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Re: Naruto: The Unhidden Village ( )

Postby Demon King Jace on Sat Nov 28, 2009 10:08 am

Yay! Back from holiday! *Insert fanfare here*

Anyways, It looks like I've missed out on a lot, so I'll just read through the IC and see where I can fit my character back in.

Edit: I just finished reading the IC and the OOC (shoulda done that first) and it seems things got a little spastic and I really need someone to explain what the current situation is to me. From what I can gather in my current state of mind, I need a bio (If I don't already have one, not sure >_>).

Also does my character still fit in with all these things that have gone on and been explained further. Because I've seen a ton of character editing going on (complete understatement). So yea, I'll write up a bio now, but I don't think I'll get another IC post up untill someone can explain this all to me in small words. Oh! Before I forget, does my first IC post work with the plot?

Bloody hell, this is so confusing my mind has freaking blown sky high. *explodes dramatically*

Edit Edit: Bio is now done. Hopefully it's ok and doesn't harm the plot (which I can't seem to make sense of at the moment). So yeah, just tell me if everything is all good and explain to me what the frig is going on and then I'll get right back into the whole IC aspect of things.
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Re: Naruto: The Unhidden Village ( )

Postby Gabriel_Whist on Sat Nov 28, 2009 5:51 pm

Jace your bio is great, the kind of thing I was hoping for, it fits in fine with the plot and still gives your character a very unique background. From your bio at least, it sounds like you understand the plot. What are you confused about?
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Re: Naruto: The Unhidden Village ( )

Postby Huchiama on Sun Nov 29, 2009 12:27 am

Ummm, I added something new to my bio, so that i could kinda stay on the same track that I was on, I hope its okay b/c I jut threw it together and posted it.
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Re: Naruto: The Unhidden Village ( )

Postby Demon King Jace on Sun Nov 29, 2009 4:53 am

I was just confused about which posts in the IC to disregard and which to base my own posts on. But I think I've made sense of it, so I'll have a post up soon.
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Re: Naruto: The Unhidden Village ( )

Postby Ceur'Caelesetos on Mon Nov 30, 2009 5:41 am

My Characters:

Name: Yumiko Tategishin
Nickname: Yumi
Age: 15
Village of Birth: Village Hidden with the Lions
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TOOLS/ABILITIES
Kekkai Genkai:None, even though she is the heiress of the Tategishin Kekkai Genkai she has no trace of the ability that her family has.
Alliance: none
Rank: Genin
Jutsus: Basic genin level jutsus: Transformation, Substitution, Cloning, Chakra Control, and Heat wave mirage(genjutsu)
Tools: Basic ninja supplies: Kunais, Shurikens, food pills
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PHYSICAL INFORMATION
Appearance:
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Hair: Long Pink usually in a pony tail
Eyes: Blue
Skin Tone: Well tanned from the constant sun of her home
Scars/Tattoos: She has the symbol of the Tategishin clan (a runic circle with a triangle inside) on her right shoulder.
Piercings: None
Height: 5' 6"
Weight: 115 lbs
Strengths: She is strong with genjutsus and chakra controling. She is also good at the Fire Dance Village special Taijutsu, which consists of making the foe harm themselves using the least amount of effort.
Weaknesses: She isn't good against those who aren't affected by Genjutsus, She also is weak in most ninjutsus.
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PERSONALITY:
Fears:She is afraid of the dark and cold, like most in her village. She is also fearful of her younger brother who already(at age 6) has developed the Tategishin Kekkai Genkai. She is also afraid of large bodies of water.
Likes:Ice Cream, Training, winning against those with Kekkai Genkai, she also secretly likes Shinori Sutachi.
Dislikes:Those who flaunt their abilities that they were merely born with. She also dislikes using brute force, sense it doesn't require finesse
Bio: Yumiko was born to the wealthy and world renowned Tategishin family. She was the heir apparent of this clan. The Village expected greatness from her because she was supposed to have the purest form of the Tategishin. However she never developed the Kekkai Genkai her clan was known for. She was then treated by most of the Village as a let down.

Her father however believed that she would be a great shinobi even without the Kekkai Genkai. He helped her train after classes. He taught her the Fire Dance Taijutsu before she was a genin, which is a difficult form to master even for chunin. She learned it abnormally fast. He also taught her the Heat Wave Mirage Genjutsu which she has also mastered. She loved learning new jutsus but ninjutsus were just tougher for her.

She was pleasantly surprised when she ranked high enough in the village to be sent to the Village Unhidden. Along the way she has become friends with Shinori Sutachi.



