Darkground's boarding school.

[thepsycoman]

This is the auto-generated OOC topic for the roleplay "Darkground's boarding school."

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[TheRavenandThePawn]

I will give it a try,I hope my character is acceptable.

[catherinebutcher]

Hi, nice story line i'm going to make a character :D

Just one question - Do all the students get individual rooms ?

[thepsycoman]

Thanks. I think I named it wrong because It seems I have have only had 1% interest from people.

They can have if they want to. Females and males may not be room-mates but if you discuss it with another then they may be "roomys" with your character.

Accepted Raven. Umm just wondering though how is your character physically attractive. Like I'm a guy so I cant really say but the first line of the description makes him seem, well not very attractive.

[catherinebutcher]

By types of power, is controlling the weather and mind reading okay? She has pretty much no controll over either...

[TheRavenandThePawn]

Well its more that he is attractive underneath those scars. More along the lines of was I guess.

[thepsycoman]

Attractive personality?

Weather yes. But with mind reading there has to be a limit like only immediate thoughts or something, or outward thoughts.

[TheRavenandThePawn]

No... more along the lines of a pretty boy who got abused like mad.

[fumeii]

Is my character eligible for acceptance? :)

[catherinebutcher]

Yes she can't controll it, or focus on one. It is just noise, that ok?

[thepsycoman]

Hmmm I'm not sure about your character Catherine. I cant see anything directly wrong with it so I will accept it. Just be careful with it for as much as you say unstable it is not unstable to the writer, it will always obey you because it is simply words.

Fumeii I actually really liked your character. You have been accepted.

[fumeii]

Aww, thank you! Apparently, I had 'muse' for her :3

Thank you for the acceptance <3!

[thepsycoman]

Okay well I am off to school for today. We will start this later. Maybe even today. If I get time to right it, awesome.

[catherinebutcher]

i'll try my best , just tell me if there is anything I can do to make it better. I want to learn ! :D Thanks for accepting x

[fumeii]

She can change appearance subtly such as hair and eye colour, again often reflecting her mood.

Well, I'll have to be honest and admit. Changing your appearance is scientifically impossible unless she's a shapeshifter or Tonks from Harry Potter, and it's an unrealistic feature usually insinuating, and leading to, the character is a Mary-Sue. There are two types; the ones who are perfect in every way, and the ones with a tragic past pertaining to the lines of 'orphanage', 'abuse', or 'rape'. They're stunning, so much without a blemish, can control the elements, hair/eye color are able to change, and are super-duper-uber powerful. Your character doesn't show all of these things, but does include some that don't exactly follow her species...

Things like the ability to change her hair/eye color just doesn't fit the description of her race. When you have too many special traits to a character, it creates an overpowering feeling and gives it a very messy, unorganized look...like it doesn't follow one, in-depth idea, but a cluster of random ones sewn together.

Please do not take this into an offensive fashion. I'm only trying to help out of my own experience, honestly! I really am, so if you want, keep this is mind as words of advice.

[thepsycoman]

Thanks for helping fumii.

Look at my character sheet and you will see it is not that good. My writing is better now then it has ever been and that is thanks to this site. So Catherine if you do the right thing by me and try and learn and don't leave, then I will do the right thing by you and try and help you anyway I can.

[thepsycoman]

Sorry for the wait. The first post is up so you may all now post.

[thepsycoman]

DAM!!! Dead already......

[TheRavenandThePawn]

Seems so...

[thepsycoman]

Thats why I don't make my own... I think it is just roleplays of late though.