Introduction

Previously on Mass Effect: On the Edge...
"Don't concern yourself with the dead too much, Commander... There may too be much of it to handle if you do."
The Illusive Man, the single leader of the pro-human organization called Cerberus, has dispatched a team of commanders and their state-of-the-art war ships to fight off the Collectors at any cost. One year ago, The SSV Normandy, an advanced Alliance stealth frigate, encountered the enigmatic species... and was destroyed. Commander Shepard's body was recovered, at a price, by Cerberus; and the Lazarus cell absorbed virtually unlimited resources into the revival of the galaxy's greatest hero. While the project continues on, projecting at least another year before the commander can be awakened, Omni Cell chases the Collectors from one rim of the galaxy to another; attempting to stall their abductions of humans for as long as possible.
Commander Jonathan Titus, a former Alliance marine and expert marksman, takes command of the Vindicator. The man constantly finds himself locked in a personal battle of moral integrity; always trying to make the right decisions, while maintaining his steadfast loyalty to Cerberus and the Illusive Man. But the actions of such a black and white organization begin to take their toll, and Titus now questions both his employer... and himself.
Jason Horn, a man that literally knows no fear, commanded the SIC Titan at the beginning of the long mission. His special team of highly-skilled and deadly commandos known as "the Demons" would follow him into any situation, even it meant sky diving from a mile high. Despite the man's unparalleled ability to "kill some bugs and save some babes", the die-hard soldier ends up in a coma after sabotaging a Collector cruiser. The resulting battle, however, cost him both his ship and most of his original crew. Now in a coma, hanging between life and death, his second in command, Kelly Invaru, must take control of their new ship: the Call of Victory.
Vala Buchan - an expert in infiltration, sabotage, and assassination - is personally assigned by the Illusive Man to oversee Omni Cell's mission, and ensure that the commanders bring themselves together. The objective seems simple at first, but proves to be difficult when she finds that working with the teams brings about the self-realization of her own weaknesses. A house divided cannot stand, but Operative Buchan, as strong-willed as ever, will ensure that such a division ceases to exist.
Tia St. Jean - otherwise known as "the Saint" - finds herself in a near future where the war between the turians and humans she once fought in has been long put to rest. After being placed into a medically induced coma during the Battle of Shanxi, twenty-seven years pass until she is brought out of cryo-sleep. Her left arm, crippled at Shanxi, is replaced with a bio-synthetic limb. After training, mental adaptation, and countless hours of physical therapy, Tia becomes accustomed to her new arm and uses it to her advantage as both a skilled martial artist and combat engineer. Starting off, she finds herself working alongside Commander Horn's team, and then transfers to Titus' commander after a mix-up at the Hephaestus research station. While aboard the Vindicator, the hardened soldier faces off against her inner prejudice when she must work alongside a turian on Titus' team, named Villayn. She can only consider transferring back to Horn's team, under acting-Commander Invaru, a relief.
Now, beaten and bruised, but willing to carry on until Shepard is awakened, the Omni Cell teams wait patiently for the Collectors' next move. Meanwhile, the Illusive Man takes his own initiative, and begins to dig up the past...
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“You’re beating me faster and faster, Maya.” The woman in question laughed, drumming pale fingers against the table which held their game. “You might actually be able to beat Ed here soon.” Logan said of their auburn haired Corporal, catching the man's hazel gaze for a brief moment as the mention of his name.
“Not likely.” She snorted, sparing a glance over to the man in question, who sat with his back turned as his eyes flicked over an e-reader. “Corporal Sun Tzu royally trounces my ass every time he so much as looks at the board.”
Logan fixed her with a look, pushing one of his pawns forward to start the game. “Ed isn’t that good. He’s got some chops, but Sam always served his ass to him.” Maya raised an eyebrow, mirroring Logan’s opening move. “What was the final score again?”
“Something along the lines of 12-13, her favour.”
“Actually, it was 13-13.” The corporal glanced over his shoulder, his comrades fixing him with a suspicious look. “We had a private final match.” Logan shook his head, as Maya grinned widely at Ed. “What?”
