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Even Gods Bleed: Divine Wrath

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In Cam Lire hope is whispered in children ears to aid sleep. The reign of the God King is spreading like disease. And though it need curing rebellion is but a dream. However some would see it reality. But is this really a plague or blessing?

Owner: Crooked Thoughts
Game Masters: Crooked Thoughts
Tags: character class, d&d, dark ages, dwarf, elf, epic fantasy, fantasy, fey, high fantasy, magic, medieval, moral alignment, open-ended, orc, rebellion, revenge, sequel, summoning, tiefling, vivid-mind, war (Add Tags »)
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In Cam Lire, hope is something whispered in the ears of children to aid in sleep. The reign of the God King is spreading like a disease. And though it needs curing, rebellion is but a sweet dream. However, there are those who would see it reality.
But, is this really a plague or a blessing in disguise?


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  1. Intro/Plot - A1
  2. About - A2
  3. Roles - A3
  4. Character Creation - A4
  5. Rules - A5
















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"So you want to hear a story, eh?

Hmm.

How about one of treachery, lust, deceit, greed, and revenge?

Yes. I will tell you the story of the man that became a god...

...Our story takes place in a world covered in darkness, both figuratively and literally. A time where brave knights lived and died by a chivalrous code, powerful wizards bent magic to their will, and giant monsters roamed the earth as well as skies. The world was a perilous one, yet good still existed, but one mortal would see it destroyed.

Azrael, a man who was no stranger to hardship, was born into this world with nobody to love him. His mother died giving birth to him and his father was a nameless war casualty. With no family to take care of him or servants, he was sent to the orphanage. From there on, his life would be nothing, but struggle and worry. Azrael's only friend was Magic, which he soon learned he had a knack for. He would later take this ability and use it to elevate his status from bottom feeder to royalty.

He searched for years to enhance his powers, to ascend and become an Arch Mage. It was in this search he acquired The Collector's Grimoire: a book of arcane knowledge gathered by a powerful Arch Mage. It contained many secrets and forbidden knowledge, which Azrael hoped would teach him how to ascend or other ways to increase one's magical prowess. However, this is not what he found. Instead he stumbled across the legend of Abaddon The Destroyer, a demon of immense power.

The legend told how the demon was tricked into immortality and sealed away for his evil deeds. His essence had been trapped in the very pages of the book, bound by The Collector's powers, only to be released by reciting an incantation and performing a non-negotiable blood pact ritual. Azrael pondered over this thought for days. It was not exactly what he wanted, but it would still yield the same results and maybe even more; it was settled. Azrael summoned the demon, seeing this as the way to get what he so desperately desired.

Without fault, the demon was released. In thanks, Abaddon swore his undying allegiance and gave him 4 gifts: A Kingdom: his to rule and do with as he pleases; Immortality: a long life to enjoy all he will come to own; Grand Power: to become a formidable foe, feared by all; A Vast Army: To forever secure his position and kingdom.

The deed was done. Abaddon and Azrael had signed a soul binding contract, which guaranteed both parties everything they wanted. But, Abaddon was no Genie; he couldn't just snap his fingers and the warlock's wishes would come true. The kingdom, army, and even the power would still have to be earned and taken, thus began The Conquering.

The Conquering is the name of the shortest war in history, lasting only a month. There was no strategy, no tactics, it was more of senseless slaughter; anything in the army’s path was obliterated. The Old King, was dethroned and killed, Azrael's kingdom had been claimed. In the years following so would his other gifts: immortality, grand power, and of course his vast army. Strength now proven, this gave birth to a new being that the world would soon come to know as their eternal ruler: God King Azrael and The Holy Kingdom of Cam Lire.

However, not everyone saw Azrael as their god, some saw him as a plague that must be cured. So as his armies marched to new lands, they met opposition. Even rebellions started rising from within his kingdom. It would seem his dream would be differed just a moment longer. Despite all his might, people were still finding the will to stand and fight. Call it stupidity or courage, however small, hopes still existed. Because no matter how powerful or strong he became, everyone knew, even a god can bleed...

