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On Our Own

On Our Own

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we are like all other except are powers bind us as freakes.

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Introduction

we have tryed to live like others, act normal, yet still be our selfs. some are well at hideing who they are, others not so much. the powers we have range in kind, none too small and none too big. some of us addapted to a lifestyle that fit our needs, others hid in fear, and yet a few where strong and didnt care what others thought of them. we all have our hardships, our horrers, and our sorrows, but together we will be strong!

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[Damn that's long but funny.]
John looked at her most of the alcohol already gone from his lycan body he was nearly sober. "No that's not it it's not the beer." John said annoyed he looked down and sighed "I just guess you wanted to take a walk not run into me." John muttered before turning to his house he walked the near half mile back.

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blossom followed him, her hand still clamped to her wrist "actually i was hoping something horrible would happen to me" she muttered walking a little faster too keep up. "i still like you a lot but its a lot of stress and i cant handle it.... i've lost a lot of people and nothings even seems legitly real i mean i fucking turn into a fox for fucks sake how its that even normal."

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John could see the door he stopped and turned around. "It's not normal so if you want normal why are you here normal people lie and steal and cheat and can be killed But I am not normal at all." John took her hands and looked at her. "If I was normal then I wouldn't be here at all so please don't you dare ever try to say that I will die while your still breathing." John let her hands go and kissed her before walking back into his cabin leaving the door open.

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Lucian sighed. "Who Eliza was.... was...."

"The very girl I loved... right in my first lifetime..." Asher muttered, holding back the tears welling up in his eyes. "Why... Why is she here... God, why must you curse me so?!" Asher suddenly shouted, nearly punching the wall in front of him. If it weren't for his years of self-discipline, Asher could've been sent to Home Depot. "Just... Why is she now born to kill me... out of absolutely nowhere...?" Asher muttered.

Lucian finished explaining who Eliza was, Asher's very first love. They grew together in Asher's home village- which was turned into a shopping mall right in Europe- and they fell in love after being turned into Immortali. "The subject... of Eliza... it's very sensitive with Asher."

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John got into his bedroom in his house and had put on a suit as three people walked up and looked at Blossom. "Hey Tom isn't that..." Tom interrupted with a stern look on his face. "Nothing is set in stone so we can't talk about what's to come Tania." Tania was wearing a red dress with a annoyed look on her face. "She has the right to know Tom!" Tom however was shaking his head. "I didn't tell you and Jude did I?" Tom said as he yawned his wings fanned out as did the others Tania was grumbling then yelled. "Yo John don't keep the big man waiting any longer JC is getting bored!"

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[sorry school >-<]

blossom was about to head after him when the three people showed up. she growled at the guy "i have the right to know anything someone knows about me, not like ill get anymore damaged anyway, so what dose she know? tell me" she pushed up her sleeves slightly forgetting about her bleeding wrists.

cherry knocked on the door to the room asher was in and smiled weakly. "i'm sorry... i don't know...... im really sorry" she hung her head slightly and chewed on her lip. she still wasn't good at dealing with people when they were hurt like this.

Brittany listened to him explain the whole time chewing on her lip. "i cant believe i'm saying this, but i feel really bad for the guy"

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"Sorry but that's John's call." Tom said to blossom looking at her wrists. "I'm not ruining his last chance, It's just not in my job description." John walked out in a suit and tie and looked at all four of them. "Didn't telling me risk it just as much?" Tom looked at john and sighed he put his hand on his head. "Fine but if this gets ruined it's not on me got it." Tom said looking extremely stressed as he turned to Tania and nodded. "Tom there is this generation's cupid and therefore didn't want to put your future at risk but now it is kinda up to you." Tania said looking extremely smug look on her face. "You and John were supposed to keep dating for a good three years before marrying and having two wonderful children with both your traits meaning your powers but not the weaknesses a genetic perfection but now that is all at stake." Tom said looking extremely drained. "Hey that's not what you told me!" John said looking insulted at Tom. "That's because you were killing my buzz and I was tired." John sighed and started walking towards the lake with the three angels following cheerfully.

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blossom just stared after him her mouth hanging open "You expect me Believe that? i hardly believe I'm not in a coma at this moment" she looked at her feet and noticed her wrists and grumbled "I'm sorry ...." she muttered flopping onto his couch.

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"Nope not anymore anyways" Tom said looking relieved he turned and basically speed walked away with Jude and Tania following but John turned around. "You coming? It's not every day you get to party with angels." John walked to the couch and looked at Blossom. "They damn near gave me a heart attack the first time I saw them." John sat next to her.

