from town to village and sold/bought what he could to stay alive. When they were attacked by goblins heading into the valley, Loche's father, a elven monk, led a rescue and saved her and most of her family and friends. As her family moved on, she decided to stay with the monks, and as the monestary technically had no laws against marriage, she became the monk's wife.
Loche was born soon after, and grew up under the strict disciplines of the monestary's occupants. However, he did not resent being born into such a lifestyle, on the contrary he reveled in it's subtle ways of life and application of wisdom. He spent everyday in the monotonous routine of a monk, and was taught to focus his mind to reject all distractions and temptations, as well as harden his body to resist sickness and physical danger.
As part of Loche's official initiation into the monestary's Brotherhood, he had to choose to live under a vow of sacrifice. What these vows entailed were usually up to the individual monk so long as the Fathers approved, and ranged from a vow of silence and chastity to servitude and chivalry. Loche chose a vow of pilgrimage, to never rest, nor set foot on the land of his birth until he had obtained true enlightenment through his travels. The Fathers approved, and Loche set forth shorty after.
Personality: Loche is quiet, reserved, and meek. He will rarely speak to others unless spoken to, and never impose himself on annother's kindness. However, his silence in the face of kindness gives others the impression that he is rude and ungrateful, and will generally cause many missunderstandings.
His monistic lifestyle is a farcry from how the rest of the world acts: his day to day life is very regimented, eating, sleeping, and meditating at very presice times of the day. In addition to this, all monks of his order are sworn to poverty as well as non-agressiveness (With the exception of monks like his father who take a vow a chivalry). He will not harm any living creature unless it is in self defence.
Appearance: Loche has light brown eyes and bright copper hair that is maintained at about an 2 inches long. He is well built, and maintains his physique through daily excercise as well as sparring combat whenever he gets the chance. His clothes are normally grey and haggard, but still sturdy and form fitting. He will normally wrap his hands and feet in cloth, and will always wear a monk's robe given to him by his order, which is white with a hood and opens down the front.