I like it, but it seems really restrictive to me in practice. You're making an entire universe, but the linearity and unbreakable direction of the story undermines the potential of having a vast environment and deep characters, unless you plan to send the five main characters on various wild goose c...
I prefer using anime-style pictures over real people. You don't have to go digging as long as you have a solid resource (mine is Pixiv), and you don't use a real person's face (and especially not a celebrity's face that you already see everywhere). I also don't like using pictures that depict charac...
Text with little to no break-up is annoying as hell, because it's a wall (or series of walls) of text. That just makes me say, "Fuck it." I try to make paragraphs with a low sentence count and better topic separation so it's easier to stop and continue any time while reading it. Now, seein...
I'm not sure what all the hubbub is about. I liked it. He stammers when he speaks, so I thought the gif illustrated that perfectly... but eh, maybe that's just me :P I thought that myself, actually. "I-I'm sorry i-if it seems out of pla-place, but I w-was thinking you were k-kinda... I'm sorry...
I don't think he meant that it was too big, though it does kind of keep the text from being the centerpiece it should be until the picture's out of frame. I think Pulse meant that it just looks... awkward, I guess? Not exactly creepy or particularly unnecessary, but more along the lines of intimidat...
I only had two thoughts at your drawings: 1) Briton wears barrettes, and he looks drunk. Also, my glasses are sexier than his. 2) Helluva lot better artist than me. I might be better if I was distracted by drawing in the middle of work, rather than trying to work with drawing as the primary focus, b...
I have a half-serious question for basically everyone that's already posted, and probably people who haven't posted yet: Why do you all bold completely normal speech ? I've never seen it used as a common writing practice; it's always been for emphasis with me and in every book I've read. Italics wer...