In the land of Alosam, a place where the air is filled a virus known as Zoaspot which eats a persons soul. There is only one way to stay alive from the Zoaspot, it can only be destroyed by an element in the earth called Neegmas.There is a certain substance in this element which gives it the ability to plurge the virus away. No one can remove the substance so they just hold a piece around theyre person. When the Zoaspot forms to a certain area (or clumps up in a mass) it creates monsters which attack the cities. the cities are protected by a huge rock in the center of the city which is Made of Neegmas. The soldiers attach a piece of Neegmas to theyre weapon and armor which gives them the power to destroy the creatures. Recently in the land of Alosam the cities have been getting attacked more and more often, rumor has it someone has the ability to control the virus, but no one knows. In a little town of Anoon is where our story takes place of a young man who finds a way to become immune to the virus. Another attribute of the Neegmas is it can heal the soul also.
(this story dates back to medieval times with castles and such.)

My name is Clad, i live in the town Anoon. im 18 and i live with my sister Cless. I usually work for a man named Dirk, in the Soldier barracks. I help polish and train with the soldiers. I do it only to make enough money to shelter and feed my sister who is 13. One day a huge army came to destroy our city. We had to send our entire army to fight, in the last little bit i was told to goto the Neegmas rock in the city to get more pieces to help soldiers and heal them. As soon as i stepped near the rock a huge aura envolped the town. all monsters in the aura was destroyed. and no monsters could enter through this aura. In the middle of all this i was lifted into the air and filled with a presence, and heard a voice. " I am the Essence of Neegmas, you who have been chosen in the troubled times, i grant you my power, be filled with Spirt of Earth."
Then I was lifted down and my Neegmas Amulet sank into my body. I scratched for around my neck then i noticed three brown bars run across both my forearms. after this i heard the voice again, "Hurry, find me three more warriors i will hold this veil of the town for that period of time after that the veil will lift and the fight will then commence. Only you can leave the veil cause of the mark i gave you, and your power will allow you not to be harmed by Zoaspot. Now Hurry". when all was said and done i noticed i was being stared at by the town people. Then dirk and Cless ran at me. Dirk picked me up with two hands in the air and said,"what have you done" while Cless pulled at me and asked "what is this". After all that i tried to gain composer but all I could get out was, "I need to find the other three Chosen."

After i finally was released by Dirk i explained to him and Cless what i was told. Then dirk told me, "Listen Clad, you need to hurry, our soldiers our out there and theyre amulets our about to run out. I told you that the amulet runs out the more you use the power. Theyre out there beyond, that that aura and cant get back in. Please you got to hurry to save them." So with that i left and headed towards the eastern part of the city. In hopes to find someone, i noticed that everyone was staring at me. I wasnt sure if they found out that i was the reason the veil was over the town or the fact that there was three bars over my forearms. I am a 18 year old with brown hair and a brownish red goatee. I usually wear a green vest with brown pants and a darker brown set of boots under my vest i wear i white long sleeve shirt thats torn on the ends. I wear a black sash with knife hanging from it. Im 5' 10" with brown eyes. I usually run around the town so I dont know why they were looking like at me unless its like what i said.

Name: Tiberius Skra'mar
Gender: male
race: High Elf
Age: 52 (But appears to be around 20)
Apperance: 6'2 and strong, but with a look of grace. His eyes are blue. Has yellow blond hair that is swept back and sholder length. over all rather hansome and charming. And of course, Pointed ears. He wears a long, brown, leather coat and a long sleeved, white linen under shirt. His vest is a dark green color and made of cotton. He wears dark brown pants and tall black boots to match a thick black belt set about his waist with a round, silver buckle.
Back story: Tiberius was born in his home land of Talinguea ( Ta-ling-way) The elven province to the east. He spent many years there, in the capital city of Havenmor, learning from the greatest elven minds of the age. Now he travels abroad to continue his worldly learning.
Bio: Being a high elf, his life span is greater than a human's, but he is not immortal. He is wise, and full of knowledge, but still young to his kind, thus he acts as a youth would. Elves are generally discriminated against by others, but he bares it patiently. He is funny, and some times sarcastic, departing wisdom through jokes and stories. He is also a decent healer and can wield a sword pretty well.

