Life's Only Fun When Large...

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Life's Only Fun When Large... ( )

Postby Imagine That! on Wed Jun 22, 2011 9:34 am

Just something comedic!




My darling love,
remove that glove,
that covers your masculine hand.
Then off comes the top,
your belly will flop,
you may need a gastric band!

Wobbling around,
your hands touch the ground,
as your trousers are slowly removed.
So uncomfortable you are,
this tease going too far,
and your moves anything but smooth!

Now almost bare,
I can't help but stare,
at just how stunning you are.
My pot-bellied man,
with a large love for ham,
darling, our love will go far!

♥ Life's not the amount of breaths you take; it's the moments that take your breath away. ♥

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Re: Life's Only Fun When Large... ( )

Postby ViceVersus on Sat Dec 31, 2011 12:02 am

Haha, I got a kick out of this. Was definitely mislead by the title.

This is my favorite kind of poetry, honestly. When the words and the meanings have fun with themselves, when it's less about torturous baring of one's soul, and more about just celebrating life and it's peculiarities.

Sorry that it took me so long to write something up about this! Hope all is well!

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Re: Life's Only Fun When Large... ( )

Postby Imagine That! on Sat Dec 31, 2011 9:27 am

Haha thank you :) it was just something fun that I made up in English literature - we were asked to do a poem on a strip tease!
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Re: Life's Only Fun When Large... ( )

Postby ViceVersus on Sat Dec 31, 2011 12:39 pm

.. o.o Wow, is that ever an interesting prompt. Haha.
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Re: Life's Only Fun When Large... ( )

Postby Spiral Thoughts on Sat Dec 31, 2011 7:08 pm

Aww, how darling! It is very honest. It promotes universal acceptance and bespeaks acceptance of the speaker.

That is a strange prompt; I prefer strange prompts. =P

Also you get mad points for your Jensen Ackles / Dean Winchester avatar!

I was also mislead by the title but I felt that was sort of the point. =]

The flow is a little off here and there, at least by my reading. Nothing major!

I am more a poet of social issues, but I find positive and silly poems to be equally important to the grand scheme of art (poems about one's supposedly tortured soul. . .mmm, not so much)!
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