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"angels? pffh" she blew a strand of hair out of her face and rolled her eyes. "there just a species like humans there's nothing special about them..." she pulled at her sleeves and blushed "do you maybe have a towel i could use....i um don't want to get any blood on your couch..." she held up her blood stained sleeve. "and before you freak out its nothing really it should stop bleeding soon i think"

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"Me freak out over some cuts, your talking to a person who's died more than once cuts aint got shit on me okay?" John said jokingly as he took a look at Blossom's wrists. "Heranza Necoma." John said putting his hand on the cuts his magic causing them to close and cleaned up the blood. John kissed Blossom on her lips. "And take it from someone who's been to the afterlife they're angels alright and what Tom told you is one of many possibilities now up for grabs." John looked at her eyes. "And the possibility Tom offered I like it, Alot." John said looking at her and caressed her cheek. "Living the rest of my life with a kind woman like you is a dream come true for me, now I have a performance to do for JC so I'd like permission to magically get you dressed without having to undress you." John said looking at her grinning slightly he kissed her again. "Sorry I couldn't help myself." John said kissing her cheek before getting up to put some slight space between them so he couldn't keep kissing her.

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she stared at her wrist turning them slightly "i'm not a nice person...and i don't believe in heaven no matter what you say, i do believe that there is an afterlife, but i believe its more like in Greek mythology..." she picked at the sleeves of her sweater and chewed her bottom lip "its ok... i didn't really mind. what do you mean change my clothing, i kinda like doing that the normal way..." she was also a little worried she wouldn't like the outfit he would pick.

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"Well as far as religion goes I could really care less but as far as the clothes go I will demonstrate a personal favorite called the endless closet." John said with a grin he turned his coffee table over and snapped his fingers causing a knob to appear. John opened the door and it led to a rotating belt with all sorts of outfits whirring by. "Don't try to grab a outfit just think of what you like and it will come to you so I'll meet you at the lake you have a seat in the front Row." John said he grabbed a outfit out of the door and laid it on the couch next to Blossom. It was a black dress with lace around the edges of the sleeves that came down to where Blossom's knees would be and on the hanger was a necklace with a Ruby in it and a note. "Hmmm that was my mother's favorite necklace but she had lost it two years ago right before she died." John shrugged and kissed Blossom again before walking to the lake.

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she stared at all the clothing her mouth dropping open "when the hell did he have time to get all this....." she looked at the dress, it wasn't entirely something she would wear especially because it was lace, she really didn't like lace so she looked around a little, she had no idea what she wanted to wear. she knew she wanted some sort of cocktail dress but that didn't narrow it down that much. she pushed a piece of hair behind her ear and frowned. maybe a purple dress, but would that go good with her hair.... she definitely didn't want pink, maybe red.. but wasn't that other girl already wearing a red dress. she decided on a shadowy black color pondering what it should look like she wanted it to be backless and have a slit in the side [[and because i suck at explaining dresses seeing as i don't wear them here's a link to what it looks like https://www.ozziedresses.com.au/uploaded_files/product/385-bigmq1dWW.jpg ]] she found one she really liked and quickly disappeared into the racks to try it on. when she came back out she twirled around smiling, it fit her like a glove. she put down the ball of her clothing on the couch and stood back in-front of the closet. "so are there shoes in here or am i going barefoot? because i'm not wearing high-tops and a dress." as if to answer her the closet changed to show her racks of shoes and she grinned happily "oh this i could get used to" she pawed threw the shoes before coming up with a pair of black strappy heals http://diantafashion.files.wordpress.com/2012/02/black-strappy-extreme-platform-highheels.jpg she slipped them on grinning at how they fit so well and took a few test steps in them. "perfect" she smiled letting her hair down so it fell softly onto her shoulders. "now im ready" she said walking out the door and down to the lake.

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John was on the stage when Blossom walked up. "This next one's for a special little fox I know." John said with a grin looking at Blossom while they others on stage began to strum. John began singing and it sounded like this. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=to2cze58R5E When they were done John stopped and looked at Blossom "Now back to the fun." John came off the stage and a few female members of the party tried to talk to him but he just gently forced his way through.

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Lucian sighed. "It isn't your fault... Asher had this thing going for about a couple of centuries. He's been seeing familiar faces, like Damion Howard all the way in Europe." Lucian smirked at Cherry. "Yeah. Asher's used to his mentor, but not his ex. Besides, Eliza was his first love, his first and only love during his time as a mortal. He felt that this feelings were a bit... extra special, no offense to you, Cherry."

Meanwhile... Asher slept soundly in a bed, his body facing the wall and the air around him cold. A sure sign of not wanting to be disturbed.

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Blossom blushed slightly and listened to him sing, it wasn’t her kind of music but his voice was still nice. When he started to head off the stage she started to make her way to him but ended up tripping and falling. She got up and brushed herself off blushing.

Cherry frowned noticing Asher was asleep and walked back to the other room. "Whatever Lucian....." she muttered dropping onto the couch and hugging her legs to her chest. She felt guilty for what had just happened and was not in the mood to do anything anymore.
[I is out of ideas sorry >-<]

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John looked at Blossom with a slight grin and he kept shifting his weight. "Man you look hot." John said adjusting his suit. "A little too hot I might have to change." John said looking at her while blushing like crazy. he was fidgeting then finally wrapped his arms around Blossom's waist and kissed her with a passion.

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blossom blushed and hugged him "john were in the middle of a crowed..." she stepped back from him slightly still blushing. "you have a nice voice, do you always play this kind of music though?"

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I know that's why for once I hate this party and I get to play what I want." John said hugging her he picked her up and carried her out to the waterfall. "I'm sorry I just can't handle being around you in that dress." John said kissing blossom's neck repeatedly.