Tiberius walked through the market, ignoring the stares of others and their snide comments. He stopped and looked over an apple at a fruit vendor and asked how much it cost. The old woman sneered and replied it wasn't for sale.
"But I just saw a man buy one." He replied calmly. She sat forward and frowned.
"I'm sorry, I meant they weren't for sale to you." Tiberius sighed and looked at a pouch on his side.
"Too bad, I was going to pay a full gold coin for such an apple." The old woman's eyes widened.
"Oh, that apple there!?" She said suddenly. "Why that one you can buy!" Tiberius smiled.
"No, on seconed thought, It doesn't look that good any way, I'll take my business else where, thank you." He walked off leaving her disgruntled, smiling to himself. He had just reached another vendor when the ground shook. "What in blazes?" He said as he regained his balance. A soldier went running by and almost ran into him. "What's going on?" He asked.
The soldier didn't even look at him as he answered.
"Monsters! Attacking the walls!" Then he ran off. Tiberius watched him go and thought to himself.
-My word, I sure can pick the days to go out.-

"Oh my Lord, this is so much tougher than i thought. That huge... boulder... gah it couldnt even tell me what the three other chosens would look like. No one wants to go with me back to the rock, just because all of this nonsense outside." saying to myself as i finally just sit down in the market. I was sitting in a bench near the outskirts of market. Sitting back laying my head all the way back just to look into the sky, well i wanted to see the sky but with the veil from the rock it was just a white sheet. I hated this i wanted to stare and let this just go by me. I leaned forward and stared at the ground and started thinking, "How can find these three, if i just had a clue." Just then a soldier ran by, i stand up to look towards the way that the soldier went. Staring i noticed that the Eastern wall outside the veil has fallen. I looked and saw the soldier run towards the veil, I ran a little towards him screaming "STOP". Then the soldier ran into the veil and vanished, all that was left was his clothes. While hearing screaming I put my head in my hands, "this has to stop." Then suddenly the bars on my arm started to get really dark. "What the crap?" staring at both of my arms, " what does this mean?" then it occuried to me, " this must mean another ones near." I whirled around to see if anyone around looked different. There he was, a man a tall man, no, he was a High Elf. Looking even closer still i noticed he was wearing an amulet. Only people who are warriors or travelers,the only reason that it stands out is because people who live in the town and never leave are protected by the huge Neegmas rock in the center of town. Maybe only two hunters here have one they share, but not regular people he must be one.

Running towards the elf, i yelled "hey,.. Hey gotta second. I have a favor to ask of you? Would you come with me, i think you might be key to help saving our town."

Tiberius turned to face the young human that had called him, giving him a quizical look.
"You, you don't hate me?" Tiberius asked after a moment. (this is slight character control, I hope you don't mind.) the young man shook his head. Tiberius smiled a little. "My, that is refreshing. what do you require of me?" He said, offering his hand to shake.

(not at all do i mind) Shaking Tiberius' hand, "Well this may be very weird, but i need you to come with me." Pulling Tiberius all the way back to the center of the town, the people of the town looked and stared so much even i could feel the glare. Finally getting to the center of town, dirk comes up and grabs me back from Tiberius saying, " what are you doing with this man and his kind? He may even be the reason they are trying to kill us." then the crowd gathered round us yelled, " Yea it must be him, get him." Then i jumped infront of him, "He has done nothing wrong you just wanna pin this on someone, we dont even know what caused all this. Shoot it may have been something we caused, but all i know is i think he can help save us." Then the crowd moved closer in not even hearing my plea. Finally I just full out sprint to the Neegmas Rock, with my arms opened wide, "Neegmas youve chosen me, tell me have the one i brought, is he chosen?" Then the bars on my arm Flashed a brillant green and Tiberius was lifted up into the air just as i was.

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Tiberius was lifted through the air by seemingly nothing. It shocked him to say the least. He was frightened at first, but was soon filled with a calming feeling. A voice spoke to him then, it was kind, yet full of power.
"You who are my chosen, take heart, for the world will know you and respect your name. Take the wind as your guide."

(If it isn't blatently obvious, I've chosen wind.)

What a blinding light, is this what it was like for the others who say me then I heard the same voice again speak to me, "Wind". Im pretty sure that there was more but thats all i heard. Then Tiberius finally was lifted down, he turned to look at me. "Tiberius, so how was it, hey wheres your mark at?" Tiberius looked at me quizically. I said "Look at my arms, thats what happened when i went up."
Then suddenly i heard the voice again, it said " Listen well, followers of the Neegmas. The third chosen is near he is in this area hurry and find him."

On the outskirts of Anoon, a figure smiled.

The evening wind billowed her long cloak about the ankles of her thick boots, and made her shoulder-length hair blow out behind her slender form. Her name was Kaleb, a name usually given to young boys, and she was Chosen - the bender of the element light. It was ironic, in a sense. She, who could control the one element the blackened world needed the most, was on the other side of the battle line. She wished for the destruction of the world; the complete engulfment of it was her enjoyment.

In a sense, Kaleb controlled two elements. It was always two-sided with an element such as hers. It was light and dark. Wherever she cast her light, darkness would fall somewhere else. It was in the labors of her training that she had discovered her ability to bend the shadows. This ability had been quite limited at the start, only until she realized that the shadows could not be controlled on their own, but through the power of Light had she increased her powers. By maneuvering the light in the right direction, she could get shadows to move in another. A two-pronged attack worthy of respect.

