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Omg! What impeccable lines and immaculate coloring! I have become a fan. Pray tell, how do you conceive such crisp delineations?

OMG ROZ.

I thought my love for you had already exceeded the limits for a girl who is straight, but this...this blows the whole box up. XD!!

These are AMAZING. The picture of the birds is so cute! And the detail on Charizard that is done so far is just...freaking awesome.

And the picture of Roz...Omg. I have no words.

LET ME KNOW IF/WHEN YOU TAKE COMMISSIONS.

You're just...-stutters over herself, at a loss for words-

O.0.......what to say.......

WOW! This is just...amazing. The lines are perfect, the coloring perfect, I can't find anything wrong with....anything!!!! *writes down mental note for a comission*

I will definitely be keeping tabs on this thread!!!

Aww, I love your drawing! The two birds are amazing!!!!! along with everything else! you really are good!

I love Rozwell and Jinger! they rock though I'm more fond of mammal morphs myself. When your ready for commissions, let me know.

<3 I love the charizard sooooo much ><!

Pretty good picture. I'm not to sure about the ears, y'know, with samus being human and all, but other than that, it's a very nice drawing.

The very tip of the gun seems to be at a different angle then the rest of it. There's that little piece that makes it look 2/3rds rather then a profile.
The thumb on the gun also looks a little short. I may have my reality a little blurred because I have long fingers but conpared to what you would imagine of the length of the other fingers, it seems unproportional.

Other then that, it looks perfect. Everything else looks like just right.

Is she suppose to be wearing purple clothing, or is that part of her skin tone?
If the purple is suppose to be a jumpsuit, or whatnot, it needs to be more distinct.

Don't you already have an art thread? Perhaps you'd get more feedback if you tied it into your other thread.

Now, I have a few suggestions. You're line art is very clean and controlled and you seem confident in working with objects in motion. I'm going to point out details that can help your art go even further:

1: Watch how you size and space abdominal muscles. Also, you're continuing the stomach-line through the cut of the hip on the left side. It gives her a bulbous gut-area. Also, watch where you cut the bottom curve of the ribcage. Keep in mind that the elbow tends to reach at right around that bottom rib, and that you generally can't see much of the inward rise of the ribs--especially on someone who isn't really skinny.
2: Watch how prominent you make elbows. The elbow of her right (your left) arm looks dislocated.
3: I have noticed in both your art thread and here that you put all of the weight of the head at the top. She has a massive forehead and a tiiiny jaw/chin that extends quite far. The jaw also hinges extremely high. The whole structure is very alien. While I understand that it is a stylized preference, it's also the dominant (only) style of face I see you do. Just a reminder that redrawing the same facial structure doesn't help artists grow. In fact, it's quite limiting. Her face greatly detracts from an otherwise very professional looking character drawing.

I hope these tips are helpful!

Thanks guys While I feel bad getting told some of this it DOES make me think about and try new things :3 Thats why I like crits!

and yes, ThatsNotPoetry, I do draw the same face over and over and I just realized it after I read your comment XD! /slaps self

Oh I forgot to mention! The thumb of the hand holding the gun seems a bit short--as if the end of it had been chopped off. Perhaps ref a hand to fix that. :3

THAT GUN IS AWESOME!!!
lol