“Private? Never pegged you as the type for those kinds of games, Ed.” She winked, sparing a glance to the board as Logan stroked his goatee for a moment before he knocked another pawn forward. Once again, she mirrored the move, earning a disgruntled grunt from her opponent. “C’mon, Logan, I don’t have all day to trounce your ass.”
“Me and Sam had a purely professional relationship, regardless of your baseless accusations.” There was a moment’s pause, before the corporal spun his chair around to face the board proper. “It’s just nice to play a game every now and again without the peanut gallery.” Sparing a glance down at the board, he moved Logan’s queen. “Checkmate, by the way.”
Logan blinked once, as Maya floundered to see a way out. Edward grinned, tucking his e-reader into his pocket. “You can’t do that, Ed! He never would have thought of that!”
“It’s my job to guide you, even if sometimes it means I have to put you in your place.” Rising from his seat, he rubbed his knuckle on Logan’s head, who simply grunted in annoyance, resetting the board. “I suspect our newest member has gotten himself into some kind of shit by now, since it shouldn’t take an hour to fetch some coffee.”
“It’s a big ship, he probably just got lost.” Logan replied, as Maya sighed and rose from her seat. “Aren’t we playing another?”
“Nope, Ed’s got me going to find Roger.” She ran her hands through her short black hair for a moment, as Ed fixed her with a look.
“I never said to.” She jabbed an accusatory finger into his chest, earning a grin. Despite her apparent sourness, she smiled good naturedly.
“I can read your face like a damn book, Ed. ‘Oh, Maya, be a dear and fetch the poor boy for me?’ It’s written all over your sorry mug.” She threw her hands up in mock surrender. “I’m just too nice for my own damn good!” Ed snatched her empty seat, watching her punch the door access panel. “And for the record, those low cut shirts were not purely professional, Ed.” The corporal rolled his eyes as the door hissed shut.
Logan shook his head in amusement, moving one of his pawns forward. “I wasn‘t aware your face spoke like some old British man.” A few moves passed in companionable silence, before Logan spoke again. “A private match though? Does that even really count?” Edward was silent for a moment, before a wry smile stretched across his face. There was silence between the two as slow realization dawned on the private’s face. “You didn’t.”
“It was one hell of a private match.”
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Roger Pollard sat lazily on one of the spare fuel units in the shuttle bay, sipping at his lukewarm coffee as the technicians went about their regular maintenance on the Kodiak’s. Rubbing a hand against the short brown stubble that wrapped around his chin, his jade eyes watched with feigned interest, even if his mind was on other things. Predominantly the boredom. So far, the Call of Victory had been about as dull as boot camp. It didn’t help that he’d been told nothing but rumours of how bloody badass the Commander was, constantly heading into the fray. Disappointing didn’t even really sum up his feelings about the giant floating tub. Even footsteps to his right drew his gaze, and the private grimaced at the sight of Maya Salazar. “I was hoping you wouldn’t come after me for at least another ten minutes. Circle back around and then I’ll come along willin-ow!”
Hoisting him up via a vice grip on his ear, Maya smiled, although it wasn’t exactly the most comforting thing he’d ever seen. “How about we go now, mmkay?” She released him, grinning all the wider as he muttered a few swears under his breath.
“Yes, ma’am.”
“Save it for the officers, Roger.” She snorted. “Hell, you probably don’t even need it for them.”
“What about dear old Leo?” The man’s reputation had preceded him enough that even the relatively fresh private even knew he was and what he was like.
That gave her pause, and she scratched at her neck awkwardly. “Good point…why don’t we wait a bit before making enemies of the command staff? Much better suited to a Monday.” The marines started back the way Maya had come, travelling silently before Roger decided to break the ice.
“We’ll need to hit the mess for more coffee.”
“Procrastinating already? Oh, Ed is going to love you to pieces.” They rounded the corner and started down the hall towards the lift. “Have you heard the rumour kicking around?” Roger shook his head, stuffing his hands in the pockets as they boarded the lift. “Apparently we’ve got some high ranking brass on board.”
“Great, more people with a stick up their ass.”
“Captain Horn.”
Roger blinked once. “Wait…ain’t the Commander Horn?” Maya nodded with a knowing smile. “So then who the hell is…oh!”
“That’s the thought.”
