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Re: Love For-Never

To prevent any form of "brash" comments, please specify, when wanted, what kind of critiques you are wanting. We, as the readers don't know if you want us to be gentle and beat around the bush or just throw it in your face. Just sayin'. Now then, personally, I hate that you're sticking to ...
by Matthias
on Mon Nov 30, 2009 3:47 pm
 
Forum: The Writer's Lounge
Topic: Love For-Never
Replies: 16
Views: 585

Re: So You Wanna Publish A Book?

It isn't likely that the people that go to your forum will be able to copy and reproduce a book from your ideas. Personally, I wouldn't worry about it knowing this fact. But if it eases your mind, then sure, add a legal notice saying, "Hey, this is my material and if I find out you've plagiariz...
by Matthias
on Mon Nov 30, 2009 3:12 pm
 
Forum: The Writer's Lounge
Topic: So You Wanna Publish A Book?
Replies: 32
Views: 9906

Re: Poems;;

Valentine : The symbol of love rests in his hands where Red, velvet petals fall from the vine. He pulls the off slowly, debating his love. This entire line doesn't work well with the two previous and seems... "rushed", love "debating his love," though. His heart beats for one al...
by Matthias
on Mon Nov 30, 2009 12:54 am
 
Forum: Poetry
Topic: Poems;;
Replies: 6
Views: 532

Re: Technicolor Dream

Some of the breaks in this poem were jagged, and for what it is, it's suited perfectly. There were, admittedly, a few phrases that seemed odd. Such as: but your skin looked like glue, Why can't it look like winter, to keep comparison to the next line? A little green, you know, to make it happy (?) I...
by Matthias
on Thu Nov 26, 2009 4:14 pm
 
Forum: Poetry
Topic: Technicolor Dream
Replies: 6
Views: 492

Re: Words to Comprehend

Hikari Tenshi wrote:*groans* You would die of laughter if you read any of my old poetry... but I guess I could put one up here. *sighs* >_<

But you have to post an old one, too. ;D


Nothing wrong with laughter, and I'm always laughing anyways. <_<; You first! =P
by Matthias
on Thu Nov 26, 2009 4:00 pm
 
Forum: Poetry
Topic: Words to Comprehend
Replies: 7
Views: 282

Re: Help would be lovely :)

basically i need help just understandin it all. Like, if you get hurt, how do you know when you're dead? Even if the fight is based around fantasy standards, keep it realistic in this aspect. If you get cut severely, then blood loss will be an issue and a critical factor to how you soon move, react...
by Matthias
on Wed Nov 25, 2009 12:03 pm
 
Forum: The Academy
Topic: Help would be lovely :)
Replies: 5
Views: 406

Re: No more vampires

Again, we've no facts to support what any of us are saying, nor are any of us vampires. It's a "What if" scenario. Q_Q
by Matthias
on Wed Nov 25, 2009 11:51 am
 
Forum: Discussion & Debate
Topic: No more vampires
Replies: 41
Views: 1735

Re: No more vampires

Just a thought, but: We, as humans are evolving and there are numerous facts, visibly, that prove this. So, why can't a vampire, who has been around for generations, have evolved along the way? The chance of being able to produce semen(if male) or to give birth(if female) can occur, even if rare. Ev...
by Matthias
on Tue Nov 24, 2009 2:17 pm
 
Forum: Discussion & Debate
Topic: No more vampires
Replies: 41
Views: 1735

Re: Words to Comprehend

I'll post a poem if you post one of your older ones? Or a new one. <_<;
by Matthias
on Tue Nov 24, 2009 11:29 am
 
Forum: Poetry
Topic: Words to Comprehend
Replies: 7
Views: 282

Re: Words to Comprehend

Or, you know, you could put up some of your older poems before burning them. ^_^

As for Shakespeare - yeah. You already know the feeling.
by Matthias
on Mon Nov 23, 2009 11:57 pm
 
Forum: Poetry
Topic: Words to Comprehend
Replies: 7
Views: 282

Re: Training Hall-Arena OOC, Advice, Opponents and Camaraderie.

