Introduction
Inspiration:
This plot was inspired by extensive study of the Minoan-Atlantian connection. The Minoans (named for the story of King Minos by the archaeologist that uncovered it) were an advanced civilization that predated both the Greeks and Romans and had commonplace technology that surpassed either for many years. Many scholars believe their society, which was swallowed in the flames of the Santorini volcano and washed over with the tidal wave that followed it, was what Plato referred to as Atlantis (they believe his description of it being thousands of years before his time was a matter of mistranslation by a factor of ten; same with the distance from Egypt [i.e.: it was 960 years before, not 9600. And it was 250 miles away, not 2500---both of which fit Crete]). Passionate preaching aside, I am very adamant that it is the equivalent of Atlantis and so I like to play it as such. I label it 'ancient steampunk', because I am further inspired by the inventions of Heron of Alexandria (automatically opening doors [using water and weighs and pulleys], coin operated water dispensers, small robots, robotic theaters, et cetera). I combine these alluring stories to create my own world that I call Kethadria.
Story
Long before the Romans walked every known niche of their world, or the Greeks dominated the Mediterranean; before the Persians and Babylonians reached the heights of power, when the Sumerians still had their grasp on Mesopotamia, a single island civilization sprouted---it grew, it evolved, and it survived. Watching alongside the birth of nations, standing as right hand allies to Egypt, Kethadria was a pacifist nation that was respected for its technological mastery, the stunning command of its unrivaled navy, its wealth, and its legends. At its height, the eccentric King Minos reigns over the land and connects the forsaken cities in the west with their beloved capital and invaluable flow of trade with roads that run like veins through the heart of the nation, rivaling the later Roman's Appian Way in constructive ingenuity. His palace sits on a labyrinth, which houses a monster, designed by a genius who is the only one that knows all of its secrets. From its bowels, children walk into the light changed. Those that are sent into the darkness forever in the company of the beast do not always stay for eternity. Their eyes become golden, a mark of the Gifted, and they are endowed with abilities beyond even Kethadrian comprehension. This incites a political problem; the Gifted threaten the stability of the nation, but they must be honored because they are touched by the gods. Nations in the north are looking to exploit opportune weaknesses in Kethadria's defenses; its soldiers are being posted more actively to defend against the threat of attack. And amongst all the chaos, rumors of plots for assassination of the king, the uproar of a possible change of rule, sits another problem--- miles away, near a smaller island, a volcano bellows in waiting to erupt and cover the sky in a thick cloud of ash that will plunge them into darkness.
Kethadria:
Realm: Kethadria (capital dialect); Kateria (alternative dialect)
Basis: Atlantis
Location: Mediterranean sea (implied); Ancient Crete (implied)
Genre(s): Fantasy, reality, science fiction, ancient steam punk
Capital city: Aiatse
Harbor cities: , Aiatse (eastern central port), Fasea (southern port to Egypt), Natalan (lower eastern port to Mesopotamia), Nossas (northern port to Mycenea)
High commerce/trade cities: Natalan, Aiatse, Korsa, La'am, Solam (all coastal)
Open character positions:
King Minos
King's wife
King's son/daughter
Council members
Genius/crazy inventor
Sailors/merchants
Soldiers
Nobility
Street urchins/thieves
Gifted children
Acolytes and priests
Priests/priestesses of other religions
Doctors/nurses/healers
Hunters/rogues/assassins
The Watcher (keeps an eye on the beast in the Labyrinth; leads the sacrifices into the darkness)
The Minotaur (beast that sleeps in the center of the Labyrinth beneath the palace)
If somebody wishes to play the king, my only request is that the character be classified as. . . "weird". A king that is not very kingly. Perhaps too benevolant, too crazy, likes to get his hands dirty and invent things. The prince/princess role is intended to be the opposite of whatever the current king is, so if you would prefer to play an evil/crazy king or queen, then apply for the position of prince/princess. In canon, I would like an eventual assassination to happen (the player of the King can have another role pre-determined to be open for them afterward if they wish to continue in the plot).
Otherwise, all characters can be of your own making, unless you have a request of something specific (i.e.: foreign ruler, etc). I can always add more locations to this realm.
General Information:
Aiatse is a city strategically placed inland, surrounded by rings of water (massive mote rings said to be dug by the deities responsible for the land mass when designating a capital city, now used as water transportation, minor business/trading routes, et cetera). The waterways open into a harbor which leads to the western port of Natalan and out into the sea whose coasts lie on other major empires (implied: Egyptian, Mesopotamian). Because of Natalan's connections with the capital city, and the massive amount of trade that passes through those harbors to get there, it has become one of the richer cities of Kethadria; all massive importing goes through the Natalan port. The primary religion of Kethadria is general Paganism (since many inhabitants hail from other nations); Aiatse's primary recognized religion is called Syntana.
RELIGION:
Syntana:
A religion that recognizes seven deities as representing the elements of earth, and that all things are made up of these seven elements.
Spirit
Light/Darkness
Water/Air
Earth/Fire
Water, the deity Aisu (known in Kethadria as the female deity responsible for the existence of the land mass itself), is worshiped most importantly as the Kethadrian people are said to be children of the sea. The second highest deity in worship is Atiatu, the deity of light, said to have watched over the nation faithfully and guided it in the right directions. The elements are ranked according to their tangibility (spirit being the least tangible is the highest on the list, light and darkness as opposing intangible forces are ranked second. The collective four remaining elements are the earth elements and are ranked together in third. However, this hierarchy merely serves as a way to recognize which deities are closer to the Symphony and are more powerful; Syntana is not about worshiping the most powerful, but respecting the earth).
