StrifeWorks: Writing By Aeris Strife

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StrifeWorks: Writing By Aeris Strife ( )

Postby Aeris Strife on Fri Aug 06, 2010 5:03 pm

This is my little happy bucket of stories and dreams I've had, and you're welcome to read what I write.

This first StrifeWorks story was inspired by a recurring dream that appears to come to me every few days, over and over, leaving me sweating cold and breathing hard. I call this one Nightmare, because that's just what it was!


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It wasn't unusual for me to wake up in my bed while still dreaming, but I really didn't like it. Every time that I awoke in a dream from some sort of sleep, it would signify the beginning of an extreme nightmare. Still, it helped that I knew that I was only dreaming. I opened my eyes and sat up on my dream-bed, looking around the dream world my mind had created for me. Nothing seemed too evil or strange about this one, except for this one thing: I could see only in black, white, and red. Red seemed to be the only color that stood out, I noted, staring at my bare feet and the bright red slippers beside my bed.

I left the shoes there, then shuffled tiredly into the bathroom. I went through my usual morning routine, then as I was brushing the tangles out of my rapidly drying hair, I stared closely into the mirror and noticed that I couldn't see myself. I touched the glass, as if to wipe the condensation from it, then I found myself in a different place all of a sudden. My hand was still on the cool glass of a mirror, but through this one, I could clearly see my bathroom. I looked around and knew that this most definitely was not my bathroom. I removed my hand from the glass, then replaced it. Nothing was happening- it was quite clear that I wouldn't be going back the same way I came in.

As I knew I would be here a while, I took in my surroundings in the hopes of figuring out where I was. There was a rack of clothing here, a pile of shoeboxes there, and deep blood-red carpeting beneath my bare feet. I realized, with a start, that I was in a department store. I walked about a bit, and soon I noticed that there was no one around. This was bothering me, so I headed to customer service to ask why I was alone, or to see if the store was closed. I looked around for any signs of life, but there was nothing but the sound of me.

I reached the Customer Service desk and kept an eye out for employees, not watching where I was going. My bare feet stepped suddenly into a puddle of something wet, and I groaned. Now my feet were wet and nasty, and I'd have to stay like that for the remainder of this nightmare. I looked down and saw that I was not standing in something normal like water or spilled milk. I was standing in a puddle of blood.

I rapidly backed up until I was away from the puddle, and then noticed something I hadn't seen before- my best friend Alaina laid on the counter, a knife in her heart, blood running down her arm and dripping off her fingers into the large river of blood I'd just walked into. I was freaked out by the sight, so I ran out of the store through an open door into the street. The sight there was worse- everyone I loved was present, killed in different ways and their cold white bodies strewn along the road. I couldn't help myself- I vomited on the black, blood-soaked pavement in my disgust.

I walked down the street, shocked by the brutal killings. I closed my eyes for a moment, then when I opened them, I saw a little note tucked into the slit throat of my sister that had not been there before. I felt my stomach churn, but despite my body's protest and my own instinct to run away, I took the corner of the note and pulled it out. Delicately, I unfolded it, avoiding any part with blood on it. Written in spidery handwriting on the note were these words: 'Guess Who's Next?' That scared me even more, because now I knew I wasn't alone, but in a worse situation: I was alone with a killer.

I started to run, desperate to find my bed. Whenever I found my bed in a nightmare, I always woke up in reality, completely unscathed. Still, I was beginning to doubt that escaping my mental hell would be possible this time. I'd never had this nightmare before, but knowing my mind, I would have it again. Nevertheless, I continued until I saw my bed- occupied by someone, and with the figure of a man lurking over the sleeper. I snuck forward as quietly as possible, then I noticed that somehow, I was in my own bed... Yes, that was definitely me- dark brown hair, tan skin, silvery-blue nail polish visible on the hand that stuck out from under the blankets.

Wait, how could I see blue? I could only see black, white, and red before... I forgot all about that when the man turned to me, and I gasped, suddenly much more afraid than before. He was tall and thin, dressed in white jeans, a torn blue shirt, black combat boots and a long white trenchcoat. The hem of his jeans and of his coat were wet with blood. In his right hand he held a meat cleaver, soaked with and dripping bright red gore. He started walking straight towards me, splashing through blood puddles, and I knew that he knew that I was here. I backed away as he got nearer, and I ended up with my back against a wall and my feet covered in blood. As he got closer, i could find no escape, so I stopped trying to flee. I got a better look at him as he drew nearer and nearer, and saw that it wasn't just his shirt that was torn- his chest and face were missing pieces. The tear in his chest revealed what could have been a heart- a pulsing blue light in the area where a real heart belonged. His right cheek was gone, showing his teeth and making him as if he was grinning eternally.

His eyes were covered by the fedora he wore on his silver hair, so I couldn't see them. When he was about a meter away, I curled up on the bloody pavement and started to cry. This was all too much... I looked up at him, and from my position on the ground I finally saw his eyes- two blue lights were in the sockets, but there were no eyeballs. The man knelt beside me, then delicately placed the edge of his cleaver on my neck, marking a place with a thin line on my neck with the blood of my family on the blade. He then raised the cleaver high above his head, and as it came down to meet with my neck...

I screamed and awoke, sweating bullets and startling my whole family awake. My mother walked into my room, and I ran to her and cried in her arms.



That was one of my more morbid nightmares, it scared me half to death, and it seriously won't go away. Anyway, comments?


-Strife
Last edited by Aeris Strife on Fri Aug 06, 2010 9:51 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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Because this is my stinkin' life, not yours
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Wow. Wooow. This is incredible.

