Introduction
1. It's kind of hard to say "No Godmodding", when the DBZ universe is all about people of insane strength flying around, shooting destructive energy like baseballs. Just be FAIR about your overpoweredness.
2. Dont try and cheese off the excuse "Character revived by dragonballs" Those guys are dead and burried. Leave them that way, and create your own damn character. Lazy lazy lazy....
3. It's okay to be the badguy. Just remember. For every badguy, there are the 10 or so good guys that want you dead because....well...you're evil!
4. If you're going to be a son/daughter of someone, try and give them their own outline. The "Like father like son" is cliche. Give them their own attributes.
6. To make sure you were paying attention to these, I skipped 5.
Real 6. Have fun. It's not a fun roleplay if you're sitting at your computer, nerdraging about everything. My solution? "Like it, or leave."
7. Try to have decent post sizes. I'm not expecting a bajillion neatly wrote paragraphs, but "He fiyarz his laz0r beemz at [Insert person here]" Is....bad.
8. Major combats will be played out in Chat, and copy/pasted into post so others can view it.
For your character, let's have....
1. Appearance- Duh. What your person looks like.
1.5. Race- There are four major ones. Human, Alien, Saiyan, and Android. You could mix the first and last, or even the first and third. But I dont think saiyan pride would like being forced into a "Tin can". Just be creative, and you'll be fine.
2. Personality- How your character acts.
3. Equipment- What does your character have? A weapon? Perhaps some kind of armor? Who knows but you. TELL US!
4. Alignment- Well, you could be a good guy...or you could be a bad guy. I guess there are neutrals, but I mean...that's saying "I'm not trustable" to the good guys and "Another possible foe" to bad ones.
4.5. If you're going to be evil, have a nefarious plot. And even if it's as simple as "Destroying Earth", why?
5. A background- Who exactly IS your character?
6. Misc. Info- Anything I miss?
Just as an offnote, Chulance is Co-GM. You know....so....yeah.
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A long period of peace has been over Earth. 200 years have passed since Omega Shenron fell at the hands of Goku and Vegeta. Many of the brave heroes of that era have passed on, taking with them their legacies. However, as new villians and new troubles arive, new heroes break the surface, to add their name to the wall of Earth's Defenders. Will they succeed, as the heroes of the past? Or will darkness, doom and hopelessness fall over the Earth? FIND OUT THIS TIME, ON DRAGON BALL NS! (I'm so sorry, I couldnt help but do that once.)
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12 postsWest City
West City- Large city of high population. Also this is where the Capsule Corp. building is.
0 postsCapsule Corp. Building
The CC Building
0 postsCentral City
It's a city....in the center of the....world?
0 postsSouth City
South City- The city of PEOPLE!
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North City- The City of Class.
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East City- The City of the Norm
0 postsHercule City
Hercule City- The city named after the hero that defeated Cell, and helped defeat Majin Buu.
0 postsKami's Lookout
The infamous Kami's Lookout.
0 postsKame House
A pink house, with large red letters on the front side of the building. They read "KAME HOUSE".
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He enjoyed it.
It was still early morning though. His internal clock was set to 10:30. Plenty more wrong could happen today. He lowered himself into a squat position, unsure of his next actions. He thought to himself. Today would be a blaaaand day. His could almost "Feel" the dull set in around him. He jumped down from his perch, dragging his heels down the cliff, keeping himself in a steady slide. About halfway down the mountain, he pushed himself from the rocky surface, leaping high in the air. He kept himself in the air for a while, taking one last look out into the distance, before soaring down towards the city at a leisurely pace (to outside view, it was still pretty fast.)
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"Shoren!" blared a loud voice over the speakers. "I knew I'd find you here! You broke the training room again!" Shoren groaned. This always happens. He thought. No one cares if a couple holo-emitters are busted, geez. "Hurry up and get dressed, I need you to run some errands."
Shoren got up and dusted himself off. "Yeees mooom." Shoren exited the training room and went into the locker room across the facility. He changed out of his athletic clothes and pulled on his usual tank top and jeans. I didn't even get any good training in today, He grumbled.
