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(This is my first roleplay
I got a little help from my best friend (IRL) Emizzle.

It is about third world war. Suddenly everything is in chaos, and nobody has any idea who they fighting against.
There is consentration camps in Spain and France. Every country in the world gets struck about as hard, nobody knows why, but families gets separated and tortured in several consentration camps and have no idea what to do.
This roleplay "happens" in the biggest camp in spain (in Madrid). Everybody talks english, because every country has chose it as main language to get saved.

My people:

Name: Sophie
Country: Italy
Age (no limit): 18
Sex: Female
Looks: Blonde, curly hair, green eyes, beautiful, weares "boy clothes", old jeans, a red t.shirt and a red hairband
Persoinality: Easy to annoy, attractive (or as attractive you can get in "boy clothes"), has a lot of self-confidence, boy-ish, a survivor and is stubborn


Name:
Country:
Age (no limit):
Sex:
Looks:
Persoinality:

OOC: Is it ok if I join, this seems like a really good idea for an RP!

Name: Yuki Asaoka
Country: Japan
Age (no limit): 20
Sex:female
Looks: Tall, thin with long black hair past her bottom (Until the day she is dragged to the prison camp when her hair is cut by a guard) and big brown eyes, her complexion is warm and seems tanned constantly. Wears plain white tank tops and jeans that she is given by a guard.

Persoinality: Smart and pretty easy to talk to, usually shys away from big crouds but has a mothering instinct that is rare at her age from taking care of her brothers and sisters when her parents went to fight at the begining of the war. She was split from her younger siblings when they were taken off to camps and instead she just tries to look after the younger ones there.

^ Made a few Edits! Sorry about that.

OOC: Youre in

Name: Keara Lee
Country: England
Age (no limit): 21
Sex: Female
Looks:
Persoinality:Calm and collected usually, but has become aggresive and cocky since being in the camp and lashes out at anyone. She is also smart and able to get herself out of any problem, even fights.

OOC: in

OOC: Do you have to be in one of these camps?

Name: Bruno Johan

Country: Germany

Age (no limit): 20

Sex: Male

Looks:

Persoinality: Bruno is the most sarcastic person you'll ever meet. He's also very strong and he's very, very ashamed of getting caught. Bruno didn't have much of anyone, except his little 11-year-old sister, Katrina. They were seperated and he has no clue where she is, and the only time he is ever talking without a trace of sarcasm in his voice is when he is talking about Katrina because he is so protective of her.

Name: Liao Zhang
Country:CHINA
Age 21
Sex: Male
Appearance:


Persoanlity: Liao always conducts himself in a rather serious and planned manner. He is very protective of those friends he gets close to and has a strong sense of loyalty. Despite being in a camp he holds fast to his basic philosphy of universial love and the the people impriosoning him and do have good in them.

Name: will smith
Country: Africa
Age 26
Sex: Male

Appearance:

Personality: he is a quiet person who doesnt like jokers and any one who is happy
he isnt very intelligent. he usally only speaks with his fist but will mumble when he is asked a question

Name: Lilyanna Carmen
Country: America
Age: 14
Sex: Female
Appearance: light blond hair, self repaired glasses, long finger nails,scars up and down her arms, pale skin and wild, darting eyes.
Personality: Suicidal. If camp guards come in for any reason she'll attack them. Seems like she could have been smart once but seeing her home destroyed and her family killed drove her over the edge. The only coherent thing she ever says is:"They're gonna get us all man, they're gonna get us all!"

OOc: In! But no, you dont have to be in the camp

can we start now....we have a decent number of people

Name: Sofia Lindberg
Country: Sweeden
Age (no limit): 20
Sex: Female
Looks: http://www.accessv.com/~shawgrp/AvrilLa ... maller.jpg
Persoinality: shy , patient , kind , very funny when you get to know her, boy-ish , gets easy in fights

OOC: in, ok lets start

"Let-go of me!!!!"
I yel as loud as my lungs can hold before exploding. Im sitting in the back of a truck between two male soldiers. They smell like garbage and certainly look like it too, sitting there in at least ten years old and filthy camouflage clothes. They just carried me away from my fosterhome. I havent done anything wrong as far as im conserned, and here i sit, and i have no idea where im going, but i bet this is the guys mom was warning me about.

