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Hunter of The Deep.

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a character in “Decadent Depths”, as played by blackrider


Sorry if this got posted twice, Im not sure if it did. I literally got the 502 error when i hit submit last time, and i didnt see it up when i got back on so i resubmitted.

Name: Torn-Fin “Fin”

Age: 35

Height: 6'8”

Weight: 350

Race: Carchodan (Car-Choh-Don)

Appearance: Closely resembling sharks Carchodans are a race of massive fish-men hybrids and like most of his brethren Fin fits the stereotypical “great white shark with legs and arms” look. Looking at him as an individual however a few characteristics stand out, such as the large chunk missing from the medium sized fin on the back of his head to the various battle wounds that riddle his exposed muscular chest and arms.


He is large even by Carchodan standards, and his face is far more triangular then most of his race-although this is a feature often only noticed by his own kind.

Weapons: Fin carries a large over sized quiver on his back that is filled to the brim with a numerous amount of large deadly looking harpoons. He also has two sets of razor sharp teeth in his mouth that make toothpicks a necessity.

History: Fin hails from Carcharia, one of the most western City States of the vast ocean kingdom. His people, the Carchodans, are a race born and bread for battle-a fact that has served his kind well. Making their homes near what many would consider uninhabitable waters the Carchodans have thrived for countless generations, their society driven by the hunting of gargantuan deep sea monsters. Eventually this ritual hunting turned into a spiritual act of sorts, generation after generation seeking to take down larger and larger “monsters” of the deep. To die in a hunt is the greatest honor.

Fin remembers in his younger days when he and a band of warriors could travel into the murky depths of what his people simply called “The Deep” and track down a beast worthy of hunting within a day. Recently though his people are facing a crisis of sorts with The Deep, which is somehow seemingly devoid of life now.

With nothing to hunt the hungry eyes of his people began to turn towards bordering city states. More and more rumors abound that Carchodan hunting parties have actually stalked and killed other races in recent days.

With his race facing decline, and perhaps extinction, Fin has been sent as an envoy to the Queens palace to represent his people. He is currently in the palace to both answer for the alleged crimes of his race while at the same time begging for a resolution to his peoples plight.

So begins...

Torn-Fin's Story