Roger sighed, leaning on the railing as the lift rumbled to life. “Well, that’s just charming. Daddy comes to see his baby and we all get our heads torn off in the process.” Maya laughed, thumping the private on the arm.
“Daddykins is just worried. You’d be the same way if you had kids.” The lift opened, and the marines disembarked. “Assuming the rumour is true. Gossip isn’t exactly reliable.”
“Like the shit I’ve heard about our armourer? A half-breed krogan with territory issues and arms the size of me.”
“That TJ chick?”
Roger blinked in surprise. “Chick? It’s a woman?” His mind immediately began conjuring an image of what such a thing would look like, and he mock-gagged. “I’m avoiding the armoury.” They entered the mess moments later, noting the bitter moods of the few crew kicking around the area. A few muttered words about a Captain were heard, but other than that, no real clues materialized. “Maybe we should hurry back…”
“I’m inclined to agree.” They wasted no time filling up the cups of coffee for Logan and Edward, before grabbing their own and heading down the corridor towards the crew quarters. “With a little bit of luck, we’ll be able to slip into the room without running into this Captain.”
“Fortunately for you, I’m a lucky guy.” Roger winked as they rounded a corner, only to come face to face with a slab of a man decorated in more medals than either had fingers. There was a brief moment of silence as the marines craned their heads to look up at the rough face, before both visibly swallowed at the disapproving glare on the man’s face.
“What was that about being lucky?” Maya hissed under her breath, quickly shoving both her mugs into the private’s arms and snapping a salute. “Sir!” Roger swore, setting the mugs down carefully before mirroring the action.
The Captain returned the salute. “At ease.” They obeyed quickly, watching as he gave them both a slow once over, eyes narrowing when he finished the impromptu inspection. “Judging by your posture and your physique private, I would suggest more time in the gym, and less time in the mess hall.” Roger didn’t dare break the man’s gaze.
Operative Invaru, appearing from behind the massive Captain, spoke quickly. “Sir, these are Private Pollard and Spec-”
“I don’t care about names, only performance. I’m not liking what I’m seeing.”
“Sir, Private Pollard is a fresh recruit. He’s only been in active service for as long as the Call of Victory and a large portion of his training was dedicated to Kodiak piloting. Lt. O’Ryan will have him up to speed ASAP.” Maya spoke quickly, but in a respectful tone he’d never really heard the usually rough woman use.
The Captain’s gaze shifted to her. “Are you trying to make up excuses for the Private here, Specialist? If he needs you to stand up for him, then you are only solidifying the fact that he needs to train harder. Operative Kelly, continue with the tour. We're done here." He moved past them, the marines parting to let him past. Operative Invaru followed behind silently, and Roger bit his lip long enough for the two to get out of ear shot.
Once they felt safe enough, the private growled. “When his ship crashes because his pilot is too much of a roid monkey, I’m going to piss on his grave.” Maya patted his shoulder.
“I don’t think the Commander will appreciate that.”
“If the Commander is anything like his father…”
“Stuff it. Last thing I need is one of the vets hearing you trash talking and putting you in the Med-bay. Grab the coffee and let’s get moving.”
“Yes, yes, poor little Roger can’t fight the big bad marines.”
“Don’t worry, I’ll protect you.” She grinned as the private retrieved the mugs. “Can’t have someone breaking your precious little face before I do.”
“You’re all heart, Maya.”
OOC Notes
"Titus recovered the body to the Vindicator. He's having it sent to you as we speak." It was no excuse; Leng never gave excuses. He simply gave the Illusive Man the information he wanted.
The Man took in another brief drag of his cigarette and then stood up from his chair. His tall figure cast a shadow across the glistening black tiles, blocking out the center of the large violet star behind him. "Good. But the Counsel and the Alliance are conducting two seperate, but very thorough, investigations into what happened on Elysium. I don't want you anywhere inside of their territories until Cerberus can clean this mess up. Just because there are no bodies, doesn't mean that you didn't leave behind a trace of evidence. Return to the Terminus at once; head back to Omega, and continue to keep an eye on Grayson. With Aleena out of the way, he's become our top priority, aside from the Collectors."
Leng returned a stiff nod and said, "Understood."
"I hope so," the Illusive Man retorted. "Don't fail me, Leng."