MAGIC:
The Symphony:
Within Syntana is a concept called The Symphony, which asserts the idea that all things are connected by a fundemental rhythm. All things are moving at all times, and there is no such thing as true stillness. Those who can tap into the essential rhythm of the world attain inner peace and power. This rhythm is recognized as their ultimate concept of God, for those who are out of tune with it can corrupt or die, and those who are aware of it and use it may prosper. This theory supports their use of magic through vibrations and manipulation of the six usable elements (the four lower ones being the most common). Not all magic users acknowledge this system, however.
SERVITUDE:
The servants of Kethadria are treated fairly well. Usually the result of debt or of being bought from another empire through the harbors, servants are asked to do the many tasks in life that Kethadrians simply don't have time for or need help with. The citizen class (usually bestowed upon them as gifts for various reasons, or when the family is owed a debt) uses them for house work, messengers, mentors/teachers, et cetera. Those of the citizen class are treated very well and given nice beds. Their attire tends to reflect for whom they work. Servants of the citizen force dress in simple cloth wraps with a single stripe of the family color; the actual family would wear three strips of silver beading accompanied by a thick stripe of their family color. The wealthier upper class would adorn their servants with a single strip of gold beading (where they would wear three). For the upper class, servants will accompany the mother and children almost everywhere and will be seen as almost part of the family, but this can also leave room to be looked down upon at the same time because they are still servants. In the citizen class, they are considered part of the family, as a general rule of thumb, though that doesn't mean every family treats them well.
The final level of servitude would be the servants of the king, who can be adorned however the imperial ruler wishes, usually with his distinct color of robe (not white linen), and gold and gems. The king treats his servants with a particular fondness and rewards them for being faithful servants.
GENERAL HIERARCHY:
King/Emperor
Royal Advisors/Politicians (The Council)
Upper class (priests, well-to-do families, architects, inventors)
Citizen/merchant class (trade and sale of goods; entrepreneurs--equivalent to middle class)
Labor class (agriculture, construction; 'dirty work'---equivalent to lower middle class)
Classless (poor and jobless, homeless, outcasts, rogues, outlaws)
The Gifted (children blessed by the gods with certain abilities; they must have golden/amber eyes as their mark)
TECHNOLOGY:
Kethadria (like Atlantis) possesses the most advanced technology of its day. In fact, of any near era.
I have made a point to incorporate all the inventions of Heron of Alexandria and similar ancient geniuses. This includes the use of ancient batteries, automatically opening doors (controlled by weights, pulleys, water pressure), coin operated dispensing technology, the prototype of the first steam engine, force pumps, and fountains.
One of the first nations to introduce the idea of a septic system, the toilets are stone slabs in each home with a decent sized hole carved into them that drops into a cesspit underneath the dwelling. Rushes of water from the motes (in Aiatse, the capital) or other sources of water which are irrigated to each household in the city or town dillutes the waste when a lever is tugged. The waste is then dropped into a smaller chamber and system of tubes which, by the end of its journey, will have flushed the waste out to sea. There is hot and cold running water to every home in the form of sinks, with levers that allow the water to flow (ancient versions of regular sinks); toilets and sinks among upper and citizen classes are furnished from polished stone with polished bronze accent to minimize erosion.
Transportation in Kethadria is typically by foot, but palki-like contraptions are adopted for royalty, advisors, and some upper class families---inspired by travel systems in India and China (a palki is a decorated and quite comfortable box with cushioned seats; four men carry the box by holding onto handles that extend from each corner on the outside).
Electrical energy and spiritual/magic energy are used to power things. Water ships, air ships, and weaponry can be experimented with. Each Kethadrian possesses a crystal around their neck which is chipped off of a much larger (possibly quartz) rock locked in a vault in Aiatse (said to be a gift from the earth goddess to the children of the sea). The larger crystal absorbs energy from the earth and magnifies it, concentrating it (much like a magnifying glass does to sunlight on an ant). The energy that can be magnified is electromagnetic and electrochemical energy which is said to govern the basis for their magic. So long as this crystal can absorb such energy, Kethadrians will have access to elemental manipulation. The crystals can be removed from the neck and used as keys by introducing a jolt of stored energy into a machine. You can come up with other ways to harness/use these crystals on your own.
You can pretty much take this one up for grabs, how advanced you want it to be---just make sure it's all cohesive. I've had alien type technologies suggested to me, some of which I've used, and others I leave up to the roleplayers in discussions to see how far they want to take it.
WAR:
Kethadrian people as a government are passive and do not partake in war. However, this could possibly change at any time at roleplayers' choice. There are small civil wars which break out quite frequently. Large scale wars may be played, as Kethadria trains a secret force of men behind the walls of the capital city and other select cities and is endowed with a powerful, unrivaled Navy blessed by the god of the sea. There is an army (and characters can be soldiers in, or any part of, the military) and the government does experiment in ancient clockwork robotics. This idea is based off of the story of Talos, a giant robot said to have run a circle around the perimeter of Crete three times a day to deter any threats. Generally, Kethadrians are viewed by Egyptians and other contemporary civilizations as being a worthy ally for trade, but their fortune and success is tempting to many rogue armies or newly formed nations.