Our story resumes thirty years later. It is there, where things become interesting:

As The God King battles to keep his throne and extend his reign across the world. Meanwhile he cannot trust anyone, but a demon who wishes to take his soul. Not even his family or allies are to be trusted, for they have their own secret motives and goals they wish to see succeed. With rebellion always on the rise, untrustworthy partners watching his back and his goal well within reach - Will he obtain what he seeks or will he die trying?

...We shall soon see..."


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This RP is about the reign of the God King, Azrael and the events leading to his death or complete control of the world. How the story unfolds is up to you and me as roleplayers. Nothing is predetermined, depending on what happens, the roleplay could last a month or a few days. Creativity will be the most important quality in this RP.

You should know that this is also sort of a sequel. We will begin the RP in Chapter 2 of the story, much has changed in the kingdom due to the actions that took place in Chapter 1. This is available to be read, but it won't be necessary. There will be multiple roles that must be filled before the RP will begin, but they are only titles, which means you still have creative freedom.

It is pretty clear that this will be a character driven RP. The story and outcome of events will be heavily dependent on your character and their actions. However, this is not a never-ending story, but it is very open. Probably even more so since it will not be clear on how to achieve what outcome. Even though this will be a fantasy RP, I would like everything to be realistic and somewhat logical. Meaning, cities are miles apart, so your character shouldn’t go from A -– B in seconds.

The roleplay takes place in the Dark Ages or Medieval time period, on a fantasy earth. More precisely, in a country called Cam lire which is a fictional variant of England. This is Epic Fantasy, and so there will be multiple races available and mythical beast and creatures roam the earth. They are unique to the world, but not unheard of. Just a note on the language -- I would like it to be authentic to the time and era, but it’s not necessary. Just avoid using slang and do your best.

Like all of my RPs, this is information heavy. So this is not for rookies are those who hate to read extra details. Also, when it is time to begin posting, the IC will be located in the forums. No worries, I will provide a link.

Character interaction is also very important to the success of the roleplay. I will try as hard as I can to help everyone interact with each other, since I am GM. But, also try to do this yourself. This is easier with small roleplays, but in case this RP is big, then don’t be afraid to send another player a PM and begin planning.

So just remember, creativity and character interaction, are absolute for the roleplay to succeed and be great.


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To help give a bit of creative direction, I am offering roles for characters. These are not necessary, nor are they important to the story. They are only optional and you will still have complete creative freedom, if you decide to take one. However, some roles do have a required race attached to them, gender, or a bit age specific. That is a far as creative restrictions go on roles.

Roles are little more, than titles with a specific background and occupation attached. You can have multiple roles depending on which you choose, a few a them can be doubled as well. Specifically, the Queen role and the Offspring role. For the roles that can only have one RPer, it will not be a first come first serve, but simply who is better suited. However, if I have already accepted your character for that role, then it is no longer available to others, unless you quit or abandon the RP.

If you have a idea for a different role, no need to PM me, just go ahead and give yourself the title. The one's I list below are just basic ones that I came up with. Not a lot of thought went into them and I won't be updating list, unless it is to say a role has been taken.


Roles

  1. The God King's Queen: The queen to the God King, this role is highly customizable. Can be any race, but must be female and at least over the age of 20. I would like for this to be his current, but whether she actually has love for him, is to be decided by you.
    Role Taken By:
    • Eirene Haya Wynter, God Queen played by Butterfly Princess


  2. God King's Offspring: Far from important or necessary, you have the option of playing one of King's son's or daughter. This means you are a prince or princess, or it could mean you are just a street kid. Depending on whether your mother was a queen or just a fling, or if she even lives in castle could change your life. This role is completely customizable.
    Role Taken By:
    • Eldest Son: Terryn Wynter played by Aftershock
    • Eldest Daughter: Iphigenia Wynter played by That one guy
    • Second Son: Azul Wynter played by Thepyromaker
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  3. The Sealed Demon: Very important, but not necessary. I decided to make this role a option for others to play, instead of playing it myself. However there is a time limit, this role will only be available until I have finished the character sheet for the God King, after that, I will take the role myself. Other than that, PM me if you are interested in the role so we can discuss the specifics and your idea, since this role too is customizable.
    Role Taken By:

