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Homdale: On a dying planet.

Homdale: On a dying planet.

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Your character awakes on a strange desolate planet, where the oceans are dry and whats left of what looked to be forests, are all but dead. (FULL)

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Introduction

After drifting through time and space, you awaken on a strange desolat planet. You awaken to see nothing but gold, brown and red soil covering all that the eye can see. Barren ocean bottoms, and dried out rivers, dead forests and what would appear a lifeless planet. You can see a strange tower on the horizon. A tall black tower that shoots straight into the sky, the top covered by clouds. This may be salvation. This might be an answer to how you arrived here. You are not alone on this quest though. Others, like yourself also awoke on this strange planet and can see the tower in the distance. Everyone must make there way to this tower in order to find answers. Whether it be traveling through the deep sands, or the dead ocean floors, or even the dead forests, everybody's paths must cross at this tower.
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When you arrive at this tower and learn you were not the only person to be brought, or transported here, you and your new friends soon learn that that this tower has no entrance or exit, but it puts off a strange energy that everyone can feel and that there are enigmatic forces at hand that are dying to get off this planet as much as the characters themselves do.
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There are no specific character classes needed in the role play. Remember, that your character that you bring here can be from ANYWHERE. Time and space have brought you all here for a reason, a purpose. Your character can be from Modern time earth, or another being from a far off galaxy, or even a character from a far off mythical land. Just please, do to god mod your character. Don't "OP he or her.
-We need Males.
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The Combat Rules
-Under no circumstance can we kill each other. Sure we can hate each other, but let's not forget that we were all brought here for a reason. Why would we kill each other if each of us is seeking something unexplainable?
-One hit kills are expectable, so long as your character description states what he or she is skilled in and if the skill set makes sense for the OP kill.
-Blowing stuff up is allowed, depending on what is going on in the RP.

-There will be time when we as a group will encounter the Enigmatic forces of this strange place. And it is up to you and your specialties that you provide with your character that will stop them. Whether it be:
-Dueling
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-Ship/Spacecraft battles
Anything can and will happen on Homdale. It is only a matter of time when it happens. So prepare.

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The Unknown

The Unknown by The Heliumite

You awaken on a strange desolate planet.

The Black Citadel

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The black tower that all characters can see on the horizon of the barren, dry sands of Homdale.

Ah'bur: The Dead City

Ah'bur: The Dead City by The Heliumite

The last known city on Homdale. Dead and lifeless like everything thing else on the planet, something evil roams about here.

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Golden rubbed her massive body against Al'therin. Her wolf like body stood half as tall as him. The rubbing was meant to be a consoling gesture. She hadn't realized how much the sun had weakened him. She was also suffering--the pads of her paws were still blistered and raw and her tongue remained dry despite the small bit of water she had been able to uncover. Able to see better in the growing darkness she surveyed the dead landscape.

Al'therin was leaning against a wall. Its stones were black and crumbling. About 200 yards ahead, opposite of the setting sun the tower stood. Spindly legged creatures seemed to guard the tower. Much closer to the, the brothers were arguing in that language that Golden struggled to understand. She had a much easier time reading the mens body language. Goldens stomach rumbled.

She wondered if the things near the tower could serve as her next meal. As the darkness grew however she realized they were actually more like the shiny metal that she had seen Al'therin holding. They would be hard and not at all suitable to eat. Golden huffed, and sniffed the air for a more likely prey.

She jumped up onto the crumbling wall. The black stones radiated with more heat than the sand around them. It irritated her paws and she was quick to jumpback down but a new smell had caught her attention. She swivelled her ears from side to side, growling low in her throat when she heard rocks tumble down from a crevis in part of the wall. She went to stand under Zarah's perch, hoping it was something to eat hiding there.

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Zarah had been perched up in an opening in the old black ruined wall of the city. She was curious to know what was going on between the sick man and those other two dark skinned men. She was more concerened for the sick man, with her being a healer and all. She had noticed the golden cat thing as well. It had strolled over to where she was hiding and Zarah, being an animal lover with what little animals were left on Homdale, couldn't resist to say hello.

"Hello there, friend!" Zarah said to the golden furred wolf cat. "Do not worry furry creature, I am a friend! Are you with the two dark skinned fellows fighting over there? Or are you with the sick man?" Zarah asked the wolf cat, thing.

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Roman was feeling a sense of fear that was growing as he approached the tower and the creatures. He heard his brother, louder now, it was strange. He felt his legs give under him, and in that moment the draw seemed to retract back into the tower. He realized that it was his brother that had tackled him and that he had been walking to what very well may have been his death.