Shoren hovered over the city heading to the grocery store. "Sigh, isn't this why we have butlers? Geez." He was slowly making his way over when he saw a figure in the distance. #30. Huh. he wondered. Haven't seen him in a while. Wonder what he's been up to? Then he heard it. Sirens blaring and security bells ringing. This was Shoren's saving grace. Something to quell the recent streak of dullness this past week. "Ooooh yeah!" Shoren rushed over to the source of the noise.
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His thought was cut off.
The high pitched bell sounded for whatever building that it belonged to, just a constant ring. #30 stopped in the air, staying there for a moment, looking around him, trying to detect the exact source of the alarm.... In probability, it would be the West City Bank. He thought, before turning in the direction of the sound, he saw Shoren had already headed in that direction. Shoren was a smart one, his designer's grandson. Besides. At most this was an armed bank robbery, and he knew regular firearms were useless against him, most anyway. He wasnt quite sure about Shoren, but if he was as strong as scanners indicated, he would be fine too. He could've ignored the siren, especially since Shoren was headed there. But, he decided to 'overwatch' the entire thing. If it got out of hand, he'd give a hand. But this oprotunity was one he couldnt pass up. Powerlevels are a calculation of someone's skill put into numerical value. They do not actually show techneques, or styles. He could gather data on the boy, and see how 'strong he really was.
He followed behind the boy in flight, behind him, but still within intercepting attack range.
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This tailed warrior was King Vegeta, and this was a picture his father had taken. His father had been one of the Greatest Photographers in the Northern Galaxy, hopefully he rested in peace. Kendon however remained in the realm of the living, dealing with the indelible pain caused by the saiyans, and the leader of these the ever so paramount King Vegeta. A wide grin, came upon Kendon's lips. "Do not worry..King Vegeta, I know you have been slain long before this time. I thank Freiza for completing his end of our bargain even with me gone. I'll make sure you pay, I'll wipe out your offspring, your descendants will pay for the sins of their fathers."
Kendon then picked up a green scouter, and put it on. He opened the door to his cabin, and took off flying into the sky, thoughts of vengeance fueling the warrior's mind. Moments later..around ten minutes later to be accurate this creature desperate for revenge stood in the middle of a West City bank, holding a bag filled with money in his right hand, and a machine gun in the left. Fools..I do not require money, for I can take whatever I choose to take..but this should attract competition..either saiyans directly, or people in contact with saiyans. The man laughed, he'd suppressed his power level to a measly 4000.
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A man around the age of seventeen to eighteen, slim and about the height of an average adult, maybe a bit taller. Nah, probably 6'1, the weight 196 lbs. His body chiseled, and eyes dark blue. Average size ears, wearing black and white clothes, spray painted red. Currently having a Grey hoodie, the red spray painting extending to this particular articular of clothing again. This anti social "gangster" released a sigh from his lips, as he looked around the humdrum city.West City huh..it's quiet but not fo long. People were walking around, he looked down at his right hand.
He looked over at a woman, soon to be walking past. Ah now da's time, Imma get some change. This man had plans for a coup, capable of altering his financial status. An impeccable plan, for someone of his caliber of strength and speed. As the woman neared him, he moved like lightning, probably faster. He snatched the woman's purse, and took off into the mid air, flying like a bird. The woman's flight, and fight instinct kicked in too late, as a scene of mass confusion erupted on the side walk Alto had been standing on only moments ago.
He smirked, he'd picked up his cash for the day. He continued to fly, the rain pouring down on the aerial saiyan. "Well then..I got some change, now I best pick up a burger, cuz I need me something to eat" And with that Alto took off.
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When he arrived, he saw a police barricade, policemen armed with weapons all pointed inside the bank. He landed behind them, peering inside the bank. He couldnt see the source of the powerlevel exactly, but he was definitely inside. He walked past the police, nodding to the chief, as he walked inside. His steps were loud as large and heavy as he was. He bent a little to get through the doorway, to see the man with a bag of cash, machinegun in the other hand. He was instantly puzzled. With a power level that great, he should'nt require a firearm. He thought. He kind of brushed the thought off though, as the man spotted him. #30 held his hand out in the universal sign of 'stop'. His stern monotone voice seemed to echo within the main room of the bank, now that the alarm had quieted.
