Untitled Poem

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Untitled Poem ( )

Postby #Chance on Sun Jan 01, 2012 7:20 am

Authors Note: Would love if someone could title this, makes my brain explode when I can't think of a title.
Authors Note2: I really can't sleep and I want to keep posting ;-;
Song:Hummingbird - NeverShoutNever Really love this singer and the song has nothing to do with the poem but it is what I listened to while I wrote this.
Edit:I figured out how to use the font colour =D

Untitled/Looking For Title
I long for her the rest of the year,
A balmy affection radiates,
Peaks through the mistress
To make me sway, to make me swoon,
Just to disappear yet again.

He tousles my hair with frigid hands
A forbidding motion I love to caress,
For his devoted blush arrives
To darken my vision with orange, yellow and red,
As he remains dancing between the trees.

Her pale complexion produces a red flush,
As I embrace her heavy chill,
I feel the sting as she strokes my cheeks,
Yet my passion makes me stay,
As I waltz in her declining white.

He pours his tears on my shoulders,
Although I hold the umbrella over my head,
He'll paint the melting sallow with an uneven brush,
Though we'll have to wait,
For his dark gaze to dry.

By #Chance
——————————— ѕтяιcтlу ιc ———————————
The Rainbow Phantasm
A child B o r n o f t h e S u n is something [NO MAN] may grasp
For his H e a r t burns with the ambivalence of an U n c o m i n g D a w n

~
Don't try to tell me awesome p o w e r can corrupt a person,
You haven't had enough to know what it's like.
You're just upset because you [ wish ] you were in my position.
Now nod your head because you know that I'm right.

J E H R I C O |Dystopian Crusader| F A U S T
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Re: Untitled Poem ( )

Postby Eyeris on Tue Feb 07, 2012 4:37 am

I really like this one toooooo.

Poets often leave their works untitled, or you could wait to title it.

Or you could pull out a phrase from the poem. I'm going to throw this out there... "devoted blush". Its sort of an unusual phrase out of context, which will make it stand out, but also alluring and lovely (like the poem).
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