Immortal Icrani

Your time is now jax you will perish this day & night, not now or never it i have dicovered my true power and you will never know my power. he yelled and he his hair spiked and turned white his eyes were also white, his clothes hand turned white and then on top of it a gold serpent started to twist around him and it bonded with his other powers and unlocke sanction and he stood there with a imense fire around him he spranged foreward at the necromancer and he kicked him through the glass he jumped down and landed and he charged up a energy attack kori jin hundar and the necromancer was gone in a flash

Please don't take this the wrong way, but you have some serious word mix ups in there mate. Like "Perish" and cherish, and "clothes" where I think you meant closed, and um...remember to capitolize after a period