Liao stood surronded by almost a dozen guards with guns draw at him. At his feet stood two unconcious guards which were normally enough to carry of just one man but Liao had started caring a metal pipe with him for the past week knowing they were coming for him. "you have no right to dentane people....the invocer of hostility is always at fault" he said calmly.
The soliders didn't respond and simply stood there guarding him until two men shoot him with taser guns collapsing him in a heap.
He was couldn't overdue one taser often, and two was dangerous to his heart so they quickly tied his hands and put him in the back of a truck. "you will regret your attack on us" one man said.

Liao glared at the man with his red face tensed with every muscle do to the jolt "before you go on a trip for revenge...dig two graves" he said throwing out another line of philosophy that he loved so much

Yuki, a 20-year-old woman with long raven hair had been sitting quite peacfully in her small, grubby old living room with her two sisters and three brothers all asleep in the late hours of the night a fire-place as their only heating.
But the silence would not last, the door was suddenly kicked down on the two roomed house, including kitchen, as that livingroom had to serve as the bedroom also and the kitchen the shower room. Yuki got up in a panic seeing soilders pour in through the door, they looked at her and the kids.
It all happened so fast after that, she tried to get up and stand in front of the children asking what was happening and why the guards had come but it was no use.
The guards pulled her by the writs jerkingly as the kids began to scream. They were all picked up by other soilders though they struggled and called for Yuki frantically.
"What will you do with us?!" She yelled as tears rolled down her cheeks.
The soilders merely looked down at her and smirked. Yuki kicked away from them and tried to pull the youngest little boy away from one of the guards, but they caught her by the long hair. She struggled against him, pulling away from him, but it was no use.
One of the guards got out his army knife and cut her hair so that it was short. A clump fell to the floor as she did. On her hands and knees she cried watching the kids one by one being taken out and put into a truck and it driving off and away.
She was plucked up and taken into another truck, broken and sobbing, she just sat there with her hands to her mouth. She didn't much care that her hair was now so short a length. Her brothers and sisters were gone and she was going to a camp, a place she had never wished to go. What had she done to deserve it, what was their reason for this?

Liao was just begining to be able to move when a japanese women with short hair was put in the truck with him. She was crying terribly which based on the circumstances was no help in determining precisely what was going on. Everyone he had seen recently was crying or scared. " do not cry misss....there is no piont...whatever your problem is we must not become jaded or lose or level headedness" he said. He was got control of his muscles and pulled a hankerchief out of his pocket since he was dressed very formally when we was taken. "if this helps" he said holding it out to her. He looked around and saw all the armed guards and knew that escape know despite the chaos would be a death wish so Liao sighed and accepted that whatever he would do would have to wait until he understood what situation he was in.

Yuki looked at the Chinese man next to her and seemed alarmed by his gesture. But she took the hankercheif and wiped her wet eyes.
She was far more worried for the kids and what was happening to them than what she was going through. She didn't understand Liao's coolness about the situation.
She merely put on a fake little smile and looked down at her feet, sobbing with no tears.
"Thank you," She gave him back his hankerchief abruptly and kept her weary gaze low.

Liao took the hankerchief and stuffed it in is coat pocket absent mindly and began observing what was going on with the soldiers, civillians and the general way they operated. "such a wanton disregard for universial love...they will fail doubtlessly" he said not really to anyone, but he said it aloud since he was at least in other company. He watched for a few minutes until the truck was full of people of all ages and backgrounds. Most men wanted to fight if they were young enough but everyone else was either afriad and control those angry few amongst them. Liao crossed his arms and rested on the side of the truckbed, he didn't move nor did he acknowledge anyone besides watching everything unfold.