I do plan to reenact the downfall of Crete by erupting the volcano. This will not end the roleplay by any means, it is simply another conflict to overcome. ;)
THE GIFTED:
The bulk of the roleplay is centered around the matter of the Gifted children of Kethadria. They are children who are found, born, or who survived the sacrificial ceremony of the beast within the Labyrinth and emerged with golden colored eyes (a sign they are blessed by Apollo). These children are currently under the protection of the Kethadrian military and of the High Priestess by order of the King. However, that is subject to change if the roleplayers choose to change rulers. The Council has also been known to want the disposal of the Gifted in fear they may someday overtake the government and remove them from power.
Rules
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3.) Don't be an idiot or flamer. And don't take out of character drama in character, either.
4.) Do not power game.
5.) Post in the right "PLACE". General activity stream =/= the location of your roleplay. ALWAYS go to "Places" ---> and find the location you're involved in, otherwise it messes everybody up.
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Places in Without Absolution
16 postsKethadria
The isle nation of Kethadria.
10 postsAiatse, The Capital
You are within the walls of the capital city.
11 postsMarketplace
Central part of citizen life; contains stationary merchant shops, restaurants, the bath house (separate location), amphitheater, et cetera.
17 postsBalnea (Bath House)
A place to relax in soothing water drawn from natural volcanic hot springs.
0 postsThe Capital Road - North East
A winding road that runs through Kethadria; from anywhere in the country, it leads to the capital city. It is also called 'The Light for the Lost'. North section, near the capital Aiatse.
7 postsGrand Palace
The palace is the residence of the royal family, including the King.
0 postsThe Labyrinth
The dark prison of the Minotaur.
4 postsNatalan
South-Eastern port to Mesopotamia.
0 postsFasea
Fasea, the southern port city where most trade from Egypt arrives. Connects through the southern section of trade road.
6 postsGrand Temple of Light
This is the grand temple of Aiatse, where the Gifted are tutored privately and where the King and nobles go to worship. It is headed by Simin the oracle and run by many priests, lesser priestesses, and acolytes.
0 postsThe Floating Gardens
Outdoor water garden located in the center of the building, surrounded by cloisters (pillar hallways).
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OOC Notes
The Kethadrian people, tonight, were merry. They drank wine and sat in public bath houses, joking about the Persians, joking about the Greeks, joking about the Chinese---oh, they had no faults of their own. They were utterly perfect, naturally; they were chosen by Poseidon himself. They were descended directly from him!---or so they believed. They drank until they were happy, and those that were happy drank until they were angry, and those that didn't continue to drink until they were tired began to fight. There were hoorahs rising from the streets as men of little wealth scrapped in the alleys, pummeling eachother into the torch-light where the wealthy looked on in horror. It was like any other society; they would always say, don't let a few bad figs spoil the harvest.
A small band of soldiers paraded down the walkway, followed by upper class thesbians acting scenes from plays about their nation. After the festivities, and the food and drink, the merchants pulled into the harbor at dawn to unload their goods. Not but an hour later, merchants were selling souveniers from as far as east Asia to Kethadrians that had never even left their capital city. It was then that the work day started---the King was awake doing business, the Council was busy advising him, the merchants were selling their goods, the craftsmen were finishing projects, the servants were serving their families. Amongst all of this, the newcomers---who would possibly someday be citizens---wandered about amazed at the circular waterways that fenced their city, the ships pulling in and out, the large bronze statues, stone walls, pillars---and the technology that ran it all. The doors opened without a touch, and the fountain in the center of the city had no visible pipes, but sprang beautifully from the carved stone basin. In the gardens, little bronze birds turned in their places and tweeted to greet the visitors each time they passed, and each time they did, a large bronze owl would open its eyes to peer at the birds. It was a thing of wonder!
They would always say, "This place is blessed by the gods themselves!" in a tone of complete awe, but in jest.
And little did they know---it was.
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Phaistos's latest mark had been a corrupt merchant. The man would convince other merchants to invest in the trade of newly discovered spices. He would than present them with forged scrolls and documents from Egypt or Mesopotamia, assuring them that the investment was sound. But once the money had been collected the new spice would be destroyed by an accident like a fire, drought, or pirates. The merchants were told that the investment had been lost, yet this man's wealth would continue to increase. In Phaistos's eyes this man was no better than a common pickpocket and deserved no mercy. Unfortunately, when Phaistos had made the kill he was discovered by a young woman, the merchant's mistress most likely. He'd had no time to clean his blade and was forced to exit out a window.
It was useless, the sheath would be impossible to clean. Thankfully, he was still able to clean the knife. So the hunter tucked the wicked blade into his belt and stashed the sheath into a crack in one of the buildings. He made a note to come back and properly dispose of it when there would be less witnesses. He did his best to reenter the crowd as inconspicuously as possible then started towards one of the stores a few yards away. This last job was the only one that had fit his standards in the past few weeks. He'd need to fall back on traditional hunting if he were to earn the money necessary to commission a new sheath. Phaistos ducked his head and entered the store.
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"But, it's my last one, and if I'm to keep a clean shop, I need a cat to clean out the rats!"
