OOC: http://www.roleplaygateway.com/the-short-second-life-bree-tanner-interest-check-ooc-t44924.html

The
Summery of The Short Second Life of Bree Tanner:

The novella is basically about this young newborn vampire named Bree Tanner, who was converted into such by a man trying to create an army of newborn vampires for Victoria(you know, the crazy redhead from Twilight who wants to kill Bella to toreture Edward, who killed her lover, James.). Bree was a more sane vampire, such as keeping a low profile as Riley had instructed, and was able to keep her head when not in hiding, as Riley also told them to stay out of the sunlight(saying it'd kill them). She soon met a guy named Diego, and they were like best friends. The two of them started to notice that what Riley was saying and doing was kind of weird, and discovered that they were just pawns to him and their "creator", and that they would be led into battle within four days(in the story), after witnessing the Volturi(vampire cops) come to Riley and Vicky while they were making out(lol). Diego, who trusted Riley, said he wanted to talk to him, but Bree headed back to their hideout. Diego gets killed by Victoria because he knew that the sun didn't really harm vampires, and Riley comes back to the hideout to train them for the fight, also allowing them to scent Bella's shirt so they would find their target(who was the Cullens). Mainly, Victoria just wanted Bella to get killed, and the army went to the area where the Cullens would be. Bree doesn't want to go, and Fred(the guy we'd be traveling with in the RP) has the ability to make himself and others invisible to people by causing them to feel repulsed by looking at him, as that was his vampire gift. He asked Bree if she wanted to escape with him, but she turned him down, as she wanted to find Diego because she didn't know he was dead yet. She gets to the fight to realize that her side lost, but the Cullens say that they'll take her in and help her. But then the Volturi come and say that they don't give second chances, then kill her in the end.

MY version of the story continued:

A few Newborns followed Fred, deciding it was safer with im than the others, now they ave to avoid being detected by the Volturi and fight for their lives against the wolves, other vampires and sometimes each other.

Ill start the first post to describe were we are and whats going on.

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The moonlight shone down from above, making the group below her shimmer slighly.
"fred, were are we going?" one of them, a girl with vibrant colored hair asked.
"To find a place we can be safe for the day, serenity." the blond male named fred answered then he motioned for them to stop as a human walked across a street about 100 yards ahead.
"dont even think about it" fred said to another black haired vampire who tensed.
"chill it vendetta" serenity said
"im totally iced" V muttered threw gritted teeth.
the human stopped momentarily then continued on.
Vendetta followed him with her eyes,her mind inadvertadly assesing how fast she could get there and drain him before anyone else.
"no." serenity said reading her thoughts
vendetta breathed out.
"im iced, promise" v said.

Bellatrix cast a look at her brother. Lukas looked at Bellatrix.
"That's what they all say." Lukas said. Bellatrix held her breath in and was ready to defend her brother if she had to. Even if he didn't want her help she'd give it anyway. Bellatrix had been the older sibling for a reason because she knew more then her brother could ever understand. She knew the hurt he felt because their lives had been altered so dramatically. She wished they hadn't gone down that alley that night.

"If you dont relax a little everyone here is going to get tense and anything could set them off. we dont need another scene" Fred said casting Serenity a look that said it all.
"relax sis" serenity murmered.
vendetta let the tension in her body drain away slowly.
"there i really am relaxed" v muttered and closed her eyes. she knew without a doubt that had that human been any closer not even her sister would have been able to stop her.

"Tch, you should at least make sure you have a good looking snack," Exia muttered, knowing he had wanted to go after the human too. His remodeled body felt so charged and packed with movement and instinct that he thought it was a waste not go out and run free. The scents and sounds had become less overwhelming but he still hated the fact he could sense everything. It drove him mad sometimes but still, he had control as some of the others had. Although there were times that his limit of control was almost breached.
The danger they were in now added some restraint. He had heard tales of horror and cringed at the though of what could happen to them should they be caught. Being turned into a vampire hadn't been all bad, the pain of transforming had been the worst, and so he didn't want it to end so quickly. He missed his old life though sometimes. Too bad he couldn't talk to his parents.
"Oi, can we move any faster? Before any more humans cross our path and someone," Ex muttered with a look at Vendetta, "snaps and blows our cover?"

Fred was about to reply when Vendetta snarled at Exia.
"you want to make something of it pansy?" she hissed and crouched low into a fighting stance.
Spade, a blonde newborn, with sharp features snickered.
"those sound like fighting words" he said
"your next if you dont shut up" Vendetta hissed but didnt take her eyes off of Exia
Serenity stepped forward between Vendetta and Exia. "please. she doesnt mean it, we are all just a little thirsty, forgive her." Serenity said bowing slightly. Fred sighed. as always serenity was putting herself in danger to keep teh peace. one of these days it would get her killed.

Exaia laughed, finding it amusing how easily Vendetta snapped. A little part of him wanted to antagonize her, wanting to see if it would give him the same rush as before. But, he didn't want to get bored. There would be plenty of fighting soon enough.

"Ah, quiet down Vendetta. I might not hear a real challenge if ya don't shut your trap," Exaia teased, snickering, "And you might want to get out of the way miss serenity or bad things'll happen."

He motioned for Serenity to move, wanting to get a clear shot at Vendetta should she attack.