Saladin, are you ready to post yet? =(
by Matthias
on Mon Nov 23, 2009 9:23 pm
 
Forum: Battle Arena
Topic: Training Hall-Arena OOC, Advice, Opponents and Camaraderie.
Replies: 502
Views: 39627

Re: Strange Collections?

1: No
2: Nada
3: I'd hope not. <_<
4: Damn straight I pride myself on my collection. ;[
5: Good, good.
by Matthias
on Mon Nov 23, 2009 9:08 pm
 
Forum: Discussion & Debate
Topic: Strange Collections?
Replies: 11
Views: 527

Re: This guy passed the Bar Exam???

LOL Best thread I've seen in a while.
by Matthias
on Mon Nov 23, 2009 9:06 pm
 
Forum: Discussion & Debate
Topic: This guy passed the Bar Exam???
Replies: 7
Views: 623

Re: No more vampires

This thread makes no sense, actually. I mean, the creator owns six vampiric characters and then proceeds to slam the sudden (?) uprising in their popularity. Not sure how it's a sudden thing, as they've always been popular. I'm sure it's noted somewhere in the lines that I skimmed that this is mainl...
by Matthias
on Mon Nov 23, 2009 8:59 pm
 
Forum: Discussion & Debate
Topic: No more vampires
Replies: 41
Views: 1735

Re: The hurt of it all

Love is for those who desire happiness. Love gives happiness until it is destroyed. As all things, love must come to an end. It is the ending which hurts most. It doesn't matter what happens in between, just the beginning and end. When the love bond is broken it is the breaker who hurts the most. T...
by Matthias
on Mon Nov 23, 2009 8:45 pm
 
Forum: The Writer's Lounge
Topic: The hurt of it all
Replies: 5
Views: 515

Re: Help would be lovely :)

I've no problem helping in this aspect of writing. Been sparring for well over four years and know more than I care to, honestly. You want to learn how to prep posts properly, and when and how to dodge and/or strike, then you let me know. Sending a private message would be great, but, whenever and f...
by Matthias
on Mon Nov 23, 2009 8:39 pm
 
Forum: The Academy
Topic: Help would be lovely :)
Replies: 5
Views: 406

Re: Words to Comprehend

Not going to lie, this is a pretty sexy piece of literature. Though, admittedly, I hate the Old-English terms that you used, as most cannot fit them properly, but you seemed to have no trouble in doing so. Kudos on that. Glad this was your beginning step into the forums Poetry section and I can't wa...
by Matthias
on Mon Nov 23, 2009 8:32 pm
 
Forum: Poetry
Topic: Words to Comprehend
Replies: 7
Views: 282

Re: On Writing

Something every writer wishes. Not too bad, though "flawed". It could sound better if you played with the word-usage just a little more. For instance, "could have" sounds better overall, instead of "could've". But, as you stated, "it doesn't work like that" al...
by Matthias
on Mon Nov 23, 2009 8:20 pm
 
Forum: Poetry
Topic: On Writing
Replies: 1
Views: 294

Re: {letterbox}

I'm not going to critique, but rather, tell you what I felt when reading these.

1 : It started out as a memory that ended with a quick slap to the face. Personal favorite so far.
2 : Blargh. Few too many enters, but still.
3 : Ouch. Spiteful little thing. =(
by Matthias
on Mon Nov 09, 2009 10:39 pm
 
Forum: The Writer's Lounge
Topic: {letterbox}
Replies: 7
Views: 805

Re: "Green Day" Love or Hate

There's no rewarding satisfaction from listening to any of their songs. Scream at me some more through those microphones, please? `-`;
by Matthias
on Mon Nov 09, 2009 10:20 pm
 
Forum: Discussion & Debate
Topic: "Green Day" Love or Hate
Replies: 6
Views: 516
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