"Please sir, the Lady has been asking for that cat for ages, and may I say it would be best to give it to her now."
"Are you threatening me?"
"Galno! How dare you!" Rang a vibrant voice which might be described as "meaty" in its texture and tone. "I send you to get a cat and I find you shaking down this poor gentleman?" The voice now had a sort of face, tucking up from behind a pile of boxes carrying many vials of vinegar, was what looked like some swirling fireball, engulfing a few flailing twigs. A toothless grin mouthing out the words from behind a vivid orange veil.
The twigs were "The Lady's" arms, the fireball was her swirling robes. As she stood up her entire person seemed to click and chime and glint with her various baubles.
"Sir, sir. Take this money, go buy yourself some soft cheese from young Amos across the way, and some poison from the Apothecary just up the street, you have to understand that your cat is going to become incredibly ill in a few days, as someone has planted those rats, and it is most surely an attempt on your life. You have to poison the cheese and leave it out, and make sure to do this for a few months to come."
The merchant stood rather awestruck, but simply nodded absentmindedly. Had he been hypnotized?
Annipe quickly scooped up the beautiful brown cat, and walked away quite contentedly.
The merchant "Was any of that true?"
Her servant "Not in the slightest, I'd also like to pick up some flat bread?"
"R-right this way" said the man, staring off into the bright orange fireball that was dancing away from him, faint, frantic "Meows" hanging in the air behind her.
Annipe had come out for her weekly day about the Forum. Parents hide your children, the half-breed is grinning today.
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A few strides, and a small bound took Asterion sailing up to catch the lip of the building ahead of him with one hand, the wine jug dangling from the other. Swinging the jug on top of the roof, he grasped for purchase against the stone wall with his bare feet, and scrabbled on top of it. From here he could follow the bobbing orb of brightly colored flames that was the Lady with ease, picking a figure such as her out of the crowd was no hard task. He strolled lazily along the rooftops, drinking from his jug of wine, as he followed her, watching, and more amused than he had found himself in many a moon. Something about this old lady was far more wild and true than any other person he had found in Kethadria.
As she danced away from a stall with a cat in hand, Asterion dropped lightly off the roof behind her, calling out after her.
"So you're the infamous Lady aye?" He spoke with a note of merriment not commonly found in his cold, brief, and abrupt manner of speaking. He hadn't learned to speak until he had been brought into society at the age of twelve. Before then he had communicated far more simply, with actions, and with occasional heartful bellows, expressing naught more than pure emotion. He still felt words were over valued, and used them sparingly and infrequently, remaining largely taciturn.
"Would you care for a drink?" He held the vase out to here, his words coming slowly, clear and precise, like the sparkling waters of a calm, deep, river. "Seems as if the two of us might have a bit in common, being oddities among the Kethadrian court."
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Kelius let out a moan as all of the ailments coalesced. His head ached, his hip throbbed, his arm stung, his scabs had reopened, and he smelled of urine.
Yet all of those corporeal concerns were drowned out by an overwhelming despair; he felt his neck. His crystal was gone.
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Tears started to fill her eyes as she thought about her lost one. She still hadn't given up on the search. Three months wasn't so very long after all. She had to keep up hope that she would find him. That he would come home. If he hadn't in another three months... By then I'll have found someone to travel with me. Rain assured herself. Traveling at all was hard on her. There were many sick on the road. Even more were injured. Sick was often easier for her to handle. Dizziness, the symptoms of a fever, the beat pain any day. Often sick was easier to correct as well. A large yawn issued forth from Rain's lips and she shook her head to rouse herself. She could go and fall asleep here. She'd drown. Then there would be no chance of finding Morrin. No one to even look for him.
A voice in the near distance drove Rain to her feet. That's why she'd come to the baths at this so very unpopular hour. To avoid the crowds. To avoid other people. She was too tired right now to handle their aches and pains won from an honest days labor. What little she had came from the life of a minstrel, playing in pubs and inns, wherever she could. Her music seemed appreciated. At least the number of coins that she usually ended up with told her as much. She loved people, really truly, but now... Longingly her eyes looked back to the large pool that was the female bath. She wouldn't have a chance like this again. With a smile that was half grim grin, half self depreciating humor, Rain plopped herself back into the water. She needed this, and if there really was someone coming to the bath that she was in, then really it might be worth any discomfort to see who it was.
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Tears started to fill her eyes as she thought about her lost one. She still hadn't given up on the search. Three months wasn't so very long after all. She had to keep up hope that she would find him. That he would come home. If he hadn't in another three months... By then I'll have found someone to travel with me. Rain assured herself. Traveling at all was hard on her. There were many sick on the road. Even more were injured. Sick was often easier for her to handle. Dizziness, the symptoms of a fever, the beat pain any day. Often sick was easier to correct as well. A large yawn issued forth from Rain's lips and she shook her head to rouse herself. She could go and fall asleep here. She'd drown. Then there would be no chance of finding Morrin. No one to even look for him.
A voice in the near distance drove Rain to her feet. That's why she'd come to the baths at this so very unpopular hour. To avoid the crowds. To avoid other people. She was too tired right now to handle their aches and pains won from an honest days labor. What little she had came from the life of a minstrel, playing in pubs and inns, wherever she could. Her music seemed appreciated. At least the number of coins that she usually ended up with told her as much. She loved people, really truly, but now... Longingly her eyes looked back to the large pool that was the female bath. She wouldn't have a chance like this again. With a smile that was half grim grin, half self depreciating humor, Rain plopped herself back into the water. She needed this, and if there really was someone coming to the bath that she was in, then really it might be worth any discomfort to see who it was.