I have dreams this vivid, this memorable every once in a while. For better or for worse I end up writing them down, and I'm glad to see that you did the same. This reads almost like Ted Dekker fiction -- an odd, tumbled good vs evil scenario with more chaos than control to even things out in the end.

The colors playing such a huge part was awesome. Sometimes I wish my mind would operate like that in its waking state, you know? And in a way, it's almost a sort of social commentary. People see things in black and white, and blood.

Dreams where you see your friends and family dead are always harrowing -- and it kicks up about twenty notches when you realize that you're trapped in someone else's little game. Everything in this dream was almost too taut and too cinematic for words -- the note, the sense of finality, even vomiting onto the black and red pavement (one of my favorite lines, btw).

If this piece was 'inspired' by the dream, I'm just curious what was actually in there and what wasn't? As it is, I would totally believe that you dreamed it the way its presented here. I suppose it doesn't matter. It's still a good read. This is the blend of horror and reality that passes as good literature these days. Liked it a lot.

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Thanks for your comments, and I actually dreamt the whole thing that way, so it is the dream, I guess, rather than writing inspired by it.

Most of my dreams/nightmares are in color, but that one I see in black, white and blood.
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Re: StrifeWorks: Writing By Aeris Strife ( )

Postby Mid on Mon Aug 09, 2010 6:58 pm

Thumbs up! I actually think you should expand it more << Make it your own, claim it >:3 Like make it into some kind of dream horror that never ends! Bwahahahaa! <<;; >>;;
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Re: StrifeWorks: Writing By Aeris Strife ( )

Postby Aeris Strife on Mon Aug 09, 2010 6:58 pm

I will! Thanks Myrin!
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Re: StrifeWorks: Writing By Aeris Strife ( )

Postby Billie_blujean on Mon Aug 09, 2010 7:00 pm

I've had some pretty intensely frightening dreams in my time. The worst are when they keep coming back, particularly when no matter how hard you try, you can't change the path it takes. That's always one of the first things I do when I find myself in a dream I've already had - it seems that if you can alter the outcome, you can end the recurrence. At least, that's how it's always worked for me.
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Re: StrifeWorks: Writing By Aeris Strife ( )

Postby Aeris Strife on Mon Aug 09, 2010 7:05 pm

I can't seem to change it... but last night, I had it again... but this time, even though I didn't do anything, he stopped, just above my neck where my dream left off... and then he hoisted me over his shoulder, then carried me away to someplace. When we got there I woke up.
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Re: StrifeWorks: Writing By Aeris Strife ( )

Postby Kagerou on Mon Aug 09, 2010 7:32 pm

..Geez Strife. :D
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Re: StrifeWorks: Writing By Aeris Strife ( )

Postby Aeris Strife on Mon Aug 09, 2010 7:33 pm

Did you like it, Blood?
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Re: StrifeWorks: Writing By Aeris Strife ( )

Postby Kagerou on Mon Aug 09, 2010 7:40 pm

...MAYBE. :D

I would post all of my "nightmares" here, but that would take over your thread...

And I would actually start laughing in my sleep if that happened to me. :D

ZOMG! I JUST GOT AN IDEA!!! :D
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Re: StrifeWorks: Writing By Aeris Strife ( )

Postby Aeris Strife on Mon Aug 09, 2010 7:41 pm

Really? What is this 'idea'?
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Re: StrifeWorks: Writing By Aeris Strife ( )

Postby Kagerou on Mon Aug 09, 2010 7:42 pm

...Let me eat first. I will edit my idea in. :D

EDIT!

Alright...we should totally write horror stories together. :3

And maybe some Naruto and ZOMBIE stories along the way. :D
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Re: StrifeWorks: Writing By Aeris Strife ( )

Postby Aeris Strife on Mon Aug 09, 2010 10:44 pm

OMG yes! I approve!

We could RP some horror stuff too... and some Naruto... and some Naruto horror.
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Re: StrifeWorks: Writing By Aeris Strife ( )

Postby Kagerou on Mon Aug 09, 2010 10:46 pm

....KakashixSakura....now that's some Naruto horror. O.o

I could use Hitachia? :D

HtachiaxSasuke...BLEH! Incest! -.- What makes it worse is that they are twins...O.o

But we must come up with some ideas! :D
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Re: StrifeWorks: Writing By Aeris Strife ( )

Postby Aeris Strife on Tue Aug 10, 2010 11:10 am

HitachiaxKatsu? XD

That might work, because Katsu's like his dad- he doesn't like Uchihas.
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Re: StrifeWorks: Writing By Aeris Strife ( )

Postby Kagerou on Tue Aug 10, 2010 1:43 pm

Hehe...Perfect. And plus, she's a Jinchūriki. :D

....

Isn't your icon pretty much Deidara in a school girl's outfit? -just noticing this-
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Re: StrifeWorks: Writing By Aeris Strife ( )

Postby Aeris Strife on Tue Aug 10, 2010 3:39 pm

And, yes, it's him as a girl. I love it :D

I like our idea. We should begin soon.

But Katsu's like, twenty! -just remembered-
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Re: StrifeWorks: Writing By Aeris Strife ( )

Postby Kagerou on Tue Aug 10, 2010 3:46 pm

..So?

It'll be a bit weird at first, but that's all. :3

And Deidara was 19 when he died. :D

It's only 7 years. ^^

We should begin NOW. I'm itching to write! I'm currently writing a Kingdom Hearts fan fic..

I'm dying to see what Katsu will do first. Hate or like...most likely hate, but need for the Akatsuki.
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Postby Kagerou on Tue Aug 10, 2010 11:47 pm

:D

Thread is dooonnnneeee!
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Re: StrifeWorks: Writing By Aeris Strife ( )

Postby Aeris Strife on Tue Aug 10, 2010 11:50 pm

Yay! I shall go post!
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