The transmission was cut on Kai Leng's part, but the Illusive Man didn't return to his seat. Just as anticipated, there was a tone and the projector pad lit up for a second time. The hologram of two more figures materialized where the image of the assassin once stood. Miranda Lawson and Jacob Taylor stood next each other, their posture far more relaxed than the last person to speak with their employer.
It was Miranda that spoke first, as always. "The clean-up on Anhur is just about finished. Our front organizations have contributed a large sum of resources into not only assisting in making everything look like another post-war rebellion, but also ensuring that no evidence of the Collectors or Commander Horn's team is left lying around. So far, the Alliance investigators haven't discovered anything remarkably unusual."
"I'm relieved to understand that the Collector's invasion of Anhur is going unnoticed," the Man said. "Good work, Miranda."
"This is going to be a real shock to the system for Commander Shepard," Jacob commented. "Asleep for two years...? If I were the commander, I'm not sure I'd believe that thousands of colonists just up and disappear."
The Illusive Man returned to his seat where a woman, who had appeared out of the shadows, gently placed a half-full glass of scotch on the arm rest. When he sat down, he lowered his cigarette into his ash tray and plucked up the glass to take a sip. "I agree completely, Jacob," he finally said. "And that's why we're not going to come out with everything right away and expect the commander to believe us. Shepard will have to learn what has been happening the hard way. And I expect you two remain absolutely quiet about the Collectors after the commander is fully revived."
The Man tapped a button on a small haptic interface that materialized above his chair's right arm and a larger interface popped into existence over his right shoulder. It was a list of locations and numbers. "A week prior to the Normandy's demise at the weapons of the Collectors, Aria T'Loak had discovered why several human colonies had simply vanished. Her and her scouts had stumbled across a trade between a Blue Suns party and several Collectors on Omega. After they crashed the little meeting, one of Aria's men discovered a datapad on a Blue Suns merc and handed it over to her. This information was what she saw on the screen."
Miranda and Jacob looked from their boss to the figures hovering in the background of his mysterious office.
Omega: 853,245
Freedom's Progress: 912,810
Citadel: 2,491,356
Eden Prime: 3,962,450
Terra Nova: 4,145,412
Earth: 11,490,225,106
"Those are... population totals," Jacob said in disbelief. "Earth? They've targeted Earth?"
The Illusive Man lowered his head and swirled the scotch around in his glass for a second, contemplating what to say next. Finally, he adjusted himself in his chair and said, "Obviously, the Blue Suns weren't aware of the many other targets the Collectors had in mind. That's why colonies like Anhur aren't listed, and this list was intercepted over a year ago. So far, none of these listed have fallen under attack, or vanished. But I have the unsettling feeling that they will go dark, soon. What makes tracking them, and intercepting them, so difficult is that we've realized the Collectors don't have the numbers to abduct entire colonies; only small settlements and cities without much security or established infrastructure. New Thebes was a target because of the post-war instability. The destruction left over from the Anhur Rebellions provided them with enough cover to make anything go unnoticed. If the Collectors attack any of the one's listed... by the time we realize it, we may be too late to stop them."
Miranda raised her knuckles to her chin and asked, "How many vessels do the Collectors have?"
"Right now; we suspect they may only have two. Commander Horn nearly destroyed one of them, but the Titan met its match. Regardless, its heavily damaged and vulnerable. If we can find it, we can narrow our targets down to just the one cruiser, and - with a bit of luck - track its movements."
"We've already lost two good commanding operatives in Omni Cell, sir," Jacob noted. "And from the recent reports I've read... we've nearly lost a third. If Omni needs a new recruit, I volunteer for the job." Jacob took a small step forward and placed his hands behind his back. But the Illusive Man only shook his head.
"No, Jacob," the Man said. "I need you with Miranda on the Lazarus Project. That space station would be vulnerable otherwise, and I can't risk Commander Shepard's body a second time." The operative nodded his understanding, though looked slightly disappointed when he stepped back in line with his colleague. "Omni does need two new commanders to replace the ones we lost. With a full team focused solely on the crippled cruiser, we'll be able to overwhelm them."
"Sounds good. Jacob and I will continue to monitor Shepard. We'll update you as the Lazarus Project progresses."
