Carnival Missing II

[leopardspotz17]

Coldless? Is that a word? And I think coldless would mean to not be cold. Perhaps "heartless and cold" would be better. Just a suggestion!

[RPGLoVeR213]

My last post might seem a little god-moddy, but I'm hoping Andrew or Emily will grab Elijah and hold him at gunpoint to show Carnivalle who's really in charge. (: Plwz LightningStrikes???

[LightingStrikes]

Am thinking about giving Elijah the gun and telling him to shoot his cousin. he he depends on the next post. Emily's discovered she loves kids.

[Alan23]

RPGLoVer213 There was I just being amazed how well you handled that without godmodding or metgaming, and you deflate my bubble by saying you HAD! Very modest of you after some clever writing.

Lightning Strikes thanks for the heads up re cordless! I think the sudden twist - Emily being a softy - is working. Hopefully though Carnivalle will step in and keep her as a nasty!

[leopardspotz17]

Woah... this can't be ending so quickly! Noooo.... :'(

I never got Nikki to have a mental breakdown! Then she could turn into a murderer or something! THAT WOULD BE SO MUCH FUN. :D

Yeah, I'm sick. X/ But maybe... Could Carnivalle escape custody and somehow come back for revenge?

Like, after all this clears up (kids get back home, Andy goes to jail and whatnot), then we can do a time skip. Something like "2 months later" this is what the characters are up to. The group would stay together due to the experience they all went through. They'd hang out and stuff. But, they have no idea that Carnivalle is still hanging around, waiting for the right moment. Then another kidnapping. Except this time, there's no ransom posed. No, Carnivalle isn't after money... she wants her own revenge. She wants her baby cousin back... she wants to torture Nikki to the point of insanity... And she wants to hurt the other kids just for the hell of it. I can make another character: someone to be an old friend of Carnivalle's. I'll make him a guy since I never really get to play as male characters! Being a girl makes me always create girl characters... ANYWAY, that's what I'm thinking!

Of course, this is only if you guys want to do this! :D I'm thinking it could be a lot of fun. I don't want this RP to end so soon! A

[Crystal Flamedance]

Huh...trying to find a way back in...but finding that to be a little hard. A little help, maybe? ...Please? :P Sorry...not able to think that much lately...lack of sleep...homework...dogsitting. :P

[Alan23]

leapordspotz17, are we sure it's going to end so quickly? I mean, it's pretty much a safe bet Carnivalle isn't going to let Emily just set the bulk of the kids free - if nothing else, for exactly the reason that Sam states. As soon as they tell their parents what happened, the cops are going to arrest the whole carnie! I think it's a sure bet Sam's little ploy won't work (it was meant to be a pathetic attempt to save the day he thought up on the spur of the moment, and won't fool anyone with any brains)... I think there's life in this situation yet!

[RPGLoVeR213]

@Alan, you just read my mind. Carnivalle isn't giving up without a fight. And neither am I in squishing this durn fly in my room!

EDIT: Sorry for the wall-o-text, but I wanted to catch up offically. I hope y'all like the twist I put into our lovely story! (:

[LightingStrikes]

Let Nikki battled t he freak-woman.... :) Then when she starts to loose maybe Nikki will have to humble her self and ask her mom for help. Just maybe. :)

[Alan23]

Oh this is WIN WIN WIN I love it! Will post when I get back from work tonight (Aussie time)

[leopardspotz17]

...You know, considering the circumstances, I think Nikki is going to ditch "Blackwell" as her last name. She'll probably adopt her Grandfather's last name, as he was a close family member.


....And yes, I'm doing this for the sole purpose of being able to deliver this line:

"Hello. My name is Nikki Montoya. You killed my mother. Prepare to die."

;) Anyway, I guess that's not really possible anymore. After all, Emily's still alive... But it would've made a kick-ass movie reference.

[Crystal Flamedance]

Ah...not trying to complain too much here...but it seems like my character is just being ignored...I am trying to get back in here, and I have gotten around to posting.

Oh, and a quick question; where did Amber's parents come from? We don't have an Amber...

[LightingStrikes]

Who the heck is this other detective?! It's Bob Scallie! :) Bob is the main detective please rewrite that part....

Nice one looking to Nikki for help... The Ring Mistress is standing near her... I wonder if Nikki will turn on her father and claim the ring mistress or not... hum...

Emily awaits. :)

oh yes and sorry I meant Alaina's parents and will update .....


I am also very sorry to those who got left behind, this story went way too fast. My next story is going to be ran a little differently and I promise equal time to each character. I am going to have a squeal... I want all of your characters involved... my requirements for responses will be much different... as I feel that is part of the problem, and no one will be allowed to move the next scene over until ALL who are in the story post.

My deepest apologies to all those who felt lost in the story. You are each very valuable writers to me. :) I hope you will consider joining us all in the second story... this will be a little different setting. As the only really active character will be mine.

[RPGLoVeR213]

Yeah, I'm sorry too Crystal Flamedance.

@LightningStrikes, my detective is a partner on the case, he will be Eli's adopted father in the sequel. I will probably put something about him since I am planning on re-doing Elijah's history to include these events and some events during the span of the detectives freeing them and the sequel.

[leopardspotz17]

I like the new detective too. There will be multiple officers on the case, although Detective Scallie would be leading all investigations. You mind if I introduce a minor officer? Just a lady to help out Nikki. It is likely that officers will be assigned to kids: make sure that they're alright.

...I watch a lot of cop shows. :D

[LightingStrikes]

Not at all Leo! :)

I flipped out today on a small issue of a new character. sighs... And Leo's right there would have been a team of detectives. :) Bob Scallie would have been the head. :)

[leopardspotz17]

Tada! I'm really proud of that post. :D The next one I'll do will not only be of Nikki but will also detail her parents... :)

[LightingStrikes]

Wow I just read that and foreshadows Nikki's father in my next post for you. haha...

All this attention on his daughter must really infuriate him. :)

[RPGLoVeR213]

And with that, my last post of Carnival Missing II is made.

Wow, this was an amazing roleplay. It's the first roleplay I've finished before it died. I feel accomplished! I can't wait for the sequel, it's going to be sooo wicked!

@Crystal Flamedance, I know Raine and Eli didn't react much together, but I really like your character. I hope to see you and Raine with her parents in Mother Dearest.

@Alan23, also Sam and Eli didn't reach much either, but even though he was just an assistant he was an important part to the plot. I hope he can somehow fit into Mother Dearest so I can see you again. Weren't you in Tarantella Restaurant?

@LightningStrikes, you were amazing playing three characters and still being an amazing and understanding GM. Andy was totally cruel, and a main piece to the master plan. Emily was amazing, becoming a dynamic character from being the main antagonist to the hero and the adult protagonist. Alexander was also a dynamic character, but more subtle than Emily. I really like his personality and can't wait to see him, along with Emily, in Mother Dearest.

@leopardspotz, SOULMATE! Ever since the beginning, Nikki was my favorite character. She made Elijah my second favorite character. She's just THAT amazing. You, my dear Liz, are a great roleplayer and I truly believe you helped me better myself in roleplaying. WE have the same taste in music, and both adore Elijah in Degrassi. I can't wait to see Nikki in Mother Dearest and Sparrow in The Rivalries. I love your style of roleplaying and... you are indescribable, truly no words can desribe how much you mean to me in roleplaying and out.

So, to all my roleplayers, I wish you happiness and only the best for roleplay. I can't wait for the sequel and any other roleplays I might be in with you.

Love and Best Dishes,
"Blue"

[LightingStrikes]

Eh... who said this was over?