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"...." Lucian looked at Cherry. He wasn't smiling anymore, surprising since he usually is. "Don't blame yourself, Cherry. After all, this has happened many times." Lucian scratched the back of his head. "This has not happened the first time, after all."

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[sorry it took me so long guys, feel free to shun, holo im still thinking up how to make the twist work in my reply to yours so sorry for making you wait]

cherry nodded her head "alright i'll try not to..." she smiled weakly and went to pick up a glass of water off the table stopping short, everything started to shake. Brittany whimpered slightly "is this an earthquake?.... i hear they only get worse.." she grabbed Lucian arm and moved closer to him shaking slightly with fear. cherry yelped and jumped out of her seat barely missing the bookshelf falling onto her "seriously i don't want to have to deal with damage like this" she grumbled under her breath. she turned and dashed down the hall toward asher's room and throws open the door "wake up before something crushes you!"

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"Wake up before something crushes you!" A voice shouted at Asher after the loud sound of the door to his bedroom being slammed open woke Asher up from his sleep.

"....." Asher felt the earthquake, though he simply sighed and sat up, slowly. He grabbed his cane and stood up. "Cherry.... Do you think I would die from something crushing me?" Asher asked, staring at Cherry with a face that shows that he was half-asleep.

Lucian sighed, hugging Brittany close to him for the sake of comforting her. "You know.... in our situation there really isn't any reason to be scared...."

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(Hmm... in all honesty, I have no idea where Katherine and Daine are. XP)

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"So Johnny boy what now actually I've got a Rose to tend to."

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Dark Asher

"Hello. My name is Asher. You're Dead." -kills his next victim-

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"How can you kill me... When I am already dead?"

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some things fade, but this time i will not

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"Okay, What do you need done?"

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"How can you kill me... When I am already dead?"

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A half-human half-angel who wanders the world looking for peace... And a place without trees.

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Dark Asher

"Hello. My name is Asher. You're Dead." -kills his next victim-

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some things fade, but this time i will not

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Re: on are own

Hey uh, I was wondering if you guys would be okay with me joining this role-play? It doesn't look to bad and could potentially be a lot of fun. If it were okay for me to join I was thinking my character would play the role of a young antagonist or mafia boss? He'd probably have some reason (that either you or I could make up) to come after your group and so to defend yourselves the members of your group would have reason to use their powers more frequently. Of course there wouldn't be constant battling/fighting (usually only when you let me know its A-Okay to attack I'll attack.) so theres still time for relationships and drama between your characters. I hope you get the jist of what I mean. Please give it some thought.

Thanks.

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There's so many jokes I want to make about this, but I know it'd be extremely rude, so, I'm going to withhold them.

And hey, nobody starts out perfect. I actually have no problem with literacy rates on this website. Occasionally, I enjoy going on more literate roleplays, because I happen to make some of my best characters on those, but I still enjoy entering roleplays that aren't as well constructed or literate, and everybody makes a sentence to a paragraph in posting length. Though, I think I partially do that just to impress the newbies with my longer posts and better grammar. But hey, you'll get better. Though, some advise. If people are complaining about your grammar and giving destructive criticism, don't respond back in a complaining matter, it only makes matters worse. As for those who give constructive criticism and are at least showing some politeness, like a lot of these people, don't respond in a hot matter, they're only trying to help.

Re: on are own

Hey, folks! Friendly neighborhood Mod, hither, to inform you guys on what should be done when you see a roleplay that needs improvement!

First, constructive criticism is allowed! That, however, means that it has to be constructive. I'll give you an example of what is and isn't constructive criticism.

Constructive Criticism: "I think you could improve on your spelling and grammar. If you can't use grammar and spelling properly, it might be a good idea to use a spellchecker online, or a beta (someone who reads and corrects your passage before it's posted) to read over your work! I think that doing this will attract more people to your roleplay."

Destructive Criticism: "Your spelling sucks."

See the difference? We're all at different levels and skills on RPG, and that is absolutely, positively okay. No one pops out of the womb writing like Stephen King.

Onto my next point...

All of the people involved in this encounter could benefit by taking a gander at the rules, which you can find here. (Just click on the word 'here'.) The main rule I want to outline is this:

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Re: on are own

ok FIRST its left open for ANY powers. people CAN make there own, i dont make roles to be filled i let people pick there own and as for my spelling i have a bit of dislexia so u can stop hateing and move along got it. i did not make this for people to harase me i made this for me and my friends

Re: on are own

The spelling in this could use some work, and I don't think the introduction has enough details in it. I would refer to some of the other roleplays on here for examples of a roleplay with a strong base.

Re: on are own

I am sorry to say this but I have a strong feeling that there will not be a very large amount of people wanting to participate in your roleplay due to your lack of capitalization, and mass amount of grammatical and spelling errors.
I mean, in your title it is called on 'are' own. That would be an our...

on are own

ok so im sick of you ppl hateing on me because i cant spell if you dont like it then leave! and btw this is here for ppl who are actualy intrestid in the rp and want to ask things or learn more. not to harass me.