The Illusive Man nodded his approval and cut the transmission. When the room was once again quiet, he turned his chair around to face the violet star and took another sip of the scotch. When he lowered the glass, he looked down and at the barely noticable reflection of himself in the cylinder. He could make out the tiny blue lights that were his eyes... the eyes that were given to him.
"Good!" Villayn yelled, blocking a solid punch delivered by Braden to his forearm. The boy was learning, and learning fast, and the Captain knew it was mostly due to the rage that the young human had pent up inside. His instruction was well-received, and it was being put to good use. His sparring technique for releasing stress and anxiety was working well for the biotic. It was difficult, at first, to get Braden to accept his offer to spar. When he first arrived outside of the boy's quarters and knocked, all he received was pure silence in response. But persistent knocking after EDI informed him that Braden was, indeed, in there and wide awake finally got him at least a 'What do you want?'
After a minute of explaining to the human how much punching someone helped release that pressure cap that desperately needed loosening, Braden finally gave in and followed the turian down to the gym. Villayn started first by teaching him how to properly position himself in a hand-to-hand fight. Knees slightly bent at thirty degrees, feet shoulder-width apart, hands in the air with palms open. After the boy learned the basics with shuffling his feet and throwing a few solid punches, the captain moved on to more advance moves; kicking, dodging, weaving in and out, and recovering quickly after being knocked down - which Braden was demonstrating his mastery of right now after being thrown across the mat.
The boy rolled back and kicked his feet high in the air while simultaneously pushing off with his hands behind his shoulders. He used his body's momentum and arched to his heels, bringing himself back up in a brief second. But Villayn was no longer holding back. He had authorized Braden to do whatever was necessary to defend himself, which included using his biotics. As the captain had told him: in reality, there are no rules in war. It's a fight for your life, and only the strongest survive. As the turian charged him head-on, Braden had just enough time to build up the energy around him and manipulate enough gravity to pick Villayn up off of his feet. While the turian was suspended in mid-air, Braden charged forward and kicked off of his left foot, using his right to deliver a blow to the mid-section and released the gravitational hold he had on Villayn. The captain was sent backwards and crashing to the ground.
"Excellent!" he said with a prideful laugh. He then his talons up as he caught his breath. "Very good, boy. I think that's enough for one day."
Braden relaxed his stance and lowered his fists. The blue sarks of dark energy around his body faded into oblivion, and the teenager shook his head of the dizzyness that using such energy typically caused. His steps were light, only unstable, as he moved away and off the mat. "God, I need some food."
"You and me, both," Villayn replied. "How do you feel?"
"Sick in my head."
The turian bellowed, but shook his head and said, "No, I meant, do you feel any better now that you've got some of that anger out of your system?"
Braden looked up at him, but was silent for a moment before replying. "I guess so."
"Give it some time. I'm no expert on human emotions, but... I'm not a stranger to betrayal, either. Do you know why I left the turian military and became a pirate?" The boy wasn't sure he was in the mood in the story, but he shook his head "no" and looked back to Villayn for one anyway. "I used to be as naive as any other die-hard soldier," the captain went on. "There was once a time where I would obey any order, even it meant suicide. I fought at Shanxi; and yes, I killed your kind. But after the war, I taught myself to accept you humans. It wasn't until I began to notice the seperate opinions of the Turian Heirarchy - the racism, the disdain - that I realized soldiers like me were the real victims of war. We were puppets to them; just pawns in a game of ego-manipulated politics. Millions of turians were ready to accept humanity into the rest of the universe, but there just had to some higher up the food chain that thought otherwise. Their own xenophobia trickled down to the other colonies in our systems and spread an infectous influence. A lot of that hatred still exists today..."
The teen only looked down at the floor, unsure of what to say. Humans were no different, really. Villayn had every right to feel ashamed of his people for their opinions, but Braden felt the exact same animosity toward his fellow man. Prejudice will always be a vice in any culture; it didn't matter if you were human, turian, salarian, or even an esteemed asari. The quarians were a prime example; being a largest political target of racism for every sentient species. It was sad, but true.
"Come on," Villayn said after a while. "Time to get you some food."
"Sure," Braden said, nodding. He fell in behind Villayn as they left the gym and headed for the mess hall.
OOC Notes
"You have a question Operative Invaru?"