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Tears started to fill her eyes as she thought about her lost one. She still hadn't given up on the search. Three months wasn't so very long after all. She had to keep up hope that she would find him. That he would come home. If he hadn't in another three months... By then I'll have found someone to travel with me. Rain assured herself. Traveling at all was hard on her. There were many sick on the road. Even more were injured. Sick was often easier for her to handle. Dizziness, the symptoms of a fever, the beat pain any day. Often sick was easier to correct as well. A large yawn issued forth from Rain's lips and she shook her head to rouse herself. She could go and fall asleep here. She'd drown. Then there would be no chance of finding Morrin. No one to even look for him.
A voice in the near distance drove Rain to her feet. That's why she'd come to the baths at this so very unpopular hour. To avoid the crowds. To avoid other people. She was too tired right now to handle their aches and pains won from an honest days labor. What little she had came from the life of a minstrel, playing in pubs and inns, wherever she could. Her music seemed appreciated. At least the number of coins that she usually ended up with told her as much. She loved people, really truly, but now... Longingly her eyes looked back to the large pool that was the female bath. She wouldn't have a chance like this again. With a smile that was half grim grin, half self depreciating humor, Rain plopped herself back into the water. She needed this, and if there really was someone coming to the bath that she was in, then really it might be worth any discomfort to see who it was.
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Tears started to fill her eyes as she thought about her lost one. She still hadn't given up on the search. Three months wasn't so very long after all. She had to keep up hope that she would find him. That he would come home. If he hadn't in another three months... By then I'll have found someone to travel with me. Rain assured herself. Traveling at all was hard on her. There were many sick on the road. Even more were injured. Sick was often easier for her to handle. Dizziness, the symptoms of a fever, the beat pain any day. Often sick was easier to correct as well. A large yawn issued forth from Rain's lips and she shook her head to rouse herself. She could go and fall asleep here. She'd drown. Then there would be no chance of finding Morrin. No one to even look for him.
A voice in the near distance drove Rain to her feet. That's why she'd come to the baths at this so very unpopular hour. To avoid the crowds. To avoid other people. She was too tired right now to handle their aches and pains won from an honest days labor. What little she had came from the life of a minstrel, playing in pubs and inns, wherever she could. Her music seemed appreciated. At least the number of coins that she usually ended up with told her as much. She loved people, really truly, but now... Longingly her eyes looked back to the large pool that was the female bath. She wouldn't have a chance like this again. With a smile that was half grim grin, half self depreciating humor, Rain plopped herself back into the water. She needed this, and if there really was someone coming to the bath that she was in, then really it might be worth any discomfort to see who it was.
OOC Notes
The man proceeded to scrub himself from head to toe as thoroughly as possible. He made sure that every speck of dirt and every stain was eliminated from his skin. After what seemed forever, Phaistos felt that the job was done. He could finally enjoy the bath for what it was...warm. Streams and rivers may be refreshing but they could also be cold enough to make him appear a doe instead of a stag. He looked over at the marten who was busy cleaning itself off at the edge of the tub. It would reach down and rub its paws in the water, occasionally splashing some of the warm liquid on to its face. Phaistos smiled at his loyal friend.
"Well look at you," said Phaistos, sarcasm thick in his voice. "How far you've come oh mighty beast. From the days of scurrying around the undergrowth searching for a mere morsel, to lounging in the bath houses of Aiatse. The mighty boar himself would bow before you, the great and majestic Nixta!"
The marten ceased its own bathing to give what many would consider to be the specie's best attempt at a glare. It chattered angrily at the hunter, than proceeded to continue bathing.
"I'm one to talk?" responded Phaistos, tone shifting to amusement. "So, you're saying without you I'd still be scrounging around in the dirt too, with much less luck than yourself. The way I remember it my fuzzy little friend, is that I saved you."
Nixta turned its head, pouting. It stuck its tongue out at Phaistos and scurried toward the female baths.
"I really hope there isn't anyone there." said Phaistos through gritted teeth. "I'll catch all sorts of hell if she gets caught."
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A female servant adorned with the Orange stripe of the Lady's house brought forth a wicker basket, into which the cat was thrown. The servant promptly carted it away.
Turning flamboyantly, such a way in that it seemed everything about her ballooned and deflated all at once, she extended one long body, multi-jointed finger at the man following her.
"I'm not a Lady to be spoken of by Ladies and you seem not more Lady than cruelest Lady be. If as Lady you'll condemn me sir then Lady's Lady I shall not be, but Man's Lady and in other words, a common whore, give me that drink then."
Annipe was famed for her very rhythmic voice and almost chanting tempo to her words, as well as rarely making any sense, she snatched the wine out of his hands and threw up her thin orange face veil, pressing the jug to her gummy smile she made plenty of effort to tell everyone around she was drinking and enjoying it.
The veil was tented over the jug and her bent, bony arms. Finishing, she absentmindedly licked her lips and shoved the wine back into Asterion's hands.
She let out a long, refreshed "Ahhhhh"
"Well boy, run along, or else the Lady thinks to make a Lady out of you." She turned and continued her bouncing, flailing march across the marketplace.