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  4. God King's Advisor: At first this role was the same role as the Sealed Demon, but I decided that they could be separate entities entirely. As this role, you play the God King's go-to-guy/girl for advice. Consequently, you are someone that the God King trust, therefore you could have grew up together, be related to him, or maybe you were appointed to him once he became King. This role is completely customizable, though I would assume they are of adult age.
    Role Taken By:

    • Head Alchemist: Seric Uradel played by Lifecharacter
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  5. God King's Army General: The leader of Cam Lire's most formidable army, this too was thought to be a role shared with the sealed demon, but I decided otherwise. I would assume this role to belong to a lethal warrior or a brilliant tactician, but it is up to you. Whether they have history with the God King or not is also optional. This role also does not have to be male, could even be paired with the Queen. So needless to say, this role is completely customizable, though I would assume they are of adult age.
    Role Taken By:

    • Karthus Drivan played by Thepyromaker

  6. God King's Champion: The people's champion, this role differs from the general but is similar. The character will be in charge of defending the capital and the surrounding area, also castle defense. This role is completely customizable.
    Role Taken By:

    • Kristoff Deamhar played by Leli

  7. Royal Spy: In charge of handling discrete royal business, you are to be the invisible hand to the royal family. The character is free to lead their own life, but when beckoned their job is to accomplish any task their master sets forth. This role is completely customizable.
    Role Taken By:

    • Amara a'Jin played by wakeangel

  8. Rebellion Leader: The leader of the infamous rebellion. Whether they have started recruiting or not, this character doesn't even have to know he or she is going to be leading a rebellion. But, one day soon, they will have to own up to the title. Somehow this character had to have been affected personally by the God King's reign. So besides the bit about the history, this character is completely customizable.
    Role Taken By:

    • General: William Campborn played by Irish Wolf
    • Leader: Halden Fynolt played by 7achary
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  9. Elder Elf: In Wood Eleven societies, exist village councils composed of the most distinguished families' eldest members. So you will be playing one of these, primarily the eldest on the council holding the most power. This role is not needed, but I thought it would be good to have a least one character representing the elves. So this role is completely customizable except the age requirement, which puts your character at the age of an elder of some elven family.
    Role Taken By:
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  10. Dwarf Clan Leader: In Shield Dwarven society they are divided into clans, built along family ties and political allegiances. These clans are usually led by hereditary rulers, often monarchs of a sort and descended from the founder of the clan. Much like the previous role, you will be doing the same here. So needless to say, this role is completely customizable.
    Role Taken By:
    • Chief Zon Mezbuthfoker played by Hydrall
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  11. Helborne Empress: Ruler of the biggest community of Helborne and ally of The God King. This is one of the few roles that require you to be an ally to the God King, at least for the beginning of the roleplay. This role is completely customizable, despite the title saying Empress.
    Role Taken By:

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  12. Fey King & Queen: Rulers of the infamous Fey, you have finally reemerged after years of being hiding. Where their allegiance lies, no one is sure as no one even knew they still existed These roles are completely customizable, except for race and one must be male and the other female.
    Role Taken By:

    • King: Galizur, The Forsaken played by Maestro
    • Queen: Mireille, The Idealist played by Cer

  13. Orc Chieftain: Whether this Orc is the biggest savage of them all or simply the smartest, they are the absolute ruler of a confederation tribes. This role can be female, but it is unlikely as Males are the dominant gender in orcish society and females are little more than a prized possession. Either way, I will still allow this role to be completely customizable.
    Role Taken By:

    • Chieftain of the Soulripper Tribe: Nargash Soulripper played by TemplarWarden
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Character creation for this RP is a bit complex, or maybe the better word(s) is intricate and overly detailed. There are character classes, specializations, different races, moral alignments, and other choices. To help you, I have created multiple info pages which links can be found in the Links section above or in the OOC Tab.