"A couple actually." Mustering her reserves of will to stand directly up to the man without so much as a tremble. "First question would be as to why you are really here." She stated it in a matter of fact tone, but beneath the surface she was really asking him 'Why are you here insulting our ship and our crew?'. Grayson looked down, his features appearing as if they were chiselled from stone for all the emotional reference they gave off.
"Officially I'm here on an inspection. Unofficially, I'm here to visit my son. It would appear that part is impossible."
"When was the last time you saw your son?" Kelly asked, and Horn cocked his head slightly.
"I fail to see how this is relevant." He stated, but straightened, seeing as there was no harm in answering. "If you must know...roughly over a year ago, a few days after the Citadel mission." He looked off into the distance for a moment. "He had changed, and we didn't part ways on the best of terms. I warned him that his new way of thinking would be the death of him, and he dismissed me as if I was some lowly grunt." Grayson said the last part with more than a hint of disdain, then returned his gaze to Kelly. "It would appear I was right once more."
"I think the Illusive man told you what happened to Jason." Kelly stated, and when Grayson didn't say anything she continued. "You can try and put up a hard front Captain, be the cold heartless leader of the Ascending Justice, but when you heard about your son nearly dying, you rushed out here to at least see if your boy was alright." Grayson took a step forward, but Kelly didn't back down. He leaned down until his face was right in hers.
"I don't recall asking you to prod into my personal feelings on the matter Operative, and I would do well to advise you to stop before you get too deep into something you can't handle." Kelly just gave a smirk.
"Captain, as per Cerberus protocols, I am acting Commander of this vessel. While on this ship, I hold supreme rank on all things that happen aboard the Victory. Treating me as if I am some secretary to Jason will only end up with you getting a swift departure back to the Ascending Justice and a firm reprimand sent to the Illusive Man."
"Are you threatening me Operative?" The Captain said, straightening back up.
"I am simply stating something that someone such as yourself should already know...Captain." Her tone was completely neutral and professional, which made it impact harder on the Captain as he stared at her for a moment.
"Very well, you have stated your case Operative. Come, let us meet your Lieutenant O'Ryan." Kelly simply nodded, and made her way to the Armoury.
A short walk later, and they entered the room. TJ was wearing a welding helmet and seeming to perform some repairs on some armour. She stopped long enough to look up, grunt, and continue with her work. Captain Horn said nothing, and acted as if she wasn't even there as he continued past her to the firing range. Kelly stood by the window, Leonard was pacing on the other side with his eyes glued on the targets. Captain Horn didn't wait to get noticed, he simply barged inside.
The marines didn't turn, and continued firing until O'Ryan turned around and saw who it was. "Officer on deck!" He yelled. Instantly the firearms were at the marines side and they all saluted smartly. These were the veterans of the Titan, and as such, were at an advantage when compared to the recruits of the Victory. Captain Horn returned the salute.
"At ease marines." Horn stated as he looked them all over. His face gave nothing away, but he didn't say anything either. He must have been satisfied with their physique and discipline. Grayson looked over to O'Ryan. "Lieutenant, you're the Battalion Commander here on the Call of Victory?"
"Yes sir." O'Ryan stated, remaining in a perfect position of 'at ease'. Grayson gave a nod as he brought the targets forward. As he inspected them, he gave a slight nod at the rate of accuracy within the marines.
"It would seem you're doing your job well Lieutenant." O'Ryan simply nodded.
"These marines are veterans of the SIC Titan sir. With respect to them, they didn't need much guidance. It looked like my predecessor, Lieutenant Nicola and Commander Horn know how to train their marines." Grayson continued to look at the charts.
"So it would seem. One thing he can do right. What about those marines who came with the Call of Victory?" Grayson asked.
"They need a little work sir, but I'll have them battle ready in no time."
"Good to hear Lieutenant. Keep up the good work. Dismissed." Grayson saluted, which was returned by O'Ryan and the marines.
"Yes sir." Leonard stated, before walking over and prepping new targets. Grayson and Kelly both walked out of the firing range, and out of the Armoury.
"It seems you have at least one capable officer among your crew Operative." Grayson stated as they walked on.