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He had not parted with his crystal even since first laying eyes on it, and had never seen a citizen without it. He had not heard of a crystal even stolen before - not even after a murder. And yet here he was, still alive, but the crystal was missing. Keli groaned as he stood up with difficulty, unsure if the lost crystal or the aches were at fault.
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Unable to express such convoluted thoughts and emotions in human speech, he gave up, breaking his silence by speaking in the only manner he truly knew. He stopped moving, threw his head back, and bellowed. The sound was inhuman. A heartfelt cry that was, in and of itself, a song, expressing his spirit, the way he saw life, what he felt, the man he was, released in one, long, and deeply mournful ululation. If the world could be described by the Symphony, than this was Asterion's Song, and for those with the ear carried his story in its quavering notes clearly, and plainly, displayed to the world for all to hear. But to beasts actions speak far louder than any words ever could, and so Asterion drew his sword, and took it by the blade, holding it hilt first out towards the crone as she walked away. Hoping that perhaps he had found a kindred spirit, one who would understand how lost, and lonely he felt in this refined and ordered world, how out of touch with himself and nature this society was forcing him to become. And how much he resented the change, how much he wished to be the simple boy in the maze again. Hoping that perhaps someone else was like him, or could show him a better way.
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"That doesn't keep me from giving up hope," She whispered, slipping back under the water for a moment. Hoping the warm comforting caress of it against her bare skin would take away the bad thoughts. Return her sense of warmth, hope, and home. She opened her eyes, ignoring the bite of the water against them and watched her hair swirl around her. The patterns that it made where so very pretty, so she kept watching them. How long it was until she had to resurface to breath she wasn't sure. It couldn't have been too long. Even still, there was a new person in the room when she broke the surface.
Perhaps person isn't quite the right word, Rain chided herself. People seemed to think it odd that she put as much stock into the welfare of animals as she did into humans. Many didn't understand how she could look at them and see people. Very different yes, but then there were different races of man all over the place weren't there?
"No, I won't hurt you," She called softly, voice full of regret as the small, weasel like animal skittered back a few paces and chattered angrily at her sudden appearance. "How did you get in here?" She asked cocking her head at the animal as it came to a halt by her clothes. The animal glanced at her cocked it's head right back, then started to nose around in her clothes. Rain giggled. "There's no food in there sweet." Nor were there supposed to be animals in the baths, but that obviously hadn't stopped this one. Logic would imply that the small creature must belong to the owner of the voice that she'd heard earlier.
"Do you have a human around here somewhere?" She asked, not really expecting to get a reply. When the animal looked up from it's perusal of her boots just long enough to nod, she clapped in delight. "You're the most enchanting little creature." She murmured, and the thing preened. There was no other word for it. Then, without any warning at all, the little creature took off like shot from a sling, dragging her delicate well cared for and rather well polished brace of throwing daggers along behind it.
"That's mine! I need those!" Rain protested, coming rather clumsily out of the bath, and onto the tiles around it. Her body sluggish from the heat of the water, it was a wonder that she didn't slip and fall. She kept her feet, and grabbing a thick robe off of one of the benches, she donned it, holding up the bottom so that she didn't trip. Mobile, if not as graceful as usual, and decent enough now to be seen she headed after the small mammal with all the speed she could muster.
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"What where you thinking?" exclaimed Phaistos.
The marten began to chatter wildly, bobbing up and down with excitement.
"This doesn't make you useful Nixta!" said Phaistos, starting to panic. "This makes you a liability. What part of low profile don't you understand?"
There argument was short lived though, as the sound of rushed footsteps became more audible with the second. Before Phaistos had time to react a woman with an incredible length of red hair came rounding the corner. For the first time in his life Phaistos was at a loss for what to do; his partner had just stolen a brace of daggers that most likely belonged to the woman, he was fresh off a job, and worst of all...he was naked.
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It all sort of stopped, something inhuman, beautifully so, had swallowed up all the false dribble that had become so commonplace in the world of men.
Turning slowly, with large steps though she were stepping over great trenches, Annipe turned, her veiled eyes undoubtedly staring at Asterion, her toothless mouth gaping behind the veil. She let out a rough kind of caw, and very slowly reached to the two crystals hung around her neck.
She continued her slow approach, her legs wide apart and bowed as though she were trying to make her spindly form seem broader in its billowing robes.
Her eyes fixed on Asterion so intently the gray irises seemed somehow visible through the orange veil, she struck the long cylindrical crystal against the longer, slightly wider cone shaped one. To those around there was little more than a faint "ping"
But to those more in sync with the Symphony, there was a certain violent upheaval, like all the sounds around suddenly washed away. People mouthed words but not even a faint hum resounded, the street was unearthly quiet, the whole world suddenly seemed gloriously silent.
And a ways off, in the direction of the garden district, in the direction of the shoreline, and in the direction of the Labyrinth, there was an indescribable music, a strange distant thing, not so much music as merely harmonious sound, without any true order or pattern.
Then came the crashing wave.
All at once the roaring returned, crashed down on the scene like it had been dammed and freshly let loose. People stomping about, carts grinding against the stone, the heat of the sky even seemed to have a great roaring sound.
And the old woman was running at full, gangly speed down the nearest Alley, her old form foolishly sprinting grabbing at whatever was closest for balance, and turning effortlessly, while certainly not in her prime, Annipe ran much faster than a woman of her age should.