As the veil continued to scintillate around the town, Kaleb's smile could only widen. The time to set destruction to this town was soon to be upon her. It was only a matter of time. She had been warned, that the world would provide her with opponents: other Chosen who controlled more basic, rudimentary elements. But that was of no matter to Kaleb. A ray of light in its purest form could burn through anything ten times better than fire. Cold shadows could grip a person and hold them steady, plaguing them with horrible, consuming cold.

And not to mention the myriad of beasts at her command.

They were a force to be reckoned with, and so was she.

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Tirou hummed a quiet tune as she strolled into this town, the signs read "Anoon". She had only been there once before, and only for a day, she made sure to have her amulet with her. As she walked in, seeing the first signs of life within the city, she noticed people giving her odd looks, Tirou assumed this was because of her appearence. She had short and very wild, dark green hair and wore a brown leather jacket, brown leather pants, sandals, black leather gloves with no fingers, and a black linen shirt. The jacket was open, and looked a bit too big for her, as did her pants. Pockets littered her jacket and pants, filled with poisons, powders, and other assorted small and sneaky-like weapons, of course, no one else knew this. She strolled through the marketplace, eying the shops, she bought a piece of fruit and munched on it loudly, coming to an inn. The owner nodded after her as she walked upstairs, to the room she had pair for. She stood at the window, still munching on the fruit, staring down at the passerbys in the street.

Deciding to satisfy her curiosity, Kaleb made her way to the town of Anoon. She was obviously aware that the town was under the protection of the veil. But it that was not enough to stop her. She glanced at her hands, which she was holding palms-up to face and sighed at the markings embedded in them.

A circle rested in each palm, crossed with a small 'X' in the middle of the symbol. They were her marks of passage - her passports through the veil, one could say. These marks were usually hidden from other people's view with black, finger-less gloves. Kaleb was the only person who knew of their existence, and she intended to keep it that way.

Making her way down the slope where she had been perched, Kaleb crossed the small area of dusty land between herself and the veil. She stood for a moment right in front of it, almost as if doubting that she would be able to pass through it without sustaining injuries. She knew for a fact that the marks on her hands would be enough to allow her passage, but there was always doubt. Sighing, she lifted her stoic and slightly amused gaze to the veil and crossed through into Anoon.

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Looking at Tiberius, "Ok Mac, if we are going to find the third one lets split up ok?" Ill look in the western part of town with all the high residential people like the mayor and stuff. You check north where the inn and smaller homes are ok. Oh and another thing, even i don't know how to use these powers yet. So if something happens then all i can say is concentrate on what you want it to
do. See ya meet back here a three o'clock." I ran off into the western part of town. Who knows who or what i may meet there hopefully a chosen. If I'm lucky though.

Kaleb whistled as she entered the bustling town. The marks on her hands had pulled through, after all. Oh, happy day. This'll be easier than I thought.

She smiled to herself and made her way up the small road. Though her attire was somewhat casual, she knew her threads tended to attract attention more than divert it. Kaleb walked along the street and among the shops, trying to appear as inconspicuous as possible. It wasn't hard - she was able to blend into crowded, and empty, places quite easily. She had her ability to blend in with shadows to thank for that.

Judging from the elegant houses and people clad in fine linens, Kaleb could only assume this was the high part of town. She had to find her way to her target - the Neegmas stone. She was not as familiar with the layout of Anoon as she would have liked to be; it had been a long time since she had last been here, and the town had ground quite a lot since then.

She would have considered asking a townperson, if she weren't so sure that her guise might alarm them. Instead, Kaleb tried to make her way as best as possible through this part of town. If she was lucky, she wouldn't run into any of the Chosen just yet. She was eager to meet them, and even more eager to lay waste to them, but that would have to wait for now.

Kaleb's hands shook with eagerness as she thought of a fight between the Chosen. Settle down, Kaleb. We've still got to find that stone so that the beasts can enter. Find the stone first, destroy the Chosen later.

Gathering her cloak around her neck, she quickened her pace and strutted into the town.

Walking into the more richer part of town, i noticed a lot of people starring at me. This may have to do with fact that I don't really have the best clothes or talk as politely as they do. Even through the stares of the people i continued to search for the next Chosen. Walking in the downtown of the high raise area, i noticed many people. None, of which showed me any help nobody appeared to be any different than anyone else. After about ten minutes walking around i finally decided to just lean against a building and think. ' How did i find Tiberius, what made him stand out so much.' Then suddenly the bars on my arm shone a bright red. People around me started staring, then i noticed a person walking around wearing a cloak. I looked hardy still then, i saw her face give an evil grim. She must be a chosen, but why did she have a look like that.