"You see those ruins over there. we'll rest over there for the night and tackle the spire when we all have our strength, you said you saw something.... do you really think you can take whatever it was you saw in your condition?" said Vas as the fog of the spire lifted from Roman's mind.

"No...I don't know..." he shook his head ,"Let's go back and set up camp. It'll be cold soon and I don't want to freeze to death." he finished as he brushed himself off and stood to his feet.

He couldn't bring himself to be annoyed by his brother for tackling him, this universe was playing tricks on him and he had enough trouble keeping his thoughts straight. Roman took the water his brother had handed to him and drank it. It felt like he was downing the essence of life itself. That small bit of water had done wonders for him, and with his spirit now a bit stronger, he was focused enough to make use of his skills.

Once he made it back to the group, he put his powers to work. Sticking his hands in the sand he drastically lowered it's density, sinking the group an inch into it before drastically increasing the mass making a holding ground. Next he created a strong gravitational field above their heads, shifting the low density sand into a dome above their heads.

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Golden stood on the sand beneath the woman, disappointed that she had not found food. Merely another being that looked much like the others and spouted more nonsensical noise at her. Although Golden thought she was beginning to understand what the speech. Or perhaps she was just growing more adept at reading their body language.

In response to what the woman said Golden projected the image of her home world into her mind. Accompanied by her pack which consisted of five others like herself. Meanwhile the brothers had returned to where Al'therin rested. One of them was making a shelter of sand. The strange ability to change the very substance of something still scared Golden but it did seem more useful that harmful.

She was getting the impression that everyone intended to settle down for the night--which made no sense to Golden. Night time seemed like the best time to travel. She sent an image of everyone sleeping during the day into Romans mind. Then an image of everyone walking at night. After looking at Al'therin again though it did seem like everyone needed a rest for this night at least.

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Zarah felt like she was hit in the head by something. She had a...vision? This was not normal for her. Her eyes were closed, she could see lots of wolf cats in a heavily wooded area. A group of five, one of them running off. The wolf cat that was running away looked identical to this furred one.

All of a sudden, Zarah had a strange feeling in her stomach. An up feeling...? She couldn't explain it. Her heart started to race, faster and faster as well. She opened her eyes and yes, she was falling. Backwards, actually. She could see the stars and the "Citadel". She crashed into the sand below. She had knocked the wind out of herself, but managed to get back on her feet. "What was that i saw in my head?" Zarah thought to herself. When she managed that, she noticed the three men were staring straight at her and it looked like they had questions...

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Vas waited as his brother formed a dome of sand then he placed his hand on the loose sand structure the group would use for shelter and solidified all the sand that formed it together so his brother could release his gravitational hold on it without it coming down on top of them. next he walked over to where the wolf cat creature was.

"What have you found there .... um boy...girl" Vas was confused on the gender and didn't want to look for conformation but now stood beside the creature with his hand petting its golden coat and hovered over its find. He took a moment as the realization of finding another human being sunk in.

"Who are you" Vas said with a harsh russian accent as he extended his hand down to the woman laying in the sand.
"Are you lost like the rest of us?"

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Zarah

"Who are you" the man said to Zarah in a strange accent. She could understand him though. "Lost?" Zarah ask questioningly. "W-why would i be lost. And how are you lost. Have you any idea of where you are standing? What city lays beyond this ruined wall?" Zarah asked the dark skinned man.

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"Lost?" the women asked "W-why would I be lost. And how are you lost. Have you any idea of where you are standing? What city lays beyond this ruined wall?"

Vas stood dumbfounded "Y-your actually from this desolate planet?" he asked after some hesitation still petting the wolf cat creature

"Im sorry for my rudeness My name is Vas, come to our camp we all have many questions, and as of right now your the only person we've met who can answer them." Vas bowed his head in apology and started to lead the way back to the group camp.

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She accepted the offer and followed this man named, Vas, to his camp. She was prepared if he would try anything on her. She had a knife, hidden well...

It only took but a minute for them to reach the camp. Vas, the cat dog, the other dark skin and the man that looked sick, but seemed to be doing a little better, were all there. The sick one stared at her with his mouth ajar. She gave him a quick glance back, nothing special. No smiles or smirks. She awaited introduction.

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The moonlit night sky illuminated the desert camp site, and the cold was starting to sink in.

"Well look what the wolf cat found...our new guide" Vas said looking back at the woman with a smirk "She's here to tell us all where or more exactly when we are, or if you'd all like we could just feed her to Goldie-locks here." Vas pointed towards the wolf cat with a small chuckle trying to lighten the mood.