"They are all more than capable if given a chance to perform, rather than submit to judgement." Kelly retorted, which earned silence from the Captain. They came up to the medical bay, and Horn stopped . Kelly looked up at him, his hands clasped behind his back.
"If you wouldn't mind Operative, could I have a moment alone with my son?" Kelly stared up at him, knowing this was a hard thing for someone who puts on such a strong front to ask. She gave a nod, and Horn walked inside. A few moments later, Dr. Grass came out and stood next to Kelly in front of the medical bay.
"So that would be the illustrious father of our very own kamikaze soldier?" Dr. Grass asked as he tapped several things on his omni-tool.
"Yes it would." Kelly answered in a polite tone.
"Hmmm...I can definitely see why Horn wouldn't want to speak of him. He walked in, demanded I get out in the middle of diagnostics, and when I insisted on continuing them, he simply glared at me with such intensity I wondered if my glasses were going to break." Grass replied. Kelly just gave a small smile.
"He's a hard man to like...that's for sure." She stated as they waited a few minutes for the door to open. Eventually it did and Captain Horn stepped out.
"You may return to your duties Dr. Grass." Grayson stated, and Kelly looked over to see a comment coming out of Lincoln's mouth. Kelly interjected.
"He would love to." She stated politely as she gave him a gentle push towards the door. He looked back at her, but didn't argue as he disappeared within the confines of the medical bay. Grayson looked after him, and gave a gruff grunt as he looked back at Kelly.
"He seems to have an attitude, that should have been fixed when he was first posted with you."
"Maybe so, but suppressing one's ability to express themselves ends up with them becoming demoralized to perform their task." Kelly replied.
"This is the military, we operate with extreme discipline and regulations." Grayson said as they both started walking towards the elevator.
"This is Cerberus. You, above all else, should know we don't operate like the Alliance." Kelly replied once more, and Grayson went silent once again. She could tell he wasn't used to someone actually speaking up to him. They reached the elevator, and waited for it to come up. "Do you mind if I ask what you said to Horn, if you said anything at all?" Kelly asked as politely as she could muster.
"How is that any of your business?" Horn asked, his voice gruff and obviously displeased at being asked such personal questions. Kelly just shook her head.
"Captain, we're not aboard your ship. You don't need to continue acting as if you have absolutely no emotions while aboard the Victory." Grayson said nothing, and when the elevator came up, he stepped inside with silence. Once they pressed the button to the Battery level, Grayson continued to stare ahead.
"I asked for his forgiveness." Grayson stated, his voice still filled with gravel, but also some sorrow. Kelly looked up at him, but he did not return her gaze. He held himself well, showing no signs of what his voice conveyed.
"May I ask what for?" She stated, curiosity getting the better of her.
"Isn't it obvious?" Grayson returned.
They spent the rest of the drop in silence.
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Now, as a warning, the "posts" have not been organized in a manner that reveals the authors of the posts. The entire document is a continuous story, using only simple gray line breaks to show either momentary lapses in time, or definitive transitions between original posts. There are no fancy chapter titles, or page numbers. In the future, I might upload a more "pretty" document for your reading pleasure. For now... that's too much work.
[OOC] Mass Effect: On the Edge Soundtrack

Character Theme Songs - These tracks are cued for specific scenes, but apply solely to an individual character to exonerate their moment in the spotlight.
- Kelly’s Theme: http://soundcloud.com/thesecession/sets ... -unique-ad
- Horn’s Theme: http://soundcloud.com/nyx-music-1/the-man-without-fear
- Daniel’s Theme: http://soundcloud.com/babaloo5012/pillar-frontline-3
- Titus’ Theme: http://soundcloud.com/recagenda/crusade ... rik-ekholm
Environments - These tracks are mostly uncued, meaning that you can play them during any of the matching environments. For instance, when one of the Commanders is speaking with the Illusive Man via the quantum entanglement communicator, you can begin playing "The Illusive Man" (composed by Jack Wall, and played during all of the scenes where Shepard conversed with the enigmatic leader of Cerberus).
- Oracle: http://soundcloud.com/thesecession/dyst ... estigation
- The Galaxy Map: http://soundcloud.com/thesecession/augm ... estigation
- The Illusive Man: http://soundcloud.com/recagenda/the-ill ... -jack-wall
Specific Scenes - These tracks are cued, and are only meant to be played once, or - possibly - a small number of times.
