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Madonne, Water-type gym leader! Specifically, G4.

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While I can definitely tell this is your older work, Saken, it has many of the attributes of your newer poems! They have the seeds of that individual style I noted in the other thread, while still being held by the fragmented constraints of "normal" poetry. This is an interesting mix of fr...

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cut me at night with a shard of broken glass spirit away my body to a place I don't want to be end my thoughts with a single action keep doing this to me and you'll see what happens tell me I'm trash and that I'm not worth it knock me to the floor and make me do something about it b...

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Coffee! My ____ brings many people to my front yard sometimes. They like my ____ because what I sell there is very cheap. People in my neighborhood tend to not have many ____ -- they're quite dangerous, and really, who normally frequents a _____? Usually old people or poor people or. Eh. But it's fu...

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Loving the style of your poetry, Saken. You have a very personal, subject style -- sudden full stops, semicolons, line breaks. It takes some getting used to, I'll admit. It's what I think people call an acquired taste? It kind of reminds me of e. e. cummings; he gives me lots of inspiration for my p...

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I really liked this, Sato. Never mind the words or expressiveness of the text, the aesthetic set-up of the poem's lines was great. And, of course, this was a great read. I don't like being the type to be going through a literary piece of art and critiquing everything -- that's too formal, technical ...

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Growing up is hard
to do, especially as
a boy in dystopia.

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This girl couldn't possibly be deserving of his attentions, Imakpik mused as she struck the barrel at the last moment, sending it flying into fragments. She appeared to lose some balance hitting the object, and at that point the clown, dancer, whatever he or she wished to characterise themselves as,...

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I never think about you, boy I've never dreamt of you I've never thought of us together I've never walked by your house just to see if you were in I'd never have an opinion on that bitch you're still seeing because really, thinking of that trick and you's clearly below my status I've never followed ...

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Well, is it? What defines morals? Who defines morals? Who defines looseness of morals? Is this a 'you can measure it' type of thing or is it sort of like 'I can tell it when I see it'? What are morals? What do they encompass? Should they be private or public? What are your morals? Do you have loose,...

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Honestly, to me, Christmas is an event. It's like a show. Something you watch for amusement, but really, what is it besides that? When was the last time you saw an advertisement regarding Christmas that a) wasn't about a Holiday sale b) wasn't a religious proselytizer damning the world and its futil...

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A knife? What was he, a mere beast of the land, that he should be gutted by such vile weapons as these? He would not be insulted in this way. As the girl drew what appeared to be a somewhat sharp object, Imakpik readied himself for the usual plan. Namely, get the hell out of there. Taking aim, she t...

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tell me why all the people in the world just can't get along why there's racists and bigots and giants and midgets and people who die and people who stay alive and cars and trucks and trains and planes and death and beauty and disaster and glory and awkwardness and poetry and trees and sidewalks an...

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Name: Soligos. Age: (Must be over 21) Approximately five thousand years old. Gender: Ostensibly male. Race: Dragonspawn of the Blue Dragonflight. Reason For Applying: With the recent Previous Experience: Soligos has almost five thousand years of protecting the Blue Dragonflight through any means nec...

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Despite it being just an ordinary human, Imakpik couldn't help grimacing and turning around as the woman - his mark, he reminded himself calmly, did the deed. This type of behavior was why he was on the job, after all. Justice had to be served. And if it wasn't justice, it was vindication. Imakpik f...

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Are you doing this again on the 10th?

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Aww, thanks guys. <3

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When does this start?

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Do you think it'd be possible for this thread to link to the IC?

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From what you can read in the first post in this thread, DraconicArcania is obviously booked fully. How about you ask another Mentor or user offering help??

Discipline - Posts

Re: Pokemon: Breaking the Chains (Interest Check)

Re: ~Poem(s ?)~

I Like It Rough

Re: The Official "My _____," Game.

Re: Saken's Poetry (Comments and Criticism Welcome).

Re: It Hurts To Fall Asleep

Growing Up

Re: From ice cold to white Hot---2 vs 1

I Never Think

Is Every Generation Getting Looser Morals?

Re: Why Are Some People So Jaded About Christmas?

Re: From ice cold to white Hot---2 vs 1

Tell Me Why

Re: Official Gambit's Bar Thread

Re: From ice cold to white Hot---2 vs 1

Re: RPG: Live! A webcast for your eyeballs Fridays at 8pm ES

Re: Save It For Your Pillows! Do YOU Have Too Much Fluff?

Re: [OOC] Resistance in Artistry

Re: [OOC] Unique Worldbuilding Project

Re: Now Taking Students