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Postby Athias on Thu Jul 02, 2009 7:15 pm

Here is Trist's Profile:
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It is poorly constructed, and rather austere if I do say so myself, but I don't find the Character Profile important other than as a means to give the other RPer a basic idea of what your character can do (To prevent Cheating and the like).

I'll write the description for the setting later, I'm still thinking up few good ones and then need to decide which one of these potential settings would be the most interesting.

I have a few requests:
-A post every 3-4 days or so (Though I am willing to be leniant with this)
-An RPer with a good amount of skill at writing, I am doing this inpart to have fun, and inpart to try to improve my writing ability, and I find that a good opponent helps with both.
-At least 2-3 paragraphs per post. I don't mean paragraphs consisting of 2 lines, I mean full, well thought-out paragraphs.

(I apologise if this opening post appears smug, I simply want to get it done quickly, and am cutting straight to the point as a result.)
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"Everybody has a secret world inside of them. All of the people of the world, I mean everybody. No matter how dull and boring they are on the outside, inside them they've all got unimaginable, magnificent, wonderful, stupid, amazing worlds. Not just one world. Hundreds of them. Thousands maybe." - Neil Gaiman
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Re: Trist versus ? (Open Challange) ( )

Postby Total_Brave on Thu Jul 02, 2009 7:54 pm

I'll take you on

i will be using this character of mine

name:Maxxi unabara
age:8 years old
race:shinigami/vizard
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bed-head hair with a bit of a spiked in blowing in the wind,light brown shirt dress shirt with a small white shirt on the inside of it with a white pirate skull on back having a small black outline on it,loafer shoes designed with with blue;black;and white flares on them with faded on mid side mixed mid-black and blue jeans

weapons:
zanpaktou:taishita-raion(great lion):mid-sized sword in length,very thick in a balanced weight of a claymore.the guard of the blade on both sides has the shape of white slightly bent angel wings with a small family crystal in the middle.the blade its-self has a thin white line going up the grind ridge and temper line to the tip of the blade with a black out-line around it with the silver steel as the outline of the black.Slightly above the collar of the sword there is a extra sharp square-hook blade on it(kind of looks like the side part of a sai sticking out that allows you to spin it in your hands and fingers)

taishita-raion/shikai form:transforms into a large,gold tribal designed,white lance with the wing-shaped guard from its original form over the handle by 4 inches.increases the pierce effect of his strikes,balance his spiritual pressure within the weapon,and overwhelming force but subtracts from his speed by 28%.

taishita-raion/bankai form:when entering bankai the sword goes back to its original form and the wings on the guard of the sword starts to growth and glow with celestial energy transform them into literally full grown angel wings on the sword that are use as guard/shields to block attacks with the collar turned into lion fur and the blade of the sword transforms into a large form of a lion's claw compressed into massively energy giving it a gold-ish yellow look.when looking at the zanpaktou from a decent few the spirit pressure made a face of a lion flowing through the wind like flames around it having the golden-yellow color to it from the blades glow.Also entering bankai Maxxi's appearance change too having is teeth grow sharp and ravage as his nails grew the same as well wildly;his hair starts to grow back and long along his side burns,back for head,and slightly down neck looking like a animal mane;his body begins to take more detail in his muscles and tiger-like lines starts to appear on his arms,legs,side cheeks on his face with his looking like animal paws.In this form his speed is intensified by 10x and increasing force of built-up blows 35% but lower accuaracy by 15% also allowing him to cause paralysis to opponent without fully making contact through roaring,having the zanpaktou touch the ground with techniques or flash-stepping past opponent with the right level and amount of speed depending on the resistance of the opponent.this is some of the most baisc info of this zanpaktou.(will put more info of this later)
ability's:
Cero-a highly powerful and swift energy blast that can be fired from various body parts, such as mouth, tongue, hand or fingers. Only Menos, Arrancar, and Vizard have so far been shown to use Cero attacks, and it appears that stronger entities can use it more efficiently and forcefully. The cero requires some time to be used effectively, so the enemy must be either not moving or busy with something else, or too badly wounded to even simply dodge it, with the exception of a few Cero techniques and users.
High-Speed Regeneration-the ability that allows a hollow to heal any injuries very quickly. Hollows outside of the Menos class who exhibit this ability are very rare; and even then it is usually exclusive to the Gillian Class.
Kidō-a type of sorcery used by Shinigami. They can be used for various purposes, such as healing, attacking, and restraining. Healing seems to be a more general skill, while attacking and binding require an incantation to be recited beforehand. Demon arts spells are divided into two major groups: destructive spells, used for direct attack, and binding spells, which are spells that restrain someone or have other effects. These forms of demon arts spells are performed by calling out a complicated and often long-winded incantation followed by the name of the spell, which causes an effect once the name has been recited. Lesser versions of the spells can be used by calling out the name alone, but their effectiveness is reduced when used in such a fashion.
techniques:(haven't finish,will not uses until posted)