I have substituted moral alignments form personality descriptions, since to me that describes the character even better than you might be able to. Though if you want, you can still add in a personality description. Also I do sometimes prefer pictures, but a written description is more than welcome as well. And though I have said this before, I will say it again: be creative. There are too many options available, so characters should only be similar in race.

Also let's discuss character balance for a second. Think of a character as a six sided die. If we use a typical human as the average norm, their stats would fall into line as 3’s across the board -- with a 1 & 2 = Below Average, 4’s = Above Average (but nothing spectacular), and 5 & 6 = Well Above Average & Really Good.

So where does exceptional or perfect fit in?

Well this takes us well past typical human greatness and the exponentially harder to achieve 7 & 8 = Exceptional; 9 = Near Perfect; 10 = Perfect.

How do you get there?

Racial Strengths, (i.e.) an elf mage is likely to be superior to humans because of their longevity and heritage. Or if you are studying in one area to become exceptional, though you will probably falter in another after devoting time and resources to one and not the other.

Unless you are auditioning for the role such as a God, one should consider a more mediocre approach to character creation. The upper levels are just that, the exception to the rule.

Just a note: though I have made a character application, you do not have to use it. Although I require the same information to be present somewhere within your sheet. So you might be better off using it anyway. Also please try to restrain from listing personality traits as weaknesses. If you really must make it so, then at least list a good one.


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Rules

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  1. This RP is about as Adult as it can get while staying within RPG rules, so just remember that.

  2. Quality over quantity.

  3. Be creative. Don't be afraid to let your imagination run away. I have a leash I can tug on if you get too far away...

  4. I want only serious, dedicated, experienced RPers only. I feel I have those skills, so it is only right I ask for the people of this RP to have the same.

  5. Your character can and might die, so keep that in mind.

  6. Be familiar with text fighting. It isn't necessary for you know how to text fight, but it will be appreciated in fight scenes.

  7. Just because this is a fantasy RP, doesn't mean your character is a one man army.

  8. A tad bit of common sense is required here. Not to be a jerk, but I'm just saying...

  9. Once your character has died, they are forever gone from the RP. Unless, they are brought back to life; which the method will have to be discussed first.

  10. You can have more than one character, as long as you can proficiently RP them.

  11. Also please DO NOT POST anywhere EXCEPT the OOC, until I say otherwise.

  12. If you quit, please abandon your character. It helps make room so other's characters can be seen.

  13. READ EVERYTHING! Not just because I spent hours of my life writing it, but just because it explains a lot of the RP. And will save a lot of time and questions.

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Character Portrait: God King: Azrael "No weapon formed against me shall prosper!"
Character Portrait: William Campborn Mercenary captain looking to make some coin
Character Portrait: Liana Belladonna A Rogue Woodelf with a dangerous liking for battle and penchant for caustic wit.
Character Portrait: Klause ???Ichor??? von Stein "Combine science and magic, then you???ll have a whole new field of knowledge to explore."
Character Portrait: Thorrim Morzak "Aye, me Bianca will see ye head, an any who else wish to stand before me."
Character Portrait: Halden Fynolt A man who calls himself Hal Goodman.
Character Portrait: Chief Zon Mezbuthfoker "We made your steel, we mined your gems, we designed your machines. Just try and turn them against us."
Character Portrait: Nargash Soulripper Chieftain of the Soulripper tribe - Master of Demons
Character Portrait: Galizur: The Forsaken "We all have a destiny..."
Character Portrait: Mireille: The Idealist "Fate has a funny way of twisting things..."
Character Portrait: Caspian Sterling "Free my hands, and I'll free your heart from your chest."
Character Portrait: Cirrus Scarlueit If you shall dare taunt or gloat, in the blink of an eye he'll cut your throat.
Character Portrait: Karthus Drivan Power in unity, Death with Fracture
Character Portrait: Azul Wynter I am only Eclipsed by my father!
Character Portrait: Anthea
Anthea played by Weirdo
The Lost Unicorn
Character Portrait: Fiona Draconis "I'll forge my own path!"
Character Portrait: Octavin
Octavin played by Fortissimo
"This one will not shatter from grief or sorrow!"