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She had no more than half a second to gawk at the male form, which up until now the 14 year old girl had never seen so lacking in clothing. Then she was slipping, sliding on wet feet, and damped floor. Her muscles, still far from recovered from their time in the hot relaxing water, Rain had very little control over her direction. Before she could react, Rain plummeted into the pool that she could only assume that the dripping man had just vacated.
It was a soaked Rain that came up spluttering, tugging a suddenly uncooperative robe closed tight around her, while simultaneously trying to push a very heavy curtain of extremely wet hair from her face. Luckily she came up turned away from the naked man. "Give me just a moment, and I'll get out of your bath," She murmured face flaming. "You wouldn't have happened to see a small animal dragging an arm brace of throwing daggers not so very much smaller than it come this way would you?"
It wasn't that bad to look upon was it? Rain knew that voice. It was the one that got her into trouble. Made her ask unwise questions, or stick her nose where it truly had no right to be. It was also the second hardest part of herself to deny. Still, despite suddenly having a strong wish to see exactly what all of the fuss was about when it came to male bodies, this was one of those things that she just shouldn't let herself do. It wasn't polite. Has that ever stopped you before? Well, she really did have to admit that it hadn't.
"Could you possibly give me a hand out of here? This robe is so very heavy when it's wet." She pleaded as she started to turn around.
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"I'm very sorry for the trouble Nixta has caused." said Phaistos.
His cheeks were flushed red now, and not just from the soak. Bare chested he knelt down and helped the young woman out of the bathtub. The woman's unfortunate tumble into the tub had soaked her to the core. Her robe seemed heavy on her tiny frame and her mane of red hair clung close to her body. Despite her disheveled appearance Phaistos had to admit that she was a very pretty girl, if not a little young. He grabbed the daggers from the floor and handed them to her.
"She means well, but doesn't really consider the repercussions," he continued, "If I can compensate you for the trouble please allow me to. I have a little money, or if you could use my services I could compensate you that way. Just, if you could leave the authorities out of this I would greatly appreciate it."
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"Laborer! If I ask you again you will get the baton! Who is your owner?"
The large shape was a patrolman, towering above him just an arm's length away.
"I'm... I'm not a laborer, I'm a..."
His voice cracked before he could call himself a citizen. Through tearful sobs he named himself.
"I am Kelius Denai, apprentice to Penelus Thanner, Master Tinker. I was beaten and robbed... and my... crystal... was... stolen."
Kelius looked to the patrolman. The other's eyes betrayed his bewilderment.
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When he came back to himself, he was on his knees in the middle of the street. People were staring, and whispering, a wide ring had formed around him, as others went about their business, and tried to avoid the mad Son of the Maze. A voice called from him, coming closer as it did so.
"Asterion? That you boy?" A guard called to him from down the street as he, and his three compatriots came towards him, called by the people who had noticed the ruckous. In a second he was on his feet again, sword in hand, and sprinting down the street. With a bound, and leap, he was back on the roof tops, fleeing from the guards. The four on the ground weren't the only ones after him either, the court was getting fed up with his wildness, and this strange display was unlikely to escape their notice. The guards on the street were just on patrol, alerted by the crowd, but the five in light weight armor, carrying bows as well as swords, were likely sent by the council to bring him back to the Temple, a place he had avoided with all his might since he had been found by the Kethadrians at the age of 12. Sleeping in the woods, roaming the wilds, that was the life he chose to lead. Unable to return to the maze, he hid in the wilds, staying away from the court, the temple, society, as much as possible. Floating on the fringes, a loner.
Now, for once, he wished that he was not, that he had some companion to help him evade these guards, a safe place he could hide. For a split second he had thought the crone might be such a kindred spirit, but she had fled him as well. None of these weak human's could look at him and not tremble it seemed. Walking the waking world alone is my destiny, he thought to himself as he fled the following men. What's the point in trying anymore, he silently cursed, I stand somewhere between man and beast, both wary of me, neither accepting. No home save the maze exists for my kind.
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It was useless though, a man ran up and poured a bucket of water onto the small flame. All Adriane could do was look on in horror as the water hit the flame and created a fireball. The servant caught fire and started flailing trying to get it out. More servants came with water but it only caused the fire to blaze all the more. Suddenly there was a loud hissing noise and everything seemed to happen in slow motion. She took off down the hall and she had only made a few steps before a massive explosion blew her off her feet and down the hallway. She looked back to see the hallway in pieces and her room in shatters. The roof across the garden had caught fire and was blazing away. As she stood up she felt a stabbing pain in her leg. She looked down and saw a piece of wood had embedded itself in her leg. She grabbed it and with a yell pulled it out before carrying on down two flights of stair and out into the main temple complex. All hell was breaking loose and people, citizens, servants, all of them were running around as if the whole world was ending. Her bloodied self stumbling out of that wing of the complex only worsened matters. A servant with an empty bucket ran by and she grabbed onto his robe and threw the bucket to the ground. She screamed into his face "GO TO THE GARDEN AND GET SAND, ONLY SAND WILL PUT THE FLAMES OUT." The servant was taken aback but upon looking at her eyes he nodded. He ran off to the garden and returned with his bucket full of sand. She stumbled out of the temple into the street and made her way into the market. This was not what she wanted, not like this, this was too much. But it didn't matter, planned or not she was away, it had created the distraction and she was free. First thing first though she had to find a healer, if not the blood loss would end her freedom short. She looked back over her head to see the classroom and living quarters of the Temple ablaze. She shuddered and felt tears coming to her eyes. On accident or not, she was responsible for this, all this damage, the loss of life, it was all her fault. She limped away, bleeding and crying while the panic and rush ensued.
