by klikxx on Tue Mar 22, 2011 9:10 am
(edit of my initial post involving name change, correcting a few spelling errors and a few minor edits to accomplish a better flow has been verified and approved by Sara)
Satisfactorily rested, Thunderstruck once again brought both monstrous hands to grasp the thirty pound length of chain, this time, roughly eight feet from where it remained pinned to the solid slab of rock. What began as a gentle sway of the bowed metal binding soon erupted to a mighty whipping motion with the muscular warrior forcibly swinging the iron line hard to his left, jerking it taut, and then to his right with a similar motion. The repetitive side to side jarring, coupled with the chain’s own weight as it rocked vehemently against the secured ring, released immense torque wrestling the iron retaining pin to and fro within its confined housing. Little by little the slab’s tensioned grip began to loosen and the metal stake started to shift further in the elongating hole with each swipe.
He now panted heavily, the result of the vigorous workout, his hot breath steaming as it released into the cool evening air. Encouraged with his progress the young Comanche brave could almost taste his freedom choosing to cease his assault bringing the weighty chain to settle to a stop. Altering his grip upon the metal links Thunderstruck bent deep at the knees to grasp the chain just above the circular retaining ring. With a mighty heave he pulled straight up from his squatted positing above the peg, putting his entire muscular six foot three inch frame into the lift using his powerful legs as leverage. “Uugghhhh!” the warrior cried struggling as he fought the stubborn six inch fastener from its resting place.
“At Last!” came the weary half-hearted celebration with the fastener finally gave way.
Free for the most part anyways, it was a hollow victory knowing there was still the thirty pound anchor he would be toting with him during his escape. Such a weight would seriously impede the duration and swiftness of his travels running down the transient horse thief. Not to mention, hamper his style should he in fact encounter this alleged executioner while tracking his quarry for he had no idea from which direction and in what form the threat would present itself. All he had been informed was his time was near.
And then he saw it, a minuscule silhouette standing out against the darkening orange horizon. As luck would have it the figure made its approach from the North limiting the young warrior’s options of flight should he wish to pursue the White Man’s escape. “Perhaps it had been the horse thief’s intentions all along to have me chase him down and run into the conflict unprepared..” Thunderstruck reminded himself. “If it was a fight they wanted, it was a fight they were going to get.”
The Comanche warrior knelt before the length of chain keeping a wary eye on the approaching figure as he prepared to lighten his burden. Once again he raised the teardrop shaped stone in two hands smashing it down, more zealous in his endeavour spurred by visual knowledge of a genuine threat. Over and over again he raised the oblong stone mallet smashing it down repeatedly upon the small section of iron links roughly three feet from where it attached to the collar. His goal was to weaken the links enough that the battered metal would give way when he forced the thick metal stake into the small opening between the connectors.
As he worked to soften the metal of the linkage more and more details of his oppressor became visible as the distance closed. Although garbed in the familiar black cotton armour of the Navaho, cousin to the Apache and equally as dangerous, his opponent did not arm themselves in typical tribal fashion. The wide array of exotic weaponry that stuck out from the miniscule framework of his executioner indicated they were well suited for the task of killing. One thing was certain he was severely out equipped in this matchup. What he wouldn’t give to have his trusted war lance at his side in this moment.
The opposition’s slight size had added significantly to the illusion of distance effectively cutting down the time in which he had to prepare for her arrival. The diminutive killer would be upon him sooner than expected and there was still work to be done. Placing the battered link over the elongated hole in the stone he had exposed earlier Thunderstruck had little choice but to act now wedging the metal stake into place. If the gambit failed he feared he may well be pinned in place once again. Hesitantly, the improvised hammer was elevated in preparation for an action that could very well prove to be his demise before the burly red skinned warrior threw caution to the wind and struck the spike squarely.
CLINCK
It was an odd yet inspiring sound that reached his ears, his success confirmed as the warrior looked down in awe viewing the broken links. The gods were watching him upon this day.
"I am here...” The cold feminine voice pierced his enthusiasm. “...to kill you.”
From the highest of highs to the lowest of lows in that one moment, that is what the young Comanche brave felt in the instant the statement was declared. Thunderstruck left the large stone to rest in front of him deflated and shocked with the abruptness of the female’s declaration. His left hand slowly extended to encompass the bone handled blade that sat near the fringes of his buck-skinned leggings. Quickly he chased the voice orientating himself upon the shiny steel caps of the leather boots that stood some thirty feet away.
Little by little his dark eyes travelled up the black leggings to the hem of her skirt focusing on the three blades clinging to her hips. Fortunately, the tiny hands remained empty as they hovered motionless near the sheathed weapons. The native warrior shifted his weight unto his right arm momentarily while he positioned the soft soles of his moccasins under him in case he needed to spring into action. All the while, his prying eyes stared intently studying her body language before travelling beyond the loose collection of colored metal bangles that looped around the skinny forearms and locked upon her unfeeling emerald green eyes.
“A girl?”
"Is this why the White fool has staked me to this slab like an animal and armed me only with a knife?”
"He sends a girl.?"
“Ha! It is not your blood I want woman.” The warrior proclaimed grasping the six inch blade tightly his fist forming a reverse grip to defend himself, thumb capping the handle, cutting edge facing away from the muscular forearm. “It’s the blood of the scum who sent you that’s important to me.”