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0 sightings Tanith Kelvaskur played by Kurokiku
"Do not fear going forward slowly. Fear only to stand still."
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"The greatest injustice is using the law to keep justice at bay."
Character Portrait: Abaddon: The Destroyer
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"And I will destroy those who worshiped me but no longer do."
Character Portrait: Terryn Wynter
0 sightings Terryn Wynter played by Aftershock
"I fear no man, no fate, no God. You have respect, but I will not cower before you Father"

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Places in Even Gods Bleed: Divine Wrath

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2 postsFantasy Earth

Welcome to the dark ages: dragons, knights, wizards, and evil kings... What a nice place.

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0 postsCam Lire

"Welcome to the wonderful world of Cam Lire"

Ethona Thumbnail

0 postsEthona

"Where it all began."

Illumine Thumbnail

0 postsIllumine

"The Oasis City."

Rebbanburg Thumbnail

0 postsRebbanburg

"Nothing here but, beatin' down hopes and dreams."

Fey Wilds Thumbnail

0 postsFey Wilds

"Rumored home of the reemerged Fey race."

Ashmere Thumbnail

0 postsAshmere

"A civilization born anew from the ashes of the past."

Wolfeil Thumbnail

0 postsWolfeil

"Looking for a fight or some rare goods? Look no further."

Calvarre Fortress Thumbnail

0 postsCalvarre Fortress

"A rebel refuge and home to Asher Thrawn."

Wralandir Thumbnail

0 postsWralandir

"The new dwarven homeland."

Iceloch Village Thumbnail

0 postsIceloch Village

"The mountain gateway village."

Cinder Island Thumbnail

0 postsCinder Island

"Home to a titan of destructive force."

Belholt Thumbnail

0 postsBelholt

"The savagelands."

Mallowacre Thumbnail

0 postsMallowacre

"The capital of the savagelands."

Aelden Thumbnail

0 postsAelden

"Home of the ever growing forest."

Treefall Thumbnail

0 postsTreefall

"The grand home of the Elder Council."

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# Fantasy Earth, 2011-08-22 03:20:57, as written by Crooked Thoughts
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In Cam Lire, hope is something whispered in the ears of children to aid in sleep. The reign of the God King is spreading like a disease. And though it needs curing, rebellion is but a sweet dream.
However, there are those who would see it reality.
But, is this really a plague or a blessing in disguise?




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Everything here belongs to the old RP or Chapter 1. I place there for the purposes of displaying the old rating and links for veterans and new members who might want to go back and look at things, mostly the the first chapter IC.

Characterization: Advanced Plot: Proficient Depth: Advanced Style: Advanced Mechanics: Advanced Overall: Proficient


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Izoi wrote:This role-play makes great use of detail and the time period that the plot occurs within. The characters are thoroughly thought out, as are the posts despite the great deal of content in this role-play; which can be off putting to some. If one is seeking a very advanced, well thought out, fantasy setting and plot, this one is most certainly worth looking into.


Characterization: Advanced Plot: Proficient Depth: Advanced Style: Advanced Mechanics: Advanced Overall: Advanced


28/30
LynIsMe wrote:I thoroughly enjoyed reading this! The characters are well-defined, and the plot is progressing very smoothly. The use of depth in everyone's posts, as well as the grammar and mechanics make the story very interesting to read. The Storyteller's opening post was a great intro, and the following posts were all insightful to each character's personality and background. The majority of the posts were all vertical, furthering the plot and character depth. The use of style in the posts was also attention-grasping. I'm looking forward to seeing where this story will end. Great job

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# Fantasy Earth, 2011-08-22 08:27:57, as written by Crooked Thoughts
Chapter 2 Story Arcs


  1. Story Arc 1 - Calvarre Fortress Siege: Rebellion Leader Asher Thrawn, suspects the God King has discovered that he is the last remaining rebel general and is planning an assault on his fortress. Any day now, under the guise as a tax collector, the attack will begin. As a result, he has begun gathering soldiers and mercenaries from across the land to aid in the fight. However, he has suddenly gone missing. Rumors say he has run in fear of his life, leaving everyone to suffer for his actions. But William Campborn, mercenary leader of the Lions, has decided to stay and fight; he, his men, and what remains of the hired sell swords and rebels will see this siege through to the bloody end.

