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Hunt of Freal

Hunt of Freal

a part of “Hunt of Freal”, a fictional universe by sunny515241.

You and others run for your lives, hiding around the world from the guards of Freal, who are constantly trying to kill you.

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[OOC] Hunt of Freal

Tips: 0.00 INK Postby sunny515241 on Mon Dec 27, 2010 7:03 pm

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Re: [OOC] Hunt of Freal

Tips: 0.00 INK Postby PanzerJedi on Mon Dec 27, 2010 8:54 pm

The concept seems interesting enough, I've always been somewhat interested in RPs like this, and I'd normally be interested in joining, but there is one major thing preventing me. Timeline. Namely consistency. As a highly OCD history buff an RPs location in time is very important to me. I use this to determine who my character will be, what their profession is, the way they act, and stuff like that. You stated in the introduction that the year is 1903. Historically this would be impossible for multiple reasons. One, nuclear power was only harnessed at the end of the 1940s and the beginning of the '50s. In fact the theories behind nuclear energy weren't even developed by this point. You've also indicated in your character sheet that you character has several technological devices like a laptop computer and a cell phone. Again, this would be impossible in the early 1900s, the technology just didn't exist back then.

I'm not telling you this to be rude, and I hope I do not come across that way. I am sincerely interested in joining, but I just don't feel that I can with these inconsistencies. I'm also telling you this in hopes to help you become a better writer, RPer, and GM. Consistency is very important in making a believable world. Ultimately, no one else besides myself may care, and it's up to you if you want to edit things. After it is your RP. If you do change it I will join. I also wish you the best of luck and hope your RP is successful.
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Re: [OOC] Hunt of Freal

Tips: 0.00 INK Postby sunny515241 on Tue Dec 28, 2010 1:33 am

Thank you and I will get to work changing it rite away. I greatly appreciate your help if making the RP better.

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