He wasn't very good around people but given the current situation they appeared to be the only living creatures left on the planet so he figured why not try to be social.

"I-Im just joking by the way" he looked back at the woman.

Picking up to handfuls of sand Vas first combined the molecules to form two solid sandstone spheres. "Now lets think we need fire or were all gonna freeze over night....what burns... magnesium no thats too blinding.. hmm coal!" Vas dropped his two spheres to the ground and pulled his legal pad out of his satchel "c-c-c ah there we go calcium, carbon, copper... wait coal is mostly carbon" using his finger as a guide Vas skimmed through his notes on carbon until he got to his bullet point on coal "Hmm mostly carbon with a mix of sulfur, nitrogen, hydrogen and oxygen, hmm why not put a little magnesium in there too just to make it pretty" Vas laughed in his head as he placed his legal pad back in his bag and picked up his two sandstone spheres.

"Ok focus Vas Coal, sulfur, nitrogen, oxygen and magnesium." This was the first time Vas had tried to turn a simple molecule like sand into several different elements at the same time while still holding molecular integrity. His hands began to tremble as he seemed to meditated while holding the spheres. Vas opened his eyes as tears began to roll out of them due to the massive head ache he was now experiencing.

To his success Vas was now holding two ebony rocks with traces of silver magnesium veins. 'Time for my last trick of the night" He said out loud. Focusing the last of his strength Vas vibrated the atoms in the two stones until they burst into bright orange and yellow flames. Wasting no time Vas threw the stones into the sand and sat down next to the them to enjoy the warmth, before finally falling unconscious from exhaustion and hunger.

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A spark of light ignited out of the corner of Roman's eye. Vas had successfully started a fire! The light flash across the camp grounds in a way that struck a deep chord with Roman.

He realized that until entering this dimension that he had always been the provider and protector for his brother. Now he had no set of skills to do so. He had never been camping or in the wild. In fact, he felt as if the roles had now shifted, and his position as the later guardian for his sibling had been shattered by the harsh reality of his survival limits.

He had never felt as helpless as he did now.

While in his momentary mental zone he had realized that his brother had passed out beside the fire. A common problem that they both experienced when normal use of their powers turned to abuse. In fact the momentary gravitational field Roman had set to build the camp had drawn his ability to full concentrate away and he was now barely able to stay awake.

He tried mental exercises to help himself focus, starting with his common analysis of his surroundings.
Sand is transported by wind and water and deposited in the form of beaches, dunes, sand spits, sand bars and related features. In environments such as gravel-bed rivers and glacial moraines it often occurs as one of the many grain sizes that are represented. Sand-bed rivers have sandy beds largely because there is no larger source material that they can transport. Dunes, a distinctive geographical feature of desert environments, are on the other hand sandy because larger material is generally immobile in wind. Sand is a component of soil which is a qualitative classification tool used in both the field and laboratory to determine classes for agricultural soils based on their physical texture. The classes are distinguished in the field by the 'textural feel' which can be further clarified by separating the relative proportions of sand, silt and clay using grading sieves: The Particle Size Distribution. The class is then used to determine crop suitability and to approximate the soils responses to environmental and management conditions such as drought or calcium, lime, requirements. In areas of high pore water pressure sand and salt water can form quicksand, which is a colloid hydrogel that behaves like a liquid. Quicksand produces a considerable barrier to escape for creatures caught within, who often die from exposure (not from submersion) as a result.....we may die.....

He ran through these thoughts repetitively until finally drifting into total blackness.

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The two dark skinned men had fallen asleep. Al'therin lay perched up against the ruined wall, the golden cat dog laying by his side. It was strange, having this animal of a sort with him made him feel safe. He liked the warmth of the animal pressed up to his side. Al continuously petted its head, slowly until it had fallen asleep. Still with no food in his belly, he felt sick. The strange powers that the two dark skinned brothers, Roman and Vas posses, came in handy though. The ability to conjure water from sand blew Al'therins mind. He tilted his head upward, towards the heavens and the constellations he had never seen before in his life. Then again... He still doesn't even remember his past like.

The fire was warm and the breeze was cool. The first night it felt as if he was sleeping in a winter storm. The small hut the brothers we're asleep in that Vas had made from sand felt like a relaxing home feeling. Though he did not know much about these new found friends, he felt safe with them all. After all, one would not stop to help the sick if their hearts were not pure. Al'therin again found himself petting the feline dog. Comforting...