      Character List
    1. William Campborn played by Irish Wolf
    2. Halden Fynolt played by 7achary
    3. Klause 'Ichor' von Stein played by Saxious
    4. Chief Zon Mezbuthfoker played by Hydrall
    5. Galizur: The Forsaken played by Maestro
    6. Mireille: The Idealist played by Cer
    7. Fiona Draconis played by Weirdo
    8. Joshua Foulke played by Solo Wing Pixy
    9. Kristoff Deamhar played by Leli
    10. Seric Uradel played by Lifecharacter
    11. Alexander Levine played by zane saphire
    12. Wylie Tian played by Shiva
  2. Story Arc 2 - The Ostasos Tournament: It's the eve of the biggest tournament in Wolfeil and everyone is making preparations to enter or enjoy the show. For many, this is not just another chance to make some extra coin, no, it is much more. This is a shot at freedom for slaves and gladiators, for if they win their reward is worth more than any amount of gold. But for professional fighters, this is what they have worked all year for: the glory, the gold, and the respect. This is the event of the year and spectators from all across Cam Lire are expected to show up.

      Character List
    1. Empress Shar Moedma played by Lovely VonSchultz
    2. Chivalry played by Kurokiku
    3. Caspian Sterling played by Yonbibuns
    4. Tanith Kelvaskur played by Kurokiku
    5. Wylie Tian played by Shiva
    6. Liana Belladonna played by BleedingCrimson
    7. Cirrus Scarleuit played by Shiva
    8. Grief Sorrow played by ÆSIR Society
    9. Kaelyn Vetr played by Solo Wing Pixy
  3. Story Arc 3 - The Savages of Aelden: The God King has had it with the wood elves of the Aelden; they have thwarted his plans for the last time. Too long has he had his eyes set on harvesting their precious lumber? But instead of behaving like loyal subjects, they refuse what is rightfully his. No more though. He will have what he wants and a fleet of Warforged shall guarantee it. However, before he can do things his way, he has agreed to a final meeting of peace between the elder elf, all arranged by his eldest daughter. A treaty will be discussed, where both parties will get what they want, or... he will go with plan B.

      Character List
    1. God King: Azrael played by ÆSIR Society
    2. Iphigenia Wynter played by That one guy
    3. Karthus played by Pyromaker
    4. Nicolaisujiama Hansukemiro played by Winds Of Fate
    5. Nargash Soulripper played by TemplarWarden
    6. Galizur: The Forsaken played by Maestro
    7. Mireille: The Idealist played by Cer
  4. Story Arc 4 - Blood Feud: With the God King away on business and most of his council the same, there is no one to watch over the kingdom; except, Prince Azul. Seeing this as his chance to shine, the young mage steps up and accepts responsibility. Has the Blood Prince bit off more than he can chew? Or will he be handle the reigns, especially with the help of his long lost brother: Prince Terryn, the original son of god.

      Character List
    1. Azul Wynter played by Thepyromaker
    2. Terryn Wynter played by Aftershock
    3. Anthea played by Weirdo
    4. Amara a'Jin played by wakeangel

Even Gods Bleed: Divine Wrath: Out Of Character (OOC)

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Re: [OOC] Even Gods Bleed: Divine Wrath

Well, as sad as it is to say, I guess I'll bow out of this role-play since it isn't going anywhere. It was fun while it lasted, and there were a lot of things in store; it's disapointing to see all of it go to waste. If anything happens with this, feel free to send me a PM. ;)


Re: [OOC] Even Gods Bleed: Divine Wrath

Dang, months inbetween posts.

Well, so far my characters are not really doing much. My jester's just being foolish as usual, and the other one is poking his head around trying to get a grasp of what's going on with the rebellion and the godking.


Re: [OOC] Even Gods Bleed: Divine Wrath

I suppose I'll stand up and break the eerie silence. What's been going on, guys?


