The Great Black Wall

The Great Black Wall

a part of “The Great Black Wall”, a fictional universe by Aniihya.

Ten thousand years ago, a massive wall was built to keep the winter horde and their wizards from invading the southern empires. But now with the winter horde gone, the wall is barely manned, but a new danger threatens the lands.

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The Great Black Wall

Tips: 0.00 INK Postby Aniihya on Tue Apr 16, 2019 3:00 pm

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Re: The Great Black Wall

Tips: 0.00 INK Postby Butterfly Effect on Tue Apr 16, 2019 3:42 pm

This Order sounds like a mix of Night's Watch from GoT and the Grey Wardens from Dragon age.

I'm interested. Have a Question though...

Can my character be from the North of the wall? Or are only south of wall people allowed?
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Re: The Great Black Wall

Tips: 0.00 INK Postby Aniihya on Wed Apr 17, 2019 12:57 pm

Yes your character can be from north of the wall as people exist north of the wall. And I have never seen Game of Thrones. The ceremony part is somewhat inspired by dragon age but I wouldn't say they are comparable to the grey wardens so much. Like the grey wardens, they are an order of guardians but the grey wardens have a specific enemy. The order of Whitewatch however is generally tasked to protect the inhabitants of the continent from any evil that arises, specifically one that may come from the north.

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Re: The Great Black Wall

Tips: 0.00 INK Postby Aniihya on Sat Apr 20, 2019 11:54 am

Should we start? I don't know if anyone else is going to join.

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Re: The Great Black Wall

Tips: 0.00 INK Postby Butterfly Effect on Sun Apr 21, 2019 9:38 am

I'm all for starting.

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Re: The Great Black Wall

Tips: 0.00 INK Postby Aniihya on Wed Apr 24, 2019 12:32 pm

Well I wrote a first post two days ago.

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Re: The Great Black Wall

Tips: 0.00 INK Postby AppleSauce on Thu May 16, 2019 3:06 am

Not sure if this RP is still going but I can see a lot of potential.
There's just a few plot holes that I think, if further explored, could open up more opportunities for excitement in the RP (and possibly more recruits).

For instance the description of the factions and such confused me a little. Orcs are extinct but how do they summon them for sacrificial ceremonies? It would be cool if the order secretly has an "orc farm" that no one knows about. It would be cool for the dragons and orcs history to be further fleshed out too. Like I imagine the orcs and dragons teamed up to fight against the order for their cruelty in gaining power. It could be that everyone thinks the order is just protecting them, when they're in fact just power hungry and secretive because of the above.

Would be cool to see more description on the different area too; like what races reside in each area most; which races are friendly with each other and which aren't. I would love to join something like this but I wanted to play an orc R.I.P. and thought it would be cool to play the "villain" in your tale so that there's that bit of drama you know? and always mystery: where did this character come from? Why are they hunting us down? Who are they? What are they? Etc and as the characters find out more about the villain, they'll learn more about the order.

These are just some suggestions though, and it's completely up to you how you would like your RP to run. I really do hope that it picks up because it seems fun. :))
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