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OOC - That’s fine with me. Basic things that your character could assume are fine. Just make sure it’s from your own character’s perspective. “Ayden looked comforted when hugged by his younger sister” is better than “Ayden was comforted when hugged by his younger sister.” The first implies your character notices the emotion and is simple reading it, the second is taking control of my character. I’m not very strict though so I can let a lot of things slide lol.

IC - Ayden nodded. The main streets were too wide and not very much cover, except for the cars that were littered everywhere. Of course, many of them were useless as their gas was ciphoned long ago. Gas was pretty scarce nowadays. He brought out the city map out of his backpack and unfolded it on the table. On it were several red marking noting where they ran into trouble, and places to avoid. They wouldn’t need to go far to get to the market he wanted to check out today, but they should try to find a way through the alleyways and backroads.

“Here,” he said, pointing down at the map. This series of alleyways is probably our best bet, as long as we stay quiet.”

Alyson peered over down onto the map. “Will it be safe?” She asked.

“We’ll be as safe as we can,” Ayden assures her.