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Tips: 0.00 INK Postby Dart on Mon Sep 03, 2007 5:33 am

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Give me your thoughts.
Any constructive criticism helps.. :D

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Re: My Drawings

Tips: 0.00 INK Postby Fluffy on Tue Sep 04, 2007 9:06 am

Not bad, though I think the lineart could use a little polishing. I notice it's all jagged, like you made the lineart with just small strokes bit by bit. Your proportions are good in the first two pictures, but I'm noticing that things are a little off in the last one, namely the arms in the dominant kisser and the forelegs in the submissive kisser (I keep mixing up seme and uke, so yeah XD; ). Don't be afraid to sketch out the basic anatomy with a harder pencil first, then do the complete lineart in darker strokes. Don't worry about being clean with your linart. Besides, you can always clean it up with an eraser or clean it up digitally.
>.> I am a Transfan and an artist. Be warned. <.<

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Re: My Drawings

Tips: 0.00 INK Postby Dart on Fri Mar 14, 2008 6:07 am

:] Thanks for the suggestions.

I know what you mean about the third one.
I did kinda intend for it to look like that... but I could've done something different with the background.. .-.-;

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Re: My Drawings

Tips: 0.00 INK Postby snow_fae on Sun Mar 16, 2008 11:31 am

I like it alot. >> so much better than I can draw, hahaha.

only tip I have is draw very often. The more you draw the better you'll get.
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