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Re: Submit your writings!

Thanks for the praise and thank you even more so for the criticism! First off, as per request and to return the favor, I registered an account at wetpaint. Regessing back to me, I knew about my tense mistakes, but it wasn't until rereading it after your remarks did I realize the extend of my trouble...
by Tramp
on Sat Jan 26, 2008 3:34 pm
 
Forum: Writing
Topic: Submit your writings!
Replies: 35
Views: 888

Re: Submit your writings!

Hey, guys and gals! Since submitting writing seems to be the new cool thing to do, here's a piece of doodles I started writing a few days back. It's part of something bigger, hopefully, but I've been kind of lazy and more or less abandoned it after the first draft. I'm sure it's not perfect, but bei...
by Tramp
on Wed Jan 23, 2008 5:08 pm
 
Forum: Writing
Topic: Submit your writings!
Replies: 35
Views: 888

Re: Places To Roleplay

I've been roleplaying with http://www.evernight.com since 2002 and previously with monarchy...which is no longer in action... So Evernight get's my vote for best... no offense... :P I figure the validity of these links are important enough to mention here. I traveled across countless world through ...
by Tramp
on Thu Nov 29, 2007 10:14 am
 
Forum: Out of Character
Topic: Places To Roleplay
Replies: 89
Views: 9758

Re: Hello...

Oh! With the military? You have my sincere welcome and my respect. I know and knew several mates who were transferred to the desert; while I don’t truly know what it feels over there, I have my harsh imaginations. Take it easy and enjoy the community. I’m rather new here myself, and between you and ...
by Tramp
on Thu Nov 29, 2007 9:58 am
 
Forum: Welcome Desk: Introductions, Arrivals, and Departures
Topic: Hello...
Replies: 11
Views: 327

Re: The Twilight Blade

I'm still waiting for the next installment of the adventure, buddy. :P
I'll hold my thoughts this time about too, if you prefer.
by Tramp
on Tue Nov 27, 2007 3:29 pm
 
Forum: Growth
Topic: The Twilight Blade
Replies: 4
Views: 345

Re: Hi

Hey, Vigil! Welcome to the site, as I'm sure you've heard. More importantly, is what I heard and I heard great things about you! To such a great individual, I pose a conundrum--a riddle, if you will: How does one merit the epic contest score of -1 point? That is an admirable, legendary feat; in all ...
by Tramp
on Mon Nov 26, 2007 9:30 am
 
Forum: Welcome Desk: Introductions, Arrivals, and Departures
Topic: Hi
Replies: 23
Views: 380

Re: The Weather Today is Perfect (All Welcome)

Well, I took your advice and stepped my character outside to look at the stars, and I must say! Quite a telling sight. The weather was perfect--wonderfully, unspeakably perfect. Not much for peace and solitude, however, as destiny may. Gone. That’s how it usually ends. With a bitter taste of frustr...
by Tramp
on Sat Nov 24, 2007 11:01 pm
 
Forum: The Multiverse (Persistent World)
Topic: The Weather Today is Perfect (All Welcome)
Replies: 10
Views: 497

Re: Olivia, Once Upon a Time (feedback plzz)

Wow, this was honestly a lot more praise than I was expecting. I do thank you both, very much so, for the kind words. I wouldn't have minded the commendations to be a bit more harsher, tad more critical though. And I don't dabble much in the high school genre of writing (referring to literature abou...
by Tramp
on Sat Nov 24, 2007 6:29 pm
 
Forum: Growth
Topic: Olivia, Once Upon a Time (feedback plzz)
Replies: 4
Views: 308

Olivia, Once Upon a Time (feedback plzz)

This is the rough draft, and pretty much the final draft unless I get some assistance (cough), of my compare and contrast, academic styled essay assignment. Feedback is very much appreciated, especially any type of critical criticism. I'm cheap; even a "U SUCK!!" comment will make my day....
by Tramp
on Sat Nov 24, 2007 3:32 pm
 
Forum: Growth
Topic: Olivia, Once Upon a Time (feedback plzz)
Replies: 4
Views: 308

Re: Laptop stolen

Bathrooms are like a theivery paradise. This one time, I was sitting on the pot, doing my thing. Which happened to be a number two, because that's the only reason guys every sit on the pot--or should be. This is probably a case of too much information already. Anyways, so I was sitting there, in a p...
by Tramp
on Sat Nov 24, 2007 11:56 am
 
Forum: Welcome Desk: Introductions, Arrivals, and Departures
Topic: Laptop stolen
Replies: 24
Views: 426

Re: Rhys Baik- The master of puppets.