Name: Shinori Sutachi
Nickname: Shin
Age: 13
Village of Birth: Village Hidden with the Lions
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TOOLS/ABILITIES
Kekkai Genkai: The Sutachi-clan has the Kisaihada, which is the ability to obtain chakra from fire, high heat, and the sun. Hitting any part of a Sutachi-clan heir's(Shinori's) skin with fire, heat, or sunlight will fill their chakra levels within minutes while in Kisaihada meditation, Which is a intense uninterrupted meditation, This Kisaihada meditation is the only time they can receive chakra from those sources. Also any length of time without any form of sunlight, high heat, or fire will cause their chakra to slowly drain and they will require twice amount of the time spent out of sunlight spent in Kisaihada meditation to become full power again.
Alliance: None
Rank: Genin
Jutsus: Basic genin jutsus: Transformation, Substitution, Cloning, Chakra Control, Fire Fingers (he can coat the tips of his fingers with fire), etc.
Tools: Shinori has a lion cub (named Krono) and basic ninja supplies(Kunais, Shuriken, Wire, Food pills etc)
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PHYSICAL INFORMATION
Appearance: He wears an all white ninja suit. It is made of a special fabric that pulls moisture off of the skin, which keeps you cool even in incredibly hot conditions. Unlike other members of his tribe, Shinori’s suit has no sleeves. This is so he has skin being touched by the sun at all times. He also wears shaded goggles over his eyes so he does not get blinded from the bright sun. He wears his headband like a bandanna across his head.
Hair: Cropped and black.
Eyes: Bright blue with speckles of green
Skin Tone: Albino white. This is because his skin absorbs the sunlight into chakra and doesn’t allow it to tan himself.
Scars/Tattoos: none
Piercings: none
Height: 5’6” (Still growing)
Weight: 120lbs (Still growing)
Strengths: Fire and animal Jutsus, especially in bright sunlight
Weaknesses: Darkness or Shadow Jutsus, and Ice/Cold Jutsus
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PERSONALITY:
Fears: Dark and cold
Likes: Fire, warmth, Krono, and women
Dislikes: People who treat him different because of his Kekkai Genkai, and people who talk bad about his adulterous father.
Bio: He was born to the Sutachi family. The Sutachi's clan head Hasuri Sutachi is well known for his promiscuity. Because of this Shinori is sure that he has some half-siblings throughout the village he doesn't know about. Even though his jovial father isn't the most honorable towards his marriage, Shinori loves him and wouldn't want his dad to be any different.

Growing up Shinori was treated different then other kids just because of his Kekkai Genkai. He was always given a beneficial treatment. This treatment has caused him to become a little bit of a slacker. He has no real passion for being a shinobi, but he is naturally good at fighting and ninjutsus. His Kekkai Genkai also is a major boon to his abilities.

It was no surprise to anyone when he was among the top 10 percent of the Village.

Are the bios good?
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Re: Naruto: The Unhidden Village ( )

Postby Demon King Jace on Wed Dec 02, 2009 9:41 pm

Hey guys, I know this has little to do with anything, but I added a picture to my character's profile. Just so y'all can get a better idea of what he looks like.

Sorry about the black and white, my friend lost her colour pencils.
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Re: Naruto: The Unhidden Village ( )

Postby Ceur'Caelesetos on Fri Dec 04, 2009 12:19 am

Hey gabe, can you hurry up and start the next match? cause we are all just waiting for that lol.
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Re: Naruto: The Unhidden Village ( )

Postby Huchiama on Sun Dec 06, 2009 12:15 am

I think people should post more :o lol jk, i know you guys have lives. Now im off to join another rp because im bored of waiting on people who are typing n the ooc but not in the ic(not this one) 75 words 75 words 75 words come on ..... come on give me 75 freaking words!!!! turn green already :p lol dont I sound pathetic itll hit 75 when i type right now .
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Re: Naruto: The Unhidden Village ( )

Postby 1789 on Sun Dec 06, 2009 12:44 am

It's not that people aren't posting, it's just that there's not much of anything to post about. Until the next fight is announced, there's not much that can be done to let the plot move foward.
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Re: Naruto: The Unhidden Village ( )

Postby Huchiama on Sun Dec 06, 2009 1:46 am

You lost the game.

Can you just randomly post two names, so that they can fight? Nobody can really do anything since we aren't allowed to leave the arena.
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Re: Naruto: The Unhidden Village ( )

Postby Demon King Jace on Tue Dec 08, 2009 2:35 am

Gabe, if your goal was to get the anxiety levels of everyone up really high, congrats you succeeded.

So when's that fight gonna be put up?
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Re: Naruto: The Unhidden Village ( )

Postby Vain on Tue Dec 08, 2009 9:22 am

....I've seen him on a few times, but for some reason he hasn't made any posts. I wonder if he forgot about this rp. I think we need a new dm or something.
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Re: Naruto: The Unhidden Village ( )

Postby shinigamivixen on Tue Dec 08, 2009 10:53 am

hi! is it still okay too join?
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Re: Naruto: The Unhidden Village ( )

Postby Ceur'Caelesetos on Tue Dec 08, 2009 7:20 pm

Yea, has anyone sent him a pm?

Also Go ahead Shin more the merrier.
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Re: Naruto: The Unhidden Village ( )

Postby TexasMechanism on Wed Dec 09, 2009 4:59 pm

SORRY GUYS! I didn't forget about you guys or nothin', my bro's girlfriend gave birth to my kickass nephew and I've been spending alot of time with the baby so it kinda' got me off track. BUT NOW IM BACK
"I Like You As Well. . .But I'm A Ladies Man Sooo I'll Leave My Heart ByThe Bedside"

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Re: Naruto: The Unhidden Village ( )

Postby Tigeress on Thu Dec 10, 2009 3:39 pm

Haha, welcome back, please set up the next fight so the story could continue. Congrats on the newphew, it felt amazing when my distant niece was born and I taught her how to read, well, actually I just helped but still it was a good experience :)
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