- Vindicator Romance: http://soundcloud.com/thesecession/emot ... artet-demo
- Ship-to-Ship Combat #1: http://soundcloud.com/pipsickle/two-ste ... ell-dragon
- Embolden: http://soundcloud.com/mark-22/embolden
- Escaping Hephaestus Station: http://soundcloud.com/quakernuts/two-st ... l-run-like
To be Revealed - These tracks are available for listening, but we're not giving you any hint as to when they will be played. You'll just have to wait and find their respective cues in the story. Once they are revealed, they will be moved to their appropriate category above.
- http://soundcloud.com/zackhemsey/redemption
- http://soundcloud.com/user7837224/dragon-rises
- http://soundcloud.com/mandarsawant/two-steps-from-hell-sons-of
[OOC] Mechanics of the Story

On the Edge is written through the perspectives of (currently) five authors, all controlling characters that work for the pro-human organization known as Cerberus. The story itself is set in the year 2184, one year after Commander Shepard is pronounced KIA and the Normandy SR1 is destroyed by a Collector vessel. According to the cannonical timeline of Mass Effect, not much other than five notable events happen during this year, so that's where we come in... to fill the holes.
In order to compensate for the lack of material and events in the codex for 2184, I've given my authors some wiggle room in order to create a truly enticing story. Anything is allowed to happen, so long as it does not effect the canon universe. Now, there are a few elements of the story that set it apart from all the other RPs out there; and that's what this first post will explain.
- The Trust Method
Throughout the story you'll notice several moments where the character of one author and the character of another author are having uninterrupted dialogue and actions between each other. The magical thing about this is... it's all being written by one author. But that's impossible! No, it isn't. A lot of role players are too blinded by their own ego that they can't allow themselves to give other authors in a story the chance to write out what their own character thinks, feels, does, says, etc. They have this desire to completely control everything about that character, and that is my biggest argument in regards to why a lot of role plays die so quickly. If authors can't trust one another, how can anything be written?
A lot of you probably struggle with fleshing out those chapter-long posts that this role play showcases, and you become severly defensive whenever someone else asks to raise the standards and require a certain amount of paragraphs or sentences or words. Well, if you or your game master didn't have your heads so far up your butt puckers (see what I did there?) and learned to use this method, then maybe you'd actually be able to write so much you'd be the next Hemingway with all your short-story-long posts.
Most of On the Edge's OOC discussion is conducted over Skype. If one of us needs to use the trust method (which is nearly 100% of the time now because there are so many characters involved in this one story already), but we're not sure what the other character would say, then we hit each other up in the chat and find out.
- Ignoring the Turn-Based System
This method was popular several years ago with those that I like to call the "traditional role players". I consider myself to be one of these few remaining authors in the world of play-by-post role playing. Nowadays, however, there is this new age idea that everyone has to "wait their turn" before they can post. Meanwhile, I'm sitting behind my computer screen with a cup of coffee about ready to pull my hair out and yell, "WHY THE FUCK DO I HAVE TO WAIT?!"
If you're running a role play with this kind of new age thinking and you're not using the above mentioned "trust method", then I've got two words for you: You're fucked. Oh yeah, before I go on, I've given you the impression that I'm this elitist ass hole, then I've done well. And if you're not even slightly giggling at the near-liquid sarcasm that is drenching this post, then you're doing poorly.
Moving on... On the Edge does not utilize the new age turn system. If one of my authors feels like posting immediately after someone that just posted afterthem, I have no problem with it. Shoot, I don't even care if they double-post - you know: that evil act that is apparently against the role playing bible. Gee, I guess I'm going to hell now because I love pulling that stunt.
That's pretty much all I have in me to start this thread. If you have any questions about the story, the role play methods, the authors, or the characters, then please feel free to ask! Myself or one my authors be happy to provide you an answer.
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Mention me, and I'll kill you in your sleep with a battleaxe.
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Also, I'll be sure to hook everyone that is interested in joining up with the original publications-so-far of On the Edge... once the po-po realizes I'm not even from the Middle East... and that I actually kill terrorists, rather than sleep with them.
Boy, talk about racial profiling there, right?
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