In Cam Lire, hope is something whispered in the ears of children to aid in sleep. The reign of the God King is spreading like a disease. And though it needs curing, rebellion is but a sweet dream.
However, there are those who would see it reality.
But, is this really a plague or a blessing in disguise?
However, there are those who would see it reality.
But, is this really a plague or a blessing in disguise?
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The Log
Everything here belongs to the old RP or Chapter 1. I place there for the purposes of displaying the old rating and links for veterans and new members who might want to go back and look at things, mostly the the first chapter IC.
26/30
28/30
Characterization: Advanced Plot: Proficient Depth: Advanced Style: Advanced Mechanics: Advanced Overall: Proficient
Izoi wrote:This role-play makes great use of detail and the time period that the plot occurs within. The characters are thoroughly thought out, as are the posts despite the great deal of content in this role-play; which can be off putting to some. If one is seeking a very advanced, well thought out, fantasy setting and plot, this one is most certainly worth looking into.
Characterization: Advanced Plot: Proficient Depth: Advanced Style: Advanced Mechanics: Advanced Overall: Advanced
LynIsMe wrote:I thoroughly enjoyed reading this! The characters are well-defined, and the plot is progressing very smoothly. The use of depth in everyone's posts, as well as the grammar and mechanics make the story very interesting to read. The Storyteller's opening post was a great intro, and the following posts were all insightful to each character's personality and background. The majority of the posts were all vertical, furthering the plot and character depth. The use of style in the posts was also attention-grasping. I'm looking forward to seeing where this story will end. Great job