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John looked at her most of the alcohol already gone from his lycan body he was nearly sober. "No that's not it it's not the beer." John said annoyed he looked down and sighed "I just guess you wanted to take a walk not run into me." John muttered before turning to his house he walked the near half mile back.
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"The very girl I loved... right in my first lifetime..." Asher muttered, holding back the tears welling up in his eyes. "Why... Why is she here... God, why must you curse me so?!" Asher suddenly shouted, nearly punching the wall in front of him. If it weren't for his years of self-discipline, Asher could've been sent to Home Depot. "Just... Why is she now born to kill me... out of absolutely nowhere...?" Asher muttered.
Lucian finished explaining who Eliza was, Asher's very first love. They grew together in Asher's home village- which was turned into a shopping mall right in Europe- and they fell in love after being turned into Immortali. "The subject... of Eliza... it's very sensitive with Asher."
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blossom was about to head after him when the three people showed up. she growled at the guy "i have the right to know anything someone knows about me, not like ill get anymore damaged anyway, so what dose she know? tell me" she pushed up her sleeves slightly forgetting about her bleeding wrists.
cherry knocked on the door to the room asher was in and smiled weakly. "i'm sorry... i don't know...... im really sorry" she hung her head slightly and chewed on her lip. she still wasn't good at dealing with people when they were hurt like this.
Brittany listened to him explain the whole time chewing on her lip. "i cant believe i'm saying this, but i feel really bad for the guy"
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Meanwhile... Asher slept soundly in a bed, his body facing the wall and the air around him cold. A sure sign of not wanting to be disturbed.
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Cherry frowned noticing Asher was asleep and walked back to the other room. "Whatever Lucian....." she muttered dropping onto the couch and hugging her legs to her chest. She felt guilty for what had just happened and was not in the mood to do anything anymore.
[I is out of ideas sorry >-<]
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cherry nodded her head "alright i'll try not to..." she smiled weakly and went to pick up a glass of water off the table stopping short, everything started to shake. Brittany whimpered slightly "is this an earthquake?.... i hear they only get worse.." she grabbed Lucian arm and moved closer to him shaking slightly with fear. cherry yelped and jumped out of her seat barely missing the bookshelf falling onto her "seriously i don't want to have to deal with damage like this" she grumbled under her breath. she turned and dashed down the hall toward asher's room and throws open the door "wake up before something crushes you!"
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"....." Asher felt the earthquake, though he simply sighed and sat up, slowly. He grabbed his cane and stood up. "Cherry.... Do you think I would die from something crushing me?" Asher asked, staring at Cherry with a face that shows that he was half-asleep.
Lucian sighed, hugging Brittany close to him for the sake of comforting her. "You know.... in our situation there really isn't any reason to be scared...."
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Anthony Garcia
"So Johnny boy what now actually I've got a Rose to tend to."
Mystic
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evil cherry
brittany
Dark Asher
"Hello. My name is Asher. You're Dead." -kills his next victim-
Benjamin White
"Okay, What do you need done?"
Zephan Wright.
[DECEASED] "I-I-I'm keeping a journal of John so he doesn't forget everything."
Daine Leonardo
A half-human half-angel who wanders the world looking for peace... And a place without trees.
Asher Evans Immortalis
"How can you kill me... When I am already dead?"
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Cherry
some things fade, but this time i will not
Benjamin White
"Okay, What do you need done?"
Mystic
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Zephan Wright.
[DECEASED] "I-I-I'm keeping a journal of John so he doesn't forget everything."
Asher Evans Immortalis
"How can you kill me... When I am already dead?"
evil cherry
brittany
Daine Leonardo
A half-human half-angel who wanders the world looking for peace... And a place without trees.
Dark Asher
"Hello. My name is Asher. You're Dead." -kills his next victim-
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Benjamin White
"Okay, What do you need done?"
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Cherry
some things fade, but this time i will not
evil cherry
brittany
Anthony Garcia
"So Johnny boy what now actually I've got a Rose to tend to."
Dark Asher
"Hello. My name is Asher. You're Dead." -kills his next victim-
Zephan Wright.
[DECEASED] "I-I-I'm keeping a journal of John so he doesn't forget everything."
John
"these aren't going to be easy to hide."
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by silver0lilly on Thu Dec 13, 2012 2:52 pm
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Thanks.
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And hey, nobody starts out perfect. I actually have no problem with literacy rates on this website. Occasionally, I enjoy going on more literate roleplays, because I happen to make some of my best characters on those, but I still enjoy entering roleplays that aren't as well constructed or literate, and everybody makes a sentence to a paragraph in posting length.
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First, constructive criticism is allowed! That, however, means that it has to be constructive. I'll give you an example of what is and isn't constructive criticism.
Constructive Criticism: "I think you could improve on your spelling and grammar. If you can't use grammar and spelling properly, it might be a good idea to use a spellchecker online, or a beta (someone who reads and corrects your passage before it's posted) to read over your work! I think that doing this will attract more people to your roleplay."
Destructive Criticism: "Your spelling sucks."
See the difference? We're all at different levels and skills on RPG, and that is absolutely, positively okay. No one pops out of the womb writing like Stephen King.
Onto my next point...
All of the people involved in this encounter could benefit by taking a gander at the rules, which you can find here. (Just click on the word 'here'.) The main rule I want to outline is this:
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I mean, in your title it is called on 'are' own. That would be an our...