a love/horror story? opinions wanted.

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a love/horror story? opinions wanted. ( )

Postby ImmortalEcstasy on Tue Aug 31, 2010 4:48 am

I was trailing my computer and i found a passage i wrote as part of my english coursework when i was still in school, and i can't remember how i intended it but it enthralls me now.
so i thought "i'll see what the RPG folk think." If i get people that can post regularly and won't let it die, (or atleast, know CPR...) that we could have a nice little RP on our hands... fantasy, realistic, futuristic.

I honestly don't mind. So... um... it's not my usual writing style, like a say it was for coursework so it had to be written the way it is, which was two years ago... anyways... *hem-hem*


The full moon glows through the grasping whirls of smoke, its light fighting to pass through the empty branches of many leaning trees, capturing the light and swallowing it into a zebras stripes against the dirt pathway.
The path, a scar in the otherwise wild scenery, leads to a vast circular lake, the moon light bouncing of the once white pebbles that brim over the black water, its only feature is the odd ripple caused by a chilled wind.
Standing at the bridge between path and pebbles is a figure, head to toe in the perfect camouflage of night. His black coat has large collars, large buttons. His hands are buried deep in its age old pockets, one hand withdraws, drawing with it the unnatural shape of a box. He draws out a cigarette and places it in-between perfectly carved lips, full and beautiful.
He places the streamline pocket back into his pocket and withdraws another rectangle, this one the colour of foreign seas. The pulls down and a flame protrudes from the colour. Lighting the cigarette. He breaths out a swirl of thick smoke, which snakes up and away. He draws on his cigarette, the next breath bringing out slower, darker smoke.
He tips his head back and watches the smoke leave with alert eyes, they reflect the green tinge of the pebbles, shine back the light of the sun and the fathomless black of the lake... all reflected back in those flickering eyes, framed with the sparse branches of delicate blonde eyelashes.
His hair is unnaturally dark, cut into a delicate fringe.
The intoxicating smoke disperses into the air, spreading wide. When he can no longer draw poison from it, he throws the remaining butt of the cigarette into the already polluted waters. It ripples at it and consumes it, sending off the light of the moon in perfect circles.

Finally, she arrives...
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Re: a love/horror story? opinions wanted. ( )

Postby lilozzy on Sat Sep 11, 2010 6:15 pm

Wow... just wow!
Even though its a "snippet", I think it's really good and you could make a good role-play from it.
Maybe a onexone or something.... Can't wait to see if you do something with it!
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Re: a love/horror story? opinions wanted. ( )

Postby mummydove on Sat Sep 11, 2010 7:58 pm

I can't think of what it could be for a roleplay at the moment, but it sounds really good for one and interesting.
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Re: a love/horror story? opinions wanted. ( )

Postby ImmortalEcstasy on Mon Jan 03, 2011 12:03 pm

So hello lilozzy, mummydove. I know this was posted a long time ago but I have a vague idea for it now.
I;m not sure about the time it's set in, but I'm thinking it's an AU where we have the technology of perhaps 50 years ago, but the AU is much less populated just so the wood/forest feels a lot more distant and empty perhaps with scary scary animals in there or whatever.

Anyway, the idea is that 'She' has just lost her partner, (in the AU humans are like penguins, mate for life solid true loveness) Our male figure was his very best friend and she plans to kill herself, which has similar religeous views of this universe that she will be trapped in fire and brimstone forever.
If he kills her for her then he will be sent to this place but she will go on to meet her love in the afterlife. It will probably only be a page long if written well but hopefully it will be memorable.

Would either of you two like to be he or she?

If you have any idea's at all that could go towards this, including another setting or character even the girl being inhuman I don't mind, I would love to hear them. I'm going to message Aslin aswell as I love RPing with her.
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Re: a love/horror story? opinions wanted. ( )

Postby Aslin on Tue Jan 04, 2011 8:52 am

It is a well written piece and I think the idea is interesting and hopefully we can go more than a page haha
I'm definitely in. Just let me know how you would like to go about starting it off! And happy new year all : )
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Re: a love/horror story? opinions wanted. ( )

Postby ImmortalEcstasy on Tue Jan 04, 2011 4:53 pm

So this is my idea, I know it's not technically specifying anything, but isn't imagination the point of this site?:
The End.


T he full moon glows through the grasping whirls of smoke, its light fighting to pass through the empty branches of many leaning trees, capturing the light and swallowing it into a zebras stripes against the dirt pathway.
The path, a scar in the otherwise wild scenery, leads to a vast circular lake, the moon light bouncing of the once white pebbles that brim over the black water, its only feature is the odd ripple caused by a chilled wind.
Standing at the bridge between path and pebbles is a figure, head to toe in the perfect camouflage of night. His black coat has large collars, large buttons. His hands are buried deep in its age old pockets, one hand withdraws, drawing with it the unnatural shape of a box. He draws out a cigarette and places it in-between perfectly carved lips, full and beautiful.
He places the streamline pocket back into his pocket and withdraws another rectangle, this one the colour of foreign seas. The pulls down and a flame protrudes from the colour. Lighting the cigarette. He breaths out a swirl of thick smoke, which snakes up and away. He draws on his cigarette, the next breath bringing out slower, darker smoke.
He tips his head back and watches the smoke leave with alert eyes, they reflect the green tinge of the pebbles, shine back the light of the sun and the fathomless black of the lake... all reflected back in those flickering eyes, framed with the sparse branches of delicate blonde eyelashes.
His hair is unnaturally dark, cut into a delicate fringe.
The intoxicating smoke disperses into the air, spreading wide. When he can no longer draw poison from it, he throws the remaining butt of the cigarette into the already polluted waters. It ripples at it and consumes it, sending off the light of the moon in perfectcircles.

Finally, she arrives...


It's 2946AD, and the world is reaching it's close. There was no sudden pop and everything disappeared. It's not like you read about. It was slow, it started the day life formed. It started with that spark, that bang, that creation.
It started with a fire, and it ended with the final embers flickering out and turning cold. It doesn't matter how, all that matters is that those final embers are still cooling. There is still life on that lonely rock that magically came to life.

And the world needs a new spark.





When I post it up I think i'm going to have a 6 people limit and have two established groups of three, one including the boy from the extract and one containing the girl who knew each other before the world really feel apart and are meeting up agian but the rest of the groups dont trust the others at first or something. sex/age is okay, will even accept other races and such. I'm hoping to have an OOC/SU up for it some time in the very near furture, as in perhaps in the next few hours. xx
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Re: a love/horror story? opinions wanted. ( )

Postby ImmortalEcstasy on Wed Jan 05, 2011 4:00 pm

AAAAAAAAAAAND.
The End.
Here it is, OOC and SU. :)

A little bit more vague detail in there, (Sorry I'm useless at that kind of thing)
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