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Sand. It was such an under appreciated thing, tossed about on beaches and islands as though it were worthless. But for the second time in her life, Richelle Oaken realized just how wonderful sand was. It was pressed into her face and clinging to her wet clothes, and she had never been so enamored with pieces of scenery. Last time, it had been the result of a hurricane. This time, it had been a large Portuguese pirate that had caused her to enjoy the feeling of sand smothering her and covering her hair. Her lower half was still hanging in the water, but she managed to crawl up to a point where she didn't have to struggle (except, of course, against the wonderful sand) for air.
It had been a difficult thing. She had felt herself tossed through the air, splash into the water, and she was instantly surrounded by unmoving sailors that had also been sent in. She was trapped in the cold waters, thrashing and splashing as best she could and getting no where. Between the two ships and the blanket of death, it seemed very likely that she was simply going to drown in the bloody water. But she had been filled with urgency, and a general need to see James' face again. So she had kicked and struggled and finally made her way to the surface again. She was far away from the two ships when she resurfaced, and completely out of breath. Somehow, she swam to the shore.
For some time, she simply lay there and gasped and worshiped the sand. Slowly, one of her hands lifted to check for the sack that contained the key to the Fledgling's escape from the Cities of Gold. She nearly sobbed with relief as she found it still safe. And as she Fledgling's crew was burying its dead, she slowly pulled herself from the waves and into a slumped position on the sand. She couldn't hear any fighting, and she couldn't see any sign of her friends. But she did recognize a few of the far off buildings...she was near the city that they had been pillaging. Once she had caught her breath, she pushed herself off of the glorious sand and to her tired feet. She had apparently swum quite a distance, and she was exhausted...but she had to get back to the others.
She started to walk towards the ship (or at least where she thought the ship was), but suddenly stop, turning her bleary eyes towards the temple that James had originally tried to lead her to. The charm needed to be set into place, and until it was they couldn't leave. She had the charm, and the day was dying. So, drawing up every bit of her willpower, she turned and made her way to the temple.
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The battle was over, the dead were nearly all buried, and the crew of the Fledgling was far less than it had been when it had left its last port. But as the sun drifted down below the line of golden buildings, a green eyed woman slowly made her way out of the line of trees. She was gasping for breath, clutching at her side and partially covered in sand. Her eyes were half closed and she looked ready to sleep where she staggered. But she approached the grave diggers with great determination, finally dropping to her knees next to one of the as of yet filled holes. "Wh...where is..James?"

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