In the meantime!
Me and a friend of mine (Walter Mitty, who only showed up for one post and hasn't showd up since...) have been tinkering around writing a story in turns for a few weeks now and I think it would be kinda cool to post it up here.
So, I'll post my first part, and then I'll post Walter's, and so on and so forth.
Note that yes, it is inspired, and we are very pleased with what we came up with...
(P.S. Oh yeah, feedback would be nice)
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((SlowlyCrazyIAmGoing))
Mark used to go to the park a lot. The last time he went was with his dad during Christmas break, when they attended an annual winter fair. Now it was summer, and sitting next to him on a bench that he usually reserved for himself and his father was a different man than he was used to. In fact, Mark was fairly sure he wasn’t human at all.
He stood a reasonable few inches above Mark and had long jet black hair that streamed off his head like smooth water to within an inch of his shoulders. Long, rectangular glasses rested on the bridge of a pointed nose that reflected the slender, angular look that the rest of his face had. On his chin was a dark goatee that was mirrored by a small, straight moustache just under his nose. He wore a long sleeved, black dress shirt and a pin-stripe tuxedo vest over it. His shirt was tucked into dress slacks that were held up by a large, black leather belt; several chains hung down from this belt, and at the end of each one was a trinket of some kind: a pocket watch, a ring box, a set of keys, and even a palm pilot, along with a few other weird things Mark couldn’t identify.
“So,” Mark finally pulled up the courage to say, “why are you still here? Shouldn’t you be going home or something?” He scratched his shoulder during an awkward silence that continued even after his question. The man didn’t seem to notice the question.
Finally, the man, still not moving from his fixed position on the bench, replied, “I don’t know how to get home. I was told to guide you.”
“And you did great, really! I’d probably have died just then if you hadn’t killed those…”
“Demons.”
“Sure, whatever. My point is you don’t have to follow me around anymore.”
The man adjusted his glasses and continued to blankly stare in front of him, “They weren’t your demons, that’s why you couldn’t defeat them. Normally they haunt whoever created them, but these ones obviously wanted to kill. There will be more attacks, not just on you, but on everyone. So you will need me.”
Frustrated, Mark stood up and faced him, “I don’t need you! I need my father! You’ve got a bit of explaining to do so spill it! Where is my father!?”
Quickly, but calmly it seamed, the man stood up and grabbed Mark by the collar. He then raised a hand to his glasses and pulled them down to the end of his nose. The dark pupils in his eyes seemed to fall into his head, and this continued out until his entire eye socket was a black, sunken pit. “Your father,” he began, “tore me from the Ethereal Plane with his bare hands. He pointed you out, and told me to guide you through what was about to happen, and then he vanished, abandoning me here on your plane. How’s about explaining a few things on your end?” When he finished, he replaced his glasses and ‘normal’ eyes refilled themselves on his face.
Dazed, Mark sat back down and looked down at his feet. The man joined him. After a long while, Mark finally spoke:
“When I was
A young boy,
My father took me into the city
To see a marching band.
He said,
‘Son when you grow up
Will you be the saviour of the broken,
The beaten and the damned?’
He said
‘Will you defeat them,
your demons, and all the non believers,
the plans that they have made?
Because one day I'll leave you,
A phantom to lead you in the summer,
Mark paused for a moment before continuing.
To join the black parade.’"