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It was at that time he heard a loud bang coming from the palace followed by screams. He quickly turned his head to where the noise was coming from only to see flames coming from the place where he had just been. He remembered the servants that helped him out, he thought the servants at the palace were stuck up people who didn't know a thing about the real world, although they didn't deserve to get burned alive. But what was he going to do about it? It wasn't his responsibility, it wasn't his problem. He was about to turn his back to it all, when he suddenly saw a little girl limping down the street. She looked about as old as his daughter the last time he saw herr, although she was sickly pale and had hair even whiter than his own. He quickly noticed the piece of wood sticking out of her leg and the stream of blood coming out of it. It had been a long time since Alcaeus had felt sorry for another human being. He couldn't resist the urge to help out this injured puppy.
"Let me take a look at that wound." The girl startled since she didn't see him approaching, her eyes were blurred from the tears still streaming down her face. Not waiting for a reply Alcaeus quickly squatted down and examined the wound with great care. He wasn't an expert at this by far but he picked up a few things while he was still a mercenary, it seemed to him like none of the major arteries were hit although if she didn't see a doctor the wound could become infected. "Egh... You need to see someone who knows a damn about this. There ain't much I can do." The girl only seemed to stare at him with bewildered eyes, Alcaeus started to doubt if she had any idea about what was going on. "Let me take you back to the palace, I'm sure they have grea-..." Before he could finish his sentence he was interrupted by a loud "NO!" Her high pitched scream seemed to echo through the streets, and a few passer bys turned their head to the sudden interruption. Alcaeus was not in the mood for a big scene, and didn't feel like arguing with the kid. "Okay... Okay... Just lemme carry you then, maybe we can find you someone who isn't from the palace..." He reached out his metal hand to the child and tried to force a smile on his face.
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"NO" she screamed out. She would not go back there, she would not be a puppet for them.
"Okay... Okay... Just lemme carry you then, maybe we can find you someone who isn't from the palace..."
The man smiled at her and reached out with a steel hand and tried to smile at her. She looked at his hand and her eyes brightened slightly. She studied it for a second as the man picked her up to carry it. "That hand....... I can fix it." She whispered, it was hard to talk but if this man was going to help her then she must return some sort of service as well. Her eyes were blurring again but she fought off the blackness. She will not allow herself to fall unconscious, not until she knew she was away. She turned her head to the Palace and Temple, the fires were still burning but there was more smoke. A good portion of the complex was a light but it was getting under control. Tears started streaming down her face. This was all her fault, she was away but what was the cost. How many........how many had she killed....how many families would learn that a father, a mother, a child, would not be returning. She started crying and put her hands to her face and turned into the man carrying her. "no, no ,no it's all my fault. my fault, I'm sorry, I'm sorry I'm sorry." she said softly, her voice broken from inhaling the smoke and her tears.
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Thankfully I was conveniently outside the main storyline, I'd like to reincorporate myself, which may require a new character, either way, I'll read back and try and regroup.
I'm so so sorry, I used to pride myself on always saying when I'd be absent, and have just royally failed that...
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and uhh You sure you have NO IDEA how this happened >.<
This just seems like something you just wouldn't forget about lol
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Anyway, my finger is dislocated with fracturing. It's a little easier to type on now but not by much. I'm going to take the opportunity to work on some other projects momentarily and will post ASAP (extreme bruising all over my finger and I can't afford to have it x-rayed and splinted, so it's healing on its own).
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Hope it gets better soon.
I'm assuming that the last of the fire is getting put out right now. Once the immediate panic was over it would go out fairly quickly........as long as no water was used, teehee :D
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Thanks.
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Given Maestro's most recent post, I feel it urgent to note to everyone (because I unfortunately didn't touch on it) that in Kethadria, women are a superior sex. They are not looked down upon, and most of the deities they worship are women. Part of the reason Kethadria is (and Crete was) so successful is that it was an equal gender nation. There was no oppression of women. When they enter a room, they are respectfully greeted and in a family, and in the government, they are valued for their intelligence and opinions. I corrected Maestro's post in private PM and would like if you two adjusted your posts to omit that interaction simply because I want to keep everything cohesive (that doesn't mean there can't be sexist characters, by the way; but generally that outburst would not happen in a meeting) and I intend to have oppression of women become a problem later in the plot as a conflict (after certain events unfold that I've already discussed with Maestro), so it's imperative that it stays intact right now that women are respected at all times.
I do NOT like to correct peoples' posts, so you will only see me do this if it affects the plot as a whole, so trust that it is important.
With my new Mentor duties, I became quite busy abruptly. I apologize for my absence from the roleplay and I will be posting tonight. :)
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Technically speaking I didn't start the fire. I was going to do, but it was going to be a small one, and probably not in the temple, and definitely be able to be put out more quickly XD
though I'm sure my Teacher will say I did in trial :( then it's, do you believe the teacher or the child.