The mysterious woman walked to the fire from around the corner. She was eyeing Al'therin with a smile on her face. He found that his jaw was hanging wide open, once again. He felt like a fool, but her beauty was so pure. "Hello there." she called out to Al. "What is your name? I was only able to get the one, who calls himself Vasi. The other dark skinned man is asleep." Al'therin took a deep breath and stood. His head was pounding with pain, but he did not feel as wobbly. He walked over to her, nervous of her beauty. For some reason he still clutched the beautiful curved sword with his name inscribed on it. She looked at him, he looked at her. He sat down, turned his head toward her and asked one question.

"Where are we."

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Zarah raised an eyebrow in question. She knew not of what this man was talking about. He and his group of friends looked like they were from here. Where else could they be from?

"What do you mean? Have you know idea where this is?" She asked the man. It would appear that the man did not want to reveal himself so easily as the other Dark Skinned man did.

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"Myself and these other two dark skinned men awoke not but two days ago in the middle this desert. There names are Vas and Roman. About this golden creature here," he points to the Wold Cat, "I haven't the slightest clue. But it seems lost as well. Most likely far from home and family like all of-" Al'therin stopped mid-way in conversation. (That's right.) Al thought to himself. (I have no memory of past, no family or friends to remember.) He looked at the blade he clutched in his hand. He needed to remember, or it would drive him to the edge of madness.
"I include the beast as part of our group. Us four have no idea where we are. But you look like you know the answer to that." I looked into the woman's eyes. Her light green eyes were beautiful and hypnotizing.

"My name is Al'therin. I have no memory of where i come from." He told her. Al then turned to Roman and Vas who were still sleeping. "But those two men are brother, meaning they are from the same place." He said. "I would think it wise to wait until morning so that you may explain to us all about where we are."

The woman nodded in agreement. "No problem." She said in a calm voice. Al turned back around slowly, trying to ignore the horrible ache in his head. He stumbled a little bit. He sat back down slowly, against the ruined wall. He stroked the wolf cats head until he was asleep.

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The Unknown by The Heliumite

You awaken on a strange desolate planet.

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The black tower that all characters can see on the horizon of the barren, dry sands of Homdale.

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Young mutant lost in time and space looking for somewhere he belongs.

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A morphing with a gentle spirit. Being the runt of the pack she always felt like something was missing in her life.

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A warrior on a lost path, far from home...Desperate for adventure, and a new life.

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A warrior on a lost path, far from home...Desperate for adventure, and a new life.

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You awaken on a strange desolate planet.

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The black tower that all characters can see on the horizon of the barren, dry sands of Homdale.

Ah'bur: The Dead City

Ah'bur: The Dead City by The Heliumite

The last known city on Homdale. Dead and lifeless like everything thing else on the planet, something evil roams about here.

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You awaken on a strange desolate planet.

Ah'bur: The Dead City

The last known city on Homdale. Dead and lifeless like everything thing else on the planet, something evil roams about here.

The Black Citadel

The black tower that all characters can see on the horizon of the barren, dry sands of Homdale.

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Re: On a dying planet.

Sorry everyone.
Regretably I think I will have to drop out of this rp. My new job is just taking up too much time.

Re: On a dying planet.

Its important to keep the RP rolling, I understand your character can't speak but even a description of what your character is doing is helpful to keep the RP healthy.

I also wondered why Golden sweated since neaither cats nor dogs sweat but I think it adds something unique to the character.

I would like it if Zarah filled everyone in on where we are in the morning, and its best for the creator of the RP to control night and day So I will wait for the morning post to wake my character.

Re: On a dying planet.

Sorry I haven't posted yet guys. Being unable communicate with humans I have not seen much need to post until we continue on to the tower.

Have you never seen a horse sweat? Golden sweats because she is not just an ordinary animal--her people were almost human thousands of years ago. And since everyone is exhausted from heat stroke it seems natural that she would also sweat. This world is also completely opposite of her home world.

Re: On a dying planet.

Ok, I apologize as well. I should know more than anyone that the success of an RP rides on the writer's detailing posts with their surroundings and communicative contexts. Disregarding some home troubles, I will take the deep breath of the RP poster and get on the f*&%ing ball. Currently I will say my character has a dissociative personality which lends itself to introversion even in the group context so if you lead my character in any manor please keep this in mind. I do work everyday from 1-10 (estsd) so my post will still be irregular, but I will do my best to post in the time when I am home rather than my normal routine of boats and hoes.
Also, why does Golden sweat? Creatures with fur don't normally sweat. I am confused.

Re: On a dying planet.

Androdeas is right. And i feel as if this is my fault. I am sorta new to this site as well. I do have the story written out my head though.