"Please, put your weapon down, and give up. I am not required by any means to harm you, but I will if it is nessicary. I can assure you that no harm will come to you if you cooperate with law enforcement officers and myself." He hoped the man would comply.
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Shoren sped up after #30 and arrived at the bank. Once he landed, he found #30 giving the supposed robber a warning. The policemen behind him were about to say something and stop this teenager from going into the bank, but Shoren looked back with a raised eyebrow saying "That's my robot over there, and if anything, it's you guys who should be staying back." The other police men wouldn't stand for it and attempted to pull him back. Annoyed, he threw them off, with great self restraint. They only flew back onto their cars behind the barricades. He entered the bank behind #30.
"Please, put your weapon down, and give up. I am not required by any means to harm you, but I will if it is nessicary. I can assure you that no harm will come to you if you cooperate with law enforcement officers and myself." Shoren looked at the robber. This whole situation was wierd. For one thing, if he was this powerful, why did he need a gun in the first place? Also, why would he do something as demeaning as bank robbery? And Shoren looked at the strange being, thinking that there was something very odd about this man. He seemed normal and harmless enough, but he just couldn't put his finger on it. His tail wagged curiously.
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He looked ahead, as a man entered the city. He had no info on the man, but he was capable of flight, and he could not detect a power level from him. Hmm an interesting individual, someone of this caliber of uniqueness would definitely know a saiyan. He looked outside, this man seemed to be in contact with the men in blue, police, cops, It doesn't mater what those men are called, I have more important things to think about. Kendon nodded placing his weapon down on the ground. "Of course sir, I apologize for my impulsive behavior, but I require information, and I am a stranger to this world's customs."
He kicked the gun over to tall metallic warrior, and hoped this man could help him locate the saiyans. " I am capable of co-operation, but I am here to save someone's life. He turned and saw Shoren, this man was quite powerful as well, but he had not yet spotted the teenage saiyan's tail.
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He didnt have any data on this man. Nor his race, so he found his explaination believable. "Information, I might be able to help with. I suppose you have been cooperative." He looked behind him. The police still believed the man was armed, so they were keeping their distance. "I will give you the information you want, provided that it is logical to give you such." He wasnt going to spill anything like the location of the largest hospital or city with the most people to the man.
He heard footsteps behind him. Surely the cops wouldnt try and move in after him. He turned his head, his scanners landing on Shoren. He knew the boy would catch up to him sooner or later. He gave a nod to the boy, acknowlaging his presense. He kind of shifted, to stay in front of him partially. He didnt want him to get hurt. Turning back to the odd-looking man. "To save a life? Is someone perhaps in peril? Or going to be?"
This didnt seem to add up. #30 thought. This being is new to Earth....believable. New to customs? Also quite plausable. But armmed robbery is usually not away to get attention on any other planet in his memory. Then again, since I have no intelligence on the man or his race, I couldnt rule that out as a possiblity. The thought rattled his CPU. He again decided to dismiss it.
He refocused on the man. "What are you needing to know?"
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Shoren tried restraining his power level, but it was difficult since he was getting angrier. Not to mention that everything about this guy seemed to only make Shoren's temper that much worse.
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He remained silent after his first words. He noticed however, the sayian child angering. His data indicated that their race's power grows drastically with their emotions. Judging by the increasing power level, rage was one of the more sensitive ones. He stepped out of Shoren's way, so he could actually see the person he was "Interrogating". Should either party try something drastic, he would interfere. He'd definitely mash the face of the man in, however, he'd most likely hold Shoren back. #30 sighed, as he went back to his internal battle of "Misguided, bad, misguided, bad...." He however, still kept close attention on both of the people inside the bank.
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He got up from his laying down position on the ground. His light blue eyes surveyed the scene around him; he was on a hill, standing right next to a tree. Below the hill was a city...though what city it was, he didn't know. It seemed to be bustling with activity, especially around a bank. A bank robbery? The individual knew next to nothing, but his natural instinct to do good and stop evil kicked in, and he flew towards the bank, not knowing what he was going to do when he got there.
As he flapped his giant "bird" wings over the city, one would instantly recognize him as an angel, albeit a bloodied one.
