Alright, Here is the thread, choose a genre, make a character and I can set the scene so we can help fix your writing problems!

We can use this skeleton base:

Name:
Gender:
Age:

Items:

Powers:

Description/Picture:

Personality:

History:

Ok, so, I was thinking more of a drama genre. So, would it be alright if I created a sensitive girl type charrie?

Sure. If it's more to what you enjoy playing, then it'll be easier to start expanding the writing. :-)

Name: Felicity Fontaine

Gender: Female

Age: 18

Items: Felicity has a ring that she always keeps on her right ring-finger. It is made from sterling silver, and in the middle there is an Amethyst surrounded by diamonds. Her mother gave it to her when she turned 16.

Powers: None,

Description/Picture: She is a very tall, thin woman with long, natural blonde hair. She has pale skin, blue eyes, and rosy cheeks. She always wears fashionable, expensive clothing from the money her father gave her.

Personality: Felicity has a really shy, sensitive personality. She hates being critisized and she takes everything to heart. She is somewhat intelligent, but is also very forgetful. Misplacing items is practically an everyday thing for her. Felicity always blames herself, and has a low self-esteem. She is always worrying about what others think of her, so she always fusses over her appearance. Felicity is also a master-manipulator as well. She can persuade almost anyone to do anything for her. She overall is really sweet, shy, and spoiled.

History: Ever since she was young, life has been hard for her. Her parents divorced, so she went and lived with her mother. She was only allowed to see her father ever other weekend. Then, her mother got quickly into another relationship with a man who wasn't all that nice. While Felicity's mother was out shopping, her boyfriend would baby-sit Felicity and abuse her. Felicity would tell her mother how her boyfriend is, but her mother thought she was just acting out to get rid of her boyfriend. Soon her mother and this boyfriend got married. It was like this, until she turned 13 and finally went to court so her father could have full custody despite how little he spends time with her. She went and lived with her father, and she rarely saw him. She would always be home alone, and the only time she would see him is when he got home from work at 11:30. He spent his weekends in the basement, watching TV and eating chips while Felicity would sit upstairs playing video games or drawing. He father would spoil her and buy her everything she wanted just so she would leave him alone.

I didn't really know what to put for Items...

Items, well... Think about items of importance to her, like some necklace her mother gave her? It's less a matter of items that she has on her and more of a case of what items she owns that are important to her. That better?

Yes, that helps. Thank you. :)

Name:Haley Yasuka
Gender:Female
Age:17

Items:A jade pendant that she was given by her martial arts teacher. Her mother's bracelet.

Powers:Only the power of a lot of practice, and that kind of 'never-give-up' approach.

Description/Picture:Down to earth, Haley is usually found wearing loose pants and a shirt, mainly as it does not constrict her movement if she needs some. She enjoys dresses and the like, but doesn't think they are practical for everyday use.

Personality:Slightly overbearing. Haley is the quieter one in the local area, not that she isn't friendly, just not really talkative. Her smile is a rare occurance, but no less enthusiastic when she does for that, and she often is found standing in the background, not really doing much but listening to her friends.

History:Another hard lifer, Haley originally lived on the backstreets, her family very poor. This meant she was picked on, and had nothing which was her own. Her family ended up dying in an explosion, only her mothers bracelet left of them. The only reason she still had that was that her mother had left it behind when going to work.

Thus, she was on the streets, eventually being taken in by an orphanage, where she lived until adopted. She is now the adopted daughter of a middle-class family, and has vowed never to be powerless again, the constant beatings when she was younger making her tough, she graduated easily enough, and excelled at her martial arts studying.

I'll get the opening post up when I'm able, knowing me that may take a while.

(Alright, I've got some spare time thanks to holidays. So, what kind've scene would you like? Would the characters just be meeting, or friends?)

(Perhaps they could be just meeting? And I'm not quite sure what the scene should be....Any suggestions?)

'kay. Well, Considering they're both middle-higher class, they could run into each other at a party, or something like that.

They could run into each other on the street, or maybe even end up working together on some community project/job or convention ... etc..

I like the party idea...Seems like there would be some drama there. :)

Haley once again found herself dragged around, this time she was at a party. With lots of people she didn't know. She'd lost her friends a while back, and once that'd happened there was difficulty finding them again in such a massive crowd, this had to be one of the biggest groups of people squashed into one house in the history of this town!

And moving anywhere in the press of bodies was rediculous. She muttered darkly to herself as she once again wormed her way around another group of people, heading for the door and a bit of fresh air. She much preferred parties where the was actually room to breath! And she needed that.

Another step, another lump of people. She finally found the doorway hidden amongst the press of bodies. She sighed in relief, stepping quickly towards the door.

*WHUMP!* Next she knew was a slight discorperation as she was thrown sideways by someone running into her....

(Suggestions: Felicity could help pick Haley up, or she could've been the one to run into her, unlikely though. And any other possible way to introduce her into the scene. Oh, and sorry for being slow.)

Felicity timidly looked around at the enormous crowd of people. She was Claustrophobic, so at that moment she felt very uncomfortable. She made her way through the crowd, in search of some of her friends. They had all been seperated by the enormous amount of people all crammed together in the room. She looked around, having a sudden urge to just get outside, away from the crowd. She sighed, making her way for the door just in time to see Haley get knocked down by man who had seemed he was in a hurry. She walked over to the girl timidly, to make sure she was ok. "Are you alright?" She held out her hand to help Haley up.

(( So sorry it took so long. Busy, busy weekend. ))

((Been very busy over here, but I will get to this VERY soon!))

(( Oh it's okay. Take your time. :P ))

Haley found herself on the floor. She'd been ran into quite rudely, not even a 'sorry, can I help you?' at all. Heck, she didn't expect anything quite so formal, but you should damned well apologise! She looked around, noticing the slightly timid girl who just reached out her hand. "Are you alright?" Haley paused, then took the hand before glaring after the person that had run into her.

"Mostly, I think. Thanks." She replies. "Did you get a look at the guy that ran into me?" Haley hadn't even seen it coming, and had little idea on her own of who had done it. The place was so jam packed it could've come from any direction.