Re: [OOC] Even Gods Bleed: Divine Wrath

I was just curious as to what was going on.....


Re: [OOC] Even Gods Bleed: Divine Wrath

A missing GM doesn't help either.

I will try to get things back on track next week. But, a missing 7 does present a major problem, one that I have been trying to fix. I will have to see who else is missing as well... good thing is, I think everyone is still willing to be part of this.


Re: [OOC] Even Gods Bleed: Divine Wrath

People are just busy; plus, 7achary is a rather important factor. With him having been gone, for me at least, things have slowed. I really can't do much without him so I'm unforunately at a standstill myself.


Re: [OOC] Even Gods Bleed: Divine Wrath

Sorry for the double post, but there hasn't been a post in the IC since September 28......is everything alright?


Re: [OOC] Even Gods Bleed: Divine Wrath

Is it me, or are things going rather slowly?

Kinda wondering what's going on.....I hope all is well with everyone.


Re: [OOC] The Rebellion Force

I suppose I could get involved with the Dwarves if need be. As an unofficial ambassador (temporarily) I should put my characters talents to work. Plus, I have nothing to do at the moment with 7achary being away.


Re: [OOC] The Rebellion Force

Well, we are close to a cave, and since the dwarfs also have tunnels through the mountains, you could send diplomats through there to establish contact with the rebels. It is a dangerous cave with mad cave goblins and huge spiders, but hey...Nothing comes easy these days!


Re: [OOC] The Rebellion Force

Gyah, I need some way to get the dwarves involved in this war before it's over. Are there any Rebel diplomats or anything who could head north in an effort to get allies, or will I have to write some in myself/make something up?


Re: [OOC] Even Gods Bleed: Divine Wrath

7achary being gone really does present a problem; especially for me. I do have a few paragraphs worth of a post but I feel that it's rather useless to finish it since it hinges on 7achary's reply. Plus, I need him to look over what I have so far for a few reasons. This kind of sucks. D:

~ Maestro ~


Re: [OOC] Even Gods Bleed: Divine Wrath

Sorry I meant Solo Wing Pixy, for whatever reason I confuse the two of them all the time. This weekend's my birthday so I don't have too much time, but I promise I'll have something up by Monday, but more than likely Sunday afternoon.

Sorry Wolf, you'll have to wait at least another day before my warforged fall by your hands.


Re: [OOC] Even Gods Bleed: Divine Wrath

Well 7 may be gone for another week or more. When I talked with him last week, he said he could be gone more two week, maybe longer


Re: [OOC] Even Gods Bleed: Divine Wrath

Dear awesome other kids people in the tournament arc:

Uh, so... what now? Are we skipping some chunk of time or what? If so, which one of us is writing that? I'm not really sure what to do from here, since I have no only a pretty general idea of what's going on, as usual.


Re: [OOC] Even Gods Bleed: Divine Wrath

Waiting on the posts of the others in the arc. Since 7achary is supposed to be on my side I'm waiting to see if he makes any actions. I can assure you though I'll be breaking formation and rushing the walls out of sheer; "Fuck me sideways they have more everything than us!"


Re: [OOC] Even Gods Bleed: Divine Wrath

So like, I dropped some fire on the attacking army. Gonna get a response?


Re: [OOC] Even Gods Bleed: Divine Wrath

Sorry for the delay everyone; then again, since 7achary is a bit busy, I'm not in much of a rush to have my post up. All the same, I should have it up tomorrow after I talk with 7achary. In my post I'm introducing my characters NPC guard; with that said, expect it to be a big confusing perhaps. I didn't really go into explaining their appearance or anything. I'll have the sheets up in time for my post. ^^

~ Maestro ~


Re: [OOC] Even Gods Bleed: Divine Wrath

Oh yes! I forgot! XD I'm keeping a standard paragraph to get everything else right (pic, font, bold, etc.) Sorry!


Re: [OOC] Even Gods Bleed: Divine Wrath

Hey Sax, you need to edit the time for your post. The fight is starting a little after 12Pm. Your post is at 10:30AM