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"Of course I merely seek to save a life, there is someone in danger. He paused "I need to know the location of " Then the boy rudely interrupted him, speaking of how he was suspicious and such. However up to this point everything he said HAD been true, he had no knowledge on earthly customs. Aside from dealing with saiyans, he was a natural pacifist. A smirk came upon his face, as Kendon as well flared up with energy turning. That's a saiyan alright...that energy is unmistakable, the pain they caused me all the details they come flying back into me.
He looked over at Shoren, and chuckled. "Fine then..fool. Let me ask you this, your a saiyan correct?
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He laughed" It really dosen't matter who I am, you see you should be focused on your own life. He sensed another presence, and angel of sorts. Oh great...what is this gathering of the idiots? Kendon then charged forward towards Shoren, throwing a barrage of punches and kicks at the young saiyan.
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Alto had arrived back in his cabin in East City, the place were he resided normally. After loosing his memories, he woke up confused. I had nowhere to go, and then my abilities began to manifest. Flight, Super Strength...I still have no idea what's going on but I know I'm NOT normal...and this ISN'T a dream.. sadly. That's when he looked up sensing a large surge of power down in West City. "Incredible, such power! I'm sensing not one, but two power level's above anything else I've sensed on the planet. Alto looked down then took off, flying towards West City Bank.
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He turned back to Kendon. He was perhaps seeking Saiyans? But Shoren was right. There were very few full blooded saiyans left. If any. He couldnt recall the faces of any full bloods in his data, other than the defeated heroes. There were two full bloods among them, but other than that... He noticed the Alien's power building upon Shoren's power building. He could tell tension was rising. He placed his hand on Shoren's shoulder. "I will be back very shortly, Shoren. Talk, but do not attack unless attacked first." He withdrew his hand, walking towards the bank doors, passing up the angellic man. He nodded to him, but continuing to walk past him. Getting outside, he walked to the police chief.
"I reccomend withdrawl from the area. I also suggest evaccuation of the immidiate area." said #30 in his monotone voice.
"W-what? Why would we do that?!? There is a criminal in there!" the chief replied.
"Things might get a little more violent then first calculated."
"Well, I'm sorry to hear that, but we just CAN'T pack up and go back to the stati-"
"Please. Just withdraw and remove the people in the area. Doing this is going to save lives, more of than simply standing out here. I can not compromise on this. I hope you will do the correct action."
#30 nodded, turning around and starting to head back inside the bank. He got to the doorway just in time to see Kendon charge at Shoren, but he wasnt within intercepting range. He only charged forward himself, hoping Shoren could at least defend himself untill he could stop the Alien.
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#30 flew through the opening in the roof that the two had made. He viewed them both, glaring at the Alien man particularlly. He floated stationary for a moment, examining the man for just a few seconds. His ki was black. An odd color for Ki, but he just supposed it was high powered. Just as the thought touched his CPU, he noticed a drastic increase of power in the Alien man. From 4,000 to around 18,000 in a few seconds. That was a quick transition....meaning he probably had more to come. #30 wasnt worried though.
He smiled to Shoren. "You have skill, Shoren. I am impressed that you are capable of keeping your own against him." He looked at the man again. "But picking on younglings is not a admirable feat. Allow me to propose that I step in? His current power level is impressive, but I believe he is capable of more." He turned to Kendon. "You say you are a race called..."Bodonta. I have no data on such a race. But you will certainly be added. I will also give you the information that surrendur is again advisable. The the odds are not within your favor." He looked over to Shoren, and the "Angelic" character, whom appeared to be on their side. "It is three to one. You are more than likely to be defeated."
#30 took his stance. He was ready to show this man why you talk things out with him, instead of letting fists do the work.

((Now imagine a 6'9, beefy android taking the same stance.))
After a few seconds of break, #30 charged the man, a direct "Dash" at him. His fist reeled back, and came forth with immense power, as he attempted to slug the Alien man's face.
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#30 dashes at Kendon to attack. Shoren glanced at the angel to see if he was going to do anything, but figured he wouldn't wait for this stranger. So he decided to fly around and try to catch Kendon with a small ki shot from the side.
