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Game over

Game over

a part of “Game over”, a fictional universe by Ashtonwolf.

A video game turns real life. Game over

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[OOC] Game over

Tips: 0.00 INK Postby Ashtonwolf on Sat Aug 20, 2011 10:49 pm

This is the auto-generated OOC topic for the roleplay "Game over"

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Re: [OOC] Game over

Tips: 0.00 INK Postby Vrihet on Sun Aug 21, 2011 3:52 am

Okay... I'm going to help you out here a bit. First of all, proper grammar and spelling! If you want people to take you seriously, don't write, "the game is called zee townu ..." because that's just unattractive. Nobody asks you to be perfect, but people want you to give some effort. Always write some rules and ask people to apply. It just makes people think this is a serious roleplay, and stuff is actually going to get done instead of mess around.

Information! This roleplay is seriously lacking background. What's the game zee town like? Is it a first person shooter? What did the guy say in the message? Does the weapon you pick in game magically appear in your house?

Also, about your character Ian. Why does he have a gun when he's only 17? What kind of gun is it? This character sheet would be rejected by 99% of all the roleplays. You simply haven't given enough information, and you don't talk in complete sentences.

Just some friendly tips :)

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