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Danita now knew something was strange since she nor Dane was expecting any package, and there was no way that Dane had any friends to send any packages. Danita became uneasy of the whole situation. She even swore she noticed the delivery man grinning.

Danita's first thought was to turn him into a small statue and lock him in the closet, but that would arouse suspicion. She decided to try and read his mind. That way, she can find out what this guy was up to. Danita probed the man's mind, hoping to find what she was looking for. She was not great at mind reading, but she was not exactly a novice either.

"I'm sorry but, I don't think I am expecting a package this late, sir." Danita said, hoping to stall time enough to read his mind.
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Tickle tickle! Trephan felt the attempt to read his mind as clearly as he would have felt a slap in the face; it was his area of expertise after all, and she wasn’t the best at masking her presence. Well, she was playing with the big boys now and Trephan wasn’t sure how nice he was feeling; he had never been all that charitable on the playground when little kids tried to butt into his games.

However, sometimes it was far more fun to let the little kiddies think they were welcome before crushing their hopes entirely later on... and given that she was thinking such naughty things about him, he decided to play along for a while.

“Are you sure?” He showed her the package as he let her into his persona’s mind, flooding her with mundane, human thoughts of sex and money and dinner tonight. His persona wasn’t very interesting, but he thought that the woman who had opened the door was shagging someone upstairs, or maybe just entertaining herself. He wanted in to an extent, but was more interested in getting back to the office so he could compare his day with the other post-staff.
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Danita was bored with the thoughts he was receiving from the delivery man. In his mind, she saw his thoughts on his life, job, and how slutty she looked now. She would have taken offense if she cared what he thought of her. "Typical, just a boring old human" Danita thought. "But then why does seem so...odd?" Danita was still wanting to know why this man felt familiar to her. She didn't believe this delivery man just happens to come here just a delivery. Danita still doesn't trust him, but decided to play along.

"Yes I am sure this is not a package I am expecting" She told the shifty delivery man. For all she knew, this could be some sort of prank from one of Danita's coworkers.
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Well, this was boring. Trephan almost pouted despite his disguise, having grown quite tired of playing with this highly disinteresting toy. With that in mind, he decided a more direct approach was probably required; bluntness was always good with stupid people, and Trepthan had already made up his mind about this one's mental faculties (or lack thereof). With a sigh, he snapped his fingers, making the package disappear.

"Well," he drawled, "aren't you just lovely and BORING! I at least expected a bit of color from you, but really! You're nothing but a Barbie-doll dressed up in too small clothes answering the door to random mail men! Really, who gets so shirty with the Parcleforce?! Gah! You're no fun."

With a second snap, the disguise was gone, and Trephan's semi-visible wings were humming at his back. "Do you know, I've never been so insulted by a person in my life? And let me tell you that I've lived a bloody long life so far, missy!"
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