The first part will all take place in the "Unknown", where we will all learn the tower (Which we find out is called The Black Citadel.) From the point of where we are now, we run into Zarah.

-Everyone needs to read her character description. I am sorry i did not mention this before.

She will lead us to her city which lays beyond the ruined black wall in which we are at right now. I don't really want to write everything play by play, it would take the fun out of everything for you all, so play and write as you go.

We will meet her father once we arrive. Depending on how long our character carry conversation with each other out near the wall, it could take time. Like i said, i don't want to push things to fast. I want everyone to be comfortable with whats going on around them. So play as you go!

-Either I, or someone else in party can make her father as a character. This does need to be done soon. When you read Zarahs character description, you will learn that he is a sort of master healer and that he is an adviser for the man that lives on the top of the Black Citadel. This could be why we have been drawn to this tower. He could have a power in which nothing can be compared too.

We will learn little of the man in the tower. Not until the next RP i will write.

As for the giant metal spiders Roman wrote about. We could make them controlled by Alchemists that live in the city beyond the ruined wall. Or they can just me mechanical beings they made to help repair their city. Actually, Roman if you want to make them what ever you want, OTHER than enemies, please feel free.

I Will post more, But let's keep it sorta slow at this point? Sorry. We will run into enemies, but i just need to think of how this will play out to be fair with everyone.

Thank you for your time!

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Man I am a noob. Sorry for posting OOC in the IC before guys. Still getting used to the site.

So.... We have been jumping all over the map. Has anyone else noticed this? To make the rp as smooth as possible perhaps from now on we could create titles of our location. Or maybe someone would be willing to create a map and update it as our characters travel.

And next suggestion, so that the posts can grown longer instead of shorter, it would be nice if someone would take more control over the direction of the storyline. As The Heliumnite is the creator I think it should be you.

If anyone has an idea in mind they want to play out consider posting it here. That way all the characters can build up to that plan rather than one of us going for the idea but nobody else knows what exactly is going on.

For an example it would be great for everyone to have a detailed description of the spider creatures to refer to once the characters reach the creatures. This way everyone can know what the creatures look like to reduce confusion later.


Finally I want to mention that Golden will gradually learn the spoken language and then be able to telepathically respond through images and language rather than just images. This should increase communication between her and the rest of the group which is really lacking atm.

Re: On a dying planet.

I do apologize for not posting as quickly as I have been. Work has been a bitch. Youptour knows this...new work together. I have the next three days off! So lots of posts from me!! Soon to come.

Re: On a dying planet.

I just made a new character for the RP

Name is Zarah, she will be a big part of this story. She will be introduced once we get inside the area of the black tower.

Read her character description please!! Let me know how you like her. Let me know if you have any questions regarding her in general.

Anyone can make more characters for the story and play as them, so long as they can keep up with the roleplay. I'm cool with anything!

Re: On a dying planet.

Vas's words are 800 so to type in color follow the coding with this in mind (=[ , ]=)
(color=#800) ...words.... (/color)
Youptour's words are b00.
(color=#b00) ...words... (/color)

Tell us your code and try not to make it more the the first 3 numbers for everyones sake lol
Thanks Guys & Girl and I hope this RP comes out sexy

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A quick how to. Every character should have their own color for clarity. To do this you need to begin with, I will show you with brackets, the wrong kind so you can see the process
For blue (color=#00b)text(/color)
For green(color=#0b0)text(/color)
For red(color=#b00)text(/color)
You can find codes for more specific colors on line

Re: On a dying planet.

One more thing. Al'therin is in a rough patch at the moment, as you can see. I really want to make it to where he's unconscious for a time, until he can get better, or get to safety. I'm new to this sort of thing, so let me know if this isn't how this is supposed to play out. Even though i made the rules for the RP, i don't wanna break the site rules.

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Hello. I too wanted to say thank you for joining this RP. I have a great feeling it's going to turn into a great story. Not only do i want this to play out for a while, but i also want to open new "Places", that we will go to once the story of the "Unknown" is finished. I will talk more about new characters and story expansion later once we get close enough to the end of the Unknown. For now, i'm going to try and make our RP pretty!!! XD The intro page will be worked on, and the rules as well. I won't be changing any rules, unless you three want me too.

Please feel free to ask questions, or give ideas on what you want to happen next!!!! (Story wise, and anything else wise.)

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I just wanted to start by saying thanks to those who have decided to join this RP. Lets make use of this section for any Out Of Context comments, disscusions, complaints, and general b.s. to be passed around.

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