Drahn Bord'el

[Drahn]

So I tried this for creating a new character. It's my first time roleplaying, so if anyone has some hints, just give them.

Name: Drahn Bord'el, son of Yavik
Race: Dwarf
Age: 19
Homeworld: Salvaxe
Height: 4ft 8"
Weight: 176 lbs
Haircolor: Black
Beard: black, 1ft 3"
Eyecolor: Emerald
Accessories: Always carries a shield and an axe. Also he carries a lute and some of his favorite ale.
Abilities/qualities: He his very stubborn, that's why he never gives up. Even when everything seems hopeless, he still goes trough. His friendship is very durable, but very hard to get. He enjoys to party very hard, but knows when to be serious. He doesn't care about gold. He's very strict in his personal honor. He is a brilliant military strategist, even when he's drunk.
Negative points: It's very difficult to gain his trust. His fighting skills are average. He is drunk a lot. Even when it's clear you should give up, he stills goes trough with his idea.
Background/History:
Drahn Bord'el is the son of Yavik, who was a respectable noble dwarf on Salvaxe. But one day there was a civil war between the Hall of Mavