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Constructive Criticism + Feedback

Tips: 0.00 INK Postby PriestKoo on Wed Jun 26, 2013 10:49 pm

Hello everyone, I really don't usually post threads here, but I just wanted to let you guys know a few things I've been thinking about. It is very important to know what other people think in mediums such as these: creative writing, theater, cinema, art, literature, and other similar forms of expression. I believe that It is even more important that an unbiased eye reviews the work that you've worked so hard on.

I'm willing to read the progression of your role plays and critic each writer's style, story telling ability, relativity to the world your in, and imagery. I'm not perfect, but I can at least tell you what I think about the work you're doing. You guys really do work really hard on these role plays, and you do deserve feedback, whether it be positive or negative. I just wanted you guys to know that I will compose lengthy reviews. I'll never say "Oh... that was okay."

I'll be starting with this site's top role plays; first on my list is "The City of Chains"

If there is already an alternative route to pursue my goal then I would like to know. Is there a member's board that I can join in order to do this with a group? Do the moderators already offer this service? I'm just doing it for fun, and wanted people to know that I wasn't a weirdo. ;P I'd also like everyone to be able to read my reviews if they wanted.

- PriestKoo
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Re: Constructive Criticism + Feedback

Tips: 0.00 INK Postby Kronos on Sun Jun 30, 2013 6:28 pm

Been done. Prove yourself and look at the scholars (formerly mentors) group.

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Re: Constructive Criticism + Feedback

Tips: 0.00 INK Postby RaquelRae on Thu Jul 04, 2013 4:41 pm

Seems like a good idea, I hope all goes well.
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the menace of the years finds and shall find me unafraid.
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I am the master of my fate, I am the captain of my soul.

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