"I agree with Serenity." Bellatrix said.
"Once we get something in our stomachs everything will be better." Bellatrix said.
"Sure that's what you always say." Lukas snapped at his sister with a pointed glare.
"Nothing will be better." Lukas sneered at his sister. Bellatrix looked away from him and raised an eyebrow.
"Just because you'll never see our brothers doesn't mean you take it out on me." Bellatrix growled.

Serenity sighed. always fighting.
Vendetta stood completely up as if out of her fighting stance, making serenity brighten momentarily, but then she dived over serenity and behind Ex, she wrapped her arms around his neck in a choke hold and bit down on his shoulder attempting to take a chunk of it. Serenity Reacted just as fast by sticking her wrist under Vendetta's mouth, adn screeching in pain as her sister bit her. Vendetta jumped back shaking.
"serenity...i-i didnt mean to...oh my goddess, im so sorry" she cried
"its-its fine" Serenity said threw gritted teeth. she was shaking to, but she hid her hand behind her back.

"Idiot," Exaia snapped as he shook his head, "See what ya done now, Vendetta? Shameless, fighting like that. And you two shouldn't be fighting either. Blood is thicker than water, ain't it?"

Exaia laughed and ran a hand through his hair. He looked around at all of them as though he were the only saint around.

"Serenity, you should allow someone to look at it. Seeing Vendetta's temper, that might be bad. Oi, and you Lukas. What? You think you're the only one who's lost their family. Think of it mate. None of us are seeing our brothers or sisters or mother or father or any other damn bloody family member we had. Deal with it. At least ya have Bellatrix, eh?"

"oh would you shut the fuck up you big headed jerk! my sister is the only reason your not missing your throat right now!" vendetta hissed
"stop" serenity ordered all of them
"we need to move, we have already made a scene" She pointed out as flashing lights came around a corner a few blocks away.
"lets move" she muttered taking the lead with vendetta, fred and spade right behind.

Lukas scoffed. Bellatrix sighed.
"It seems that it's one of his bad days." Bellatrix said. She turned to Serenity.
"Will you let me look at it?" Bellatrix asked.
"You can call me Trix if it's easier." Bellatrix said. Lukas said nothing and crossed his arms over his chest. Lukas and Bellatrix didn't give a second thought and followed behind them.

Exaia chuckled, pleased at Vendetta's reaction. Yeah, he smirked, it hadn't lost its rush at all. Without another sound, he followed, the smirk still visible on his face.

"im fine" Serenity muttered though her wrist had a nice large bite mark on it.
she smiled "im just luck i didnt lose my arm" she laughed
"i hate him" vendetta said as she caught up with her twin. tehy were so much alike...yet so different.
"no you just REALLLLY dislike him" serenity said
"no i fucking hate him, and if i didnt know what you think of him he would be dead now, along with the stuck up lucas kid. no offence" Vendetta said
"lets move faster people, teh un will be up soon, and we need a place to stay." Fred called
"i know a place" spade said then took the lead momentarily. they came to a abandoned house on the edge of town.
"used to think it was haunted...now it dont matter cause we are teh scariest things out there." spade muttered with a nervous chuckle as he thought of the Volturi.

"Please Serenity let me look at it." Bellatrix said.
"It'll make it feel better." Bellatrix said.
"That's what she always says and it never works out for her." Lukas said. Bellatrix sighed before she rounded on her brother.
"Enough with the crap I'm sick of it." Bellatrix said.
"It's time you grow up and act your age not like you're five." Bellatrix growled. Lukas looked at her and then smiled.
"I knew there was a fire in you somewhere." Lukas said.

serenity held out her arm for bellatrix
vendetta looked form the bite mark to Ex's smirk and couldnt take it.
"thats it!" Vendetta said and round housed Ex.
"now let me see your pretty lil'smirk you stupid bastard" she laughed and turned away

Exaia immediatley got back up, wiping his mouth. He didn't know why but he thought it was instinct since he always did that when someone jumped him like that. Without a sound, he immediatley attempted to tackle Vendetta to the ground in order to land a solid blow to her face. To him, an opponent was an opponent regardless of gender. Besides, she attacked first.

Bellatrix shook her head as she took Serenity's arm. She looked at the wound and took the pain from her arm. The only side effect to that power was that the pain became hers. She smiled at Serenity and let go. Lukas looked at his sister and knew she was fighting through the pain. It was just like her and he was concerned about her.

Vendetta went down hard. she didnt care about the rules of fighting much either, so scratching and biting were okay with her. she hissed at him and bit down on his arm then rolled away from him rubbing the shoulder she had landed on as she knew if she were human it would be broken. she crouched knowing there was a very good chance of her losing this fight.
Serenity stood for a moment undecided. she couldnt stop every fight.

"You little sl-" he hissed in pain and grabbed his arm where Vendetta had taken a good bite. He hated fighting a girl. They always brought so much more. Seeing her crouch, he did the same as well, preparing to spring the moment she did which would probably end up in them colliding. He tsked and did it anyway, fangs bared, and hands ready to pummel her senseless.

Vendetta straitened, and laughed.
"how cute, you actually think you can win" she said and stalked around him, teasing him, but ready to take him on any moment. she stopped in front of him and tilted her head to the side obserbving him.
"my sister's right you are kinda cute, to bad you have to die" she sighed and jumped at him