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Capable of more? Well I did surpass the Ginyu Force in strength,but in my time there were people who wielded "true" power such as Lord Freiza. Kendon moved back wards raising his right hand to block the android's punch, however due to focusing his attention and strength on blocking the punch, he was ill prepared to take a full forced blast of ki energy. He was sent flying crashing into the bank bellow, part of it crumbling the screams from hostages within were heard. Kendon's power died down completely, he had simply vanished.
The screams of the people trapped within the rubble was the only noise capable of being heard, and Alto had come flying into the area, slowing down as he sensed the largest power level had simply vanished. What the heck...
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I'll post more, it's 5 am, but expect a post later. I'll try to speed up my posting, eventually. I'll explain what happened to my bondanta soon.
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I posted BTW, I've been soooor busy. Sorrryz. :(
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Aaaannny way, the reasons I like androids (Besides #16) is the fact that they're so...unpredictable. They cant be picked up by scouters, or ki sensing, which means they can hide if they need to. They have all these skills build into them because they're computers. Calculations, energy sensors that can pick up near anything, every kind of vision they could come up with....They can also surprise their foes with their uncalculatory strength. They are all durable, and are unique for the most part. But most of all, they have little itsy bitsy pieces that hide their true strength. #13 could uses the parts from #14 and #15 to become super powered. #16 had removable body parts. And limbs that shot lasers. "Arm lazor. Beech."AND LAZOR EYEZ! I could go on and on, but I try not to ramble...
And thanks for approving Bardock. He's my absolute favorite DBZ character. My motto about him?

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I also posted here, the fight's over for now. And I've gotten Alto the main gang, XD. Here's the link to MY DBZ rp if any of yall are interested, no saiyans but we have NO androids, and quite frankly need some.
posting.php?mode=reply&f=20&t=13624
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In response to IOF.... AH KAN BEE BARDOCKZ?! BANZAI!
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ADD Tenkaichi Budokai to Papya Islands now. Some other places would be..Capsule Corp(Add that into West City) and add pictures of cities.

Earth
Some othe rplace's are Korin's Tower, Kami's lookout, and Kame house. Then there's Gingertown.
IOF is an interesting roleplay. You really should read the rules, it's a sign your an attentive rper. One of the rules states any character from any point in the fiction. So you can use Harry Potter from Book 5, OR book 7. That being said you can use Bardock, ANY Character from DBZ not taken. So JOIN NAO! You can be Bardock, and such.
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*Hides behind majakicall brick wall. (Yes, Majakicall)*
Lets see...anything else that perhaps you could think of that would go well on Earth?
That goes for everyone, too. You have a suggestion? My ears work! (Well, at least one of them does.)
Also, Chully? The RP that you posted seems interesting, but all the characters that I'd want to be (Bardock being #1) would already either be dead, not alive, or absorbed.
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One Angel's "don't exist in DBZ, but then again nor do Bodonta's. What is the origin of the Angelic species? Because the ruling entity of the afterlife is none as King Yemma, a gigantic red ogre. And do you know the basics of DBZ..ki energy, and such? If not I can tell you, you'll be at a major disadvantage in combat with only a bow, and a sword.
Viioo. XD there's no Hercule City yet. Alto would totally rob Bill Gate's Junior Jr's wife, I'll do that if I can XD. As for another character, naah. It depends I'd bad to play antagonists and protagonists. Me I have a villain, and a neutral. Ya know, and Alto's gonna be cool.
Also I posted. Also guys can you check out this RP IOF, it needs people.
roleplay/invasion-of-fiction/
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I'm totally thinking of adding in another character too. Should I, though?
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So we need MORE location's MORE!
Locations
Papaya Islands
Hercule City
Saiyan City
Also you can add location's within location's. The grill you can add to West city, add Tenkachi Budokai as a location listed under Papya Islands
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But, uhm, yes. There you go.
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And I'm sorry that your DBZ RP didnt work out. I hope that either this one will work for you, or perhaps you can make another one, that I could join.
Either way, as I was saying, enjoy yar cities. I'll add things like "Wasteland" "Forest" "Tito's Bar and Grill", and "Zapeto's Shoes" later. (Kidding about the last two, of course.)
Because I can totally see one of our characters trying to either hide or hold up a shoe-store. XD






