My Rise To The Inner Me

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My Rise To The Inner Me ( )

Postby RedShereKhanChick on Wed Mar 09, 2011 4:53 pm

Well, it's taken some time, but I have a new post worthy song, no where near being done yet, will be soon, after this writers block. Might call up my 'homie' as he says I am his 'home girl'


Listen up, cause I got something to say.
Growin up where I was raised,
Being pissed on and pissing back.
Now I’ve got something to say,
All those people who said I was nothing,
All those people who said I’d never do anything,
Well I’ve got some news for you.
Growing up I only knew a mothers love,
Never knew another non blood could love me,
But now, I’m fallen deep in love,
And guess what? He loves back.
Yes I still live in the 813,
But I’ve risen above ya’ll.
Went from straight S’s in elementary school to
A’s, B’s and C’s in High school.
Just when I thought I was at the end of my choke chain.

Please comment on here, tell me what you think.
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Re: My Rise To The Inner Me ( )

Postby Dionysus on Sat Mar 12, 2011 7:04 pm

Heh... I know you can do better than this, but I still like it. ^_^

Keep workin on it.
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Re: My Rise To The Inner Me ( )

Postby RedShereKhanChick on Sat Mar 12, 2011 8:06 pm

Listen up, cause I got something to say.
Growin up where I was raised,
Being pissed on and pissing back.
All those people who said I was nothing,
All those people who said I’d never do anything,
Growing up I only knew a mothers love,
Never knew anyone could love some white trailer trash like me,
But now, I’m fallen deep in love,
And guess what? He loves back.
Yes I still live in the 813,
But I’ve risen above ya’ll.
Went from straight S’s in elementary school to
A’s, B’s and C’s in High school.
Just when I thought I was at the end of my choke chain
He comes and saves me.
Fuck these chains, I'll break free.
These chains no longer restrain me.
Bitch I'll break thee.
Now sit back and watch as I rise to the beauty I will be.

How's that?
One i'm working on
Just when I thought I was at the end of my choke chain
He comes and saves me.
Fuck these chains, I'll break free.
If you don’t run,
You touch my man,
Bitch I'll break thee.
These chains no longer restrain me.
He’s just out of reach
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Re: My Rise To The Inner Me ( )

Postby Assassin on Mon Mar 14, 2011 9:22 pm

Heheh.
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