I'll start off my comment by being a complete ass to the foreigner. For a dude going on, perhaps allegedly so, to middle age, you sure have trouble pinpointing spots when you ought to hold down the shift key. That's talking about your character's profile, mind you. I'm sure it wasn't intentional, of...
by Tramp
on Sat Nov 24, 2007 11:41 am
 
Forum: Character Journals
Topic: Rhys Baik- The master of puppets.
Replies: 3
Views: 288

Re: Discussion:Mordheim - The City of the Damned

I am Tramp. I was instructed to proceed to this thread and quote "do my thing". Right. Anyways, so let me tell yall a story that in no way relates to this actual thread but in some unforeseen plot twist, it will relate: Once upon a time, a man was fishing. Except he wrecked his wee fishing...
by Tramp
on Fri Nov 23, 2007 2:11 pm
 
Forum: Main Lobby
Topic: Discussion:Mordheim - The City of the Damned
Replies: 58
Views: 8946

Re: North Carolina RPGateway Gathering

Tramp, I read your post a few times, but wasn't able to come up with whether you wanted to join in on the meeting or not. I know you mentioned where you live and all, but would you consider hopping in on our get together? =D Although I love any chance to meet strangers, especially ones with candy a...
by Tramp
on Fri Nov 23, 2007 1:40 pm
 
Forum: Main Lobby
Topic: North Carolina RPGateway Gathering
Replies: 30
Views: 538

Re: The Twilight Blade

Here's a warning about my style of 'creative' criticism. It tends to be harsh as possible without being dead right insulting--or blatantly, dead right insulting at least. Moreover, I speak with the experience of a reader. Between you and me, that's not saying much. So, don't go thinking everything o...
by Tramp
on Fri Nov 23, 2007 1:18 pm
 
Forum: Growth
Topic: The Twilight Blade
Replies: 4
Views: 345

Re: Writing Tips from an Education Course

Although this comment is nearly a year belated, I would like to mention that poor Lois Lowry forgot to place a title with her book. ;)
by Tramp
on Thu Nov 22, 2007 5:23 pm
 
Forum: Growth
Topic: Writing Tips from an Education Course
Replies: 9
Views: 1396

Re: RPA: Azmodai2 and Tramp

Ooo. You know, I kinda just realized something, and I would like to withdraw my last few paragraphs of comments. If that is possible.
by Tramp
on Thu Nov 22, 2007 10:07 am
 
Forum: Role Play Academy
Topic: RPA: Azmodai2 and Tramp
Replies: 4
Views: 172

Re: North Carolina RPGateway Gathering

Y'know the feeling you get after reading a chain of responses and you realized that, obviously, some very intimate discussion on stuff was going. You don't know what to say, because just about anything would totally spoil the moment... and you just cannot choose which interjection would spoil the mo...
by Tramp
on Thu Nov 22, 2007 9:58 am
 
Forum: Main Lobby
Topic: North Carolina RPGateway Gathering
Replies: 30
Views: 538

Re: So he was like "Dude." and I was like "Dude!"

Thank yall kindly for the warm feelings. Rest assured, the love is mutual. :D
by Tramp
on Thu Nov 22, 2007 9:35 am
 
Forum: Welcome Desk: Introductions, Arrivals, and Departures
Topic: So he was like "Dude." and I was like "Dude!"
Replies: 10
Views: 272

Re: RPA: Azmodai2 and Tramp

In regards to RPA standards: …uh what? While I don’t know what qualifications are considered in these standards, I do have the common sense to know that’s a compliment—however undeserved. And for which, you have my thanks. As well, I’m sure the compliment honestly wasn’t implying that you’re…um… no...
by Tramp
on Wed Nov 21, 2007 12:20 am
 
Forum: Role Play Academy
Topic: RPA: Azmodai2 and Tramp
Replies: 4
Views: 172

Re: RPA: Azmodai2 and Tramp

No worries. I had some troubles of my own, so the timing worked out. Shit. Yup, that’s definitely shit. He groaned in the back of his mind as he was dragged through the alleyway into sobriety. A list of nice things was what made Henry wake up in the mornings. His left eye being caked shut as a love...
by Tramp
on Sat Nov 10, 2007 5:35 pm
 
Forum: Role Play Academy
Topic: RPA: Azmodai2 and Tramp
Replies: 4
Views: 172
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