Kido:Hadou #18 - Koukuugeki ("Air Strike" )
Hadou #16 - Katon Shoumon ("Flaming Palm Print" )
Bakudou #15 - Kinbaku ("Bind Tightly" )
Bakudou #13 - Jajipe-pa ("The Judge of Paper" )
Bakudou #21 - Karimaisou ("Temporary Burail" )
Bakudou #25 - Ji (Emperor's Seal" )
Hadou #31 - Shakkahou ("Red Flame Gun" )
Hadou # 36 - Gekitsuu ("Sharp Pain" )
Bakudou #49 - Idenchizu ("Genetic Mapping" )
Hadou # 58 - Kakushitsuijaku ("Summoning of the Tracking Sparrows" )
Hadou #60 - Intaken ("Flash Point" )
Hadou # 65 - Raikoho ("Thunder Roar Cannon" )
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Re: Trist versus ? (Open Challange) ( )

Postby Athias on Fri Jul 03, 2009 4:44 pm

I don't mean to seem offensive (Though, to be perfectly honest, I probably do), but could you honestly ensure me that you could produce posts containing multiple posts which are mostly devoid of any major spelling or gramatical issues? Further more, can you ensure me that your posts are well-planned out, and your character's actions would be more complex than simply beam-spamming my character, or powering up to super-mode when the fight isn't going so well?
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Re: Trist versus ? (Open Challange) ( )

Postby Total_Brave on Fri Jul 03, 2009 6:56 pm

Yes,trust me I'm no easy victim to no one and I've been in many battles in rp'ing this is just an alternate account I use for this rp site so if you think you can give me a run for my money,bring it cause my last match ended very quickly total-brave-snowdrift-t24592.html an I need I a good fight.

But first make a hall of records profile so this can be an official match.
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Re: Trist versus ? (Open Challange) ( )

Postby Athias on Fri Jul 03, 2009 7:34 pm

I suppose I'll give you the benefit of the doubt, I did make this an 'Open Challange' after all. (And Speeled incorectly too, on top of that...).

I actually already have a profile, though my record is less than impressive, as all the fights where my opponent dropped out for whatever reasons weren't registered. Whereas the fights where I dropped out were. (It's funny how the only RP's I've been in have ended in someone dropping out.) I can understand if a 2-1 such as yourself doesn't want to face a lowly 0-2 like me. Just say the word and I'll go straight back to the Gutter of Insignificance, poorly polishing shoes for barely enough money to feed my starving self.

Also, we seem to be operating on completly different Time Zones/Schedules, and I have pack it in soon. So if you want to make the opening post and/or decide the setting, that would be a real help.
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Re: Trist versus ? (Open Challange) ( )

Postby Total_Brave on Sat Jul 04, 2009 3:11 pm

.....wow...you went from being hard and bold to sad to yourself and weak,what's up with that,I'm sorry but I'm going to have to turn down this open challenge until you get yourself together,sorry for wasting for time but I can't fight a person that is constantly doubt and give up on himself then change total mood out of nowhere an think he got want he takes,sorry challenge me when you think you have things together with yourself.
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Re: Trist versus ? (Open Challange) ( )

Postby Athias on Sat Jul 04, 2009 3:58 pm

I... I was being facetious you know.

Oh well, the match is called off then, poor, poor me. I'll have to start up another thread immediatly.
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Postby Skallagrim on Sat Jul 04, 2009 9:51 pm

It's called sarcasm and it seems roll off the perceptive ability of some.

However that being said this thread will not be locked, nor will it be deleted as it is our policy to never delete posts. However if you refrain from posting in this further it will vanish to the back among all the other fights that have fizzled away.

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