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Hunt of Freal

Hunt of Freal

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You and others run for your lives, hiding around the world from the guards of Freal, who are constantly trying to kill you.

918 readers have visited Hunt of Freal since sunny515241 created it.

Introduction

By the year 2000 scientist had began to experiment with genetic mutation at a large nuclear plant in Oregon, which they conducted all their experiments in that involved genetic mutations. One day hell broke out in the lab and it exploded, killing all the scientists and destroying all evidence of the mutations. When it exploded it infected the small town. Many died, although some had grown new limbs such as: wings, gills, animal-like ears, and tails. Only the lucky ones weren’t infected. Special teams now travel the world to bring them back to a new lab, which they named, “Freal”. The only way to survive is to hide. Once they find you they will never give up.

You and a small group of other mutated beings roam around the world in hiding in fear for your lives, trying to one day overthrow the guards of Freal and return to normal.

I would like to start out with one relationship at least.

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1. Not God-moding
2. Keep language to PG-13
3. Romance is highly encouraged, but NO cybering
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6. Did I say have fun?!
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10. Be descriptive- Example is: “She skipped into the room.” Could be, “She skipped happily into the room, holding her stuffed bear tight to her chest as she smiled a innocent smile.”

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12/30
Characterization: In-Progress Plot: Proficient Depth: In-Progress Style: Proficient Mechanics: Proficient Overall: In-Progress
Jag wrote:To be perfectly honest, this game needs a lot of work. The plot of the game appears very simple, but it risks oversimplifying the structure to the point that it will be difficult for players to find a natural point of entry into the game or establish the romantic character relationships the Rules state are encouraged within the framework of the game. The mechanics could use some work (such as correcting to the proper use of "your" and "you're" but is otherwise very competent.

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Violet Buery dashed out of her house, tears streaming down her cheeks. No, no, no, no, no..... this can't be happening! She thought to herself as she tripped over a crack int the sidewalk. "Oww!" She yelled as she fell into the street her hands now bleeding, but she ignored them and continued to run, wanting to find someone. "Hello?!" She called, tears still pouring down her cheeks. "Is anyone here?" She yelled soon after. After wondering around town for several more hours she sat down in the middle of the street, pulled her knees up and buried her face in them, then cried. She cried harder then she had ever done before, scared she was alone again.

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((Looks like it might be dead.))

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Qadir floated down from the roof above and landed before the girl. "Why cry beautiful. YOu are not alone follow me. I will show you something worth us."

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Violet Buery

Violet got up and looked at him, following him slowly. "W-Who are you?" She asked and played with her hands nervously, wiping off the dried up blood. "And h-how is there anything worth us?" She said referring to the tails and ears she had and the wings that he had.

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He smiled and laughed "My dear you see those are gifts and they accent your eyes perfectly." He smiled and reached out his hand "DO you trust me? If so e must go soon." He had heard those sounds before the sounds of sirens but not anything good that's for sure.

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Violet looked at him, still nervous, and took his hand. "I trust you." She said and smiled a bit. "I'm Violet."

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He smiled and pulled her close and lifted her cause she was very light to him. He jumped up onto the roof and begin jumping from rooftop to rooftop avoiding weak roofs. "Like the flower huh? My name is Qadir. Now why do you consider your gifts a curse?"

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Violet held onto him tight as he jumped roof to roof, a bit scared. "Yes like the flower. And I don't know, I just don't need another reason for people to shun me or try to hurt me." She said quietly and put her head against his chest. "Why do you consider them gifts?"

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He smiled and made sure she was close till the reached his small hut up in the trees on the outside of the city. "I can fly and soar. Why would that not be a gift. Do you not hear better then humans. So what do you think?" He opened his arms and spun around showing off his house.

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She looked at his house and smiled. "It's cute." She said, trying to change the subject, then looked at him again. "Thanks." She said and hugged him.

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He smiled and gave her a hug back. "No need to thank me. I couldn't idly sit by and watch tears fall from your beautiful face." He notion ed to a small room off to the side. "This is your room miss." He sat on a wooden couch with folded up blankets for cushions and sighed.

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"What's wrong?" She asked, hearing him sigh and sat next to him and looked at him.

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"nothing really just wish i had more to give you other then carved furniture . . . " He trailed off his eyes staring out the window into the open sky.

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"Well I think it's perfect." She said and kissed his cheek then blushed. "Okay, so I have a few questions. Where did these come from?" She points to her ears. "And what exactly are the plans to do about everything? Then last is, what were those sirens back in town?"

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He looked at her oddly. "what was that for? As for your ears probably an aftereffect of the radiation around this place. Sirens were the people trying to catch us and experiment on us."

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"Wait, what people? Experiment?" Just the thought of people experimenting on her scared her. She had always feared needles. She lays her head on his shoulder and looks up at him. "What do we do if they find us?"

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His smile went away and said in a ver serious voice "We run. As fast and as far as we can to get away from them."

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"Okay." She said quietly and moved her head from his shoulder, then looked at the ground. "So..." She said not knowing anything else to say.

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he smiled and laughed a bit. "Tomorrow i plan on going to get food for this place. Anything you want?"

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"Not that I can think of. Can I go with you?" Violet looked up again and smiled a sweet smile. As she did that her hands went to her pocket and she pulled out a small iPod, loaded with tons of her favorite songs.

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"FIne you can come under one condition. YOu have to promise to keep your ears hiden and you have to stay close to me."

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"It's a deal." She said and continued to smile. "So anything fun to do around here?"

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He laughs "Not really just drawing and watching the sky below. So what happened to put you on streets."

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Her smile disappears and she looks down. "I was visiting my mom and dad, I haven't lived here since I was little because I got sent to a half-house, but I was with my parents and then it all went black. I woke up and they were dead and my head hurt, so I went to the bathroom to get something for my head and I saw my ears and tail, then I ran..." She stopped after that, about to cry again. She pulled her legs up to her chest and buried her face in them.

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He tried to comfort her by rubbing her back "Its ok at least you remember your life before the shift. Ether my life wasn't that important or i have just simply lost my memory. SO my little flower no need to be upset it will fade with time."

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Thank you and I will get to work changing it rite away. I greatly appreciate your help if making the RP better.

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The concept seems interesting enough, I've always been somewhat interested in RPs like this, and I'd normally be interested in joining, but there is one major thing preventing me. Timeline. Namely consistency. As a highly OCD history buff an RPs location in time is very important to me. I use this to determine who my character will be, what their profession is, the way they act, and stuff like that. You stated in the introduction that the year is 1903. Historically this would be impossible for multiple reasons. One, nuclear power was only harnessed at the end of the 1940s and the beginning of the '50s. In fact the theories behind nuclear energy weren't even developed by this point. You've also indicated in your character sheet that you character has several technological devices like a laptop computer and a cell phone. Again, this would be impossible in the early 1900s, the technology just didn't exist back then.

I'm not telling you this to be rude, and I hope I do not come across that way. I am sincerely interested in joining, but I just don't feel that I can with these inconsistencies. I'm also telling you this in hopes to help you become a better writer, RPer, and GM. Consistency is very important in making a believable world. Ultimately, no one else besides myself may care, and it's up to you if you want to edit things. After it is your RP. If you do change it I will join. I also wish you the best of luck and hope your RP is successful.

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