Snippet #2709431

The sword hit the ground dangerously close to the womans face, nearly stabbing her had it not stopped, had anyone been watching as the sword stopped a hair from her nose before a gust of wind knocked it aside without harming her would have wondered just what was going on. The man who held the sword turned as he was struck, only to get nailed in his throat, dropping like a sack, more men swarmed from the surrounding woods

Some of these men were pale, their eyes red with bloodlust and fire. Vampires to be sure. One fo them stumbled near the blanket as a silver claw slit his tendon, hamstringing the man cleanly as the blanket moved, a foot stabbed the vampire dead in the heart with such force the vampire screamed and faded into fire. The woman stood, her body slender and tall. Long brown and black hair whipped around her in the wind as ash began to fall like snow.

Perfect

The unknown man, who was already fighting the prey that came into her trap didnt see her just yetr as she plucked out of thin air a crossbow bolt and threw it at the man Frank was fighting, nailing the guy in the forehead. A flick of the wirst and silver claws ripped out the troat of another man while a well placed foot was surgically planted in the groin of another man. twenty pairs of eyes watered in sympathy as the man sank to the ashy ground screaming and holding his jewels. By then the woman was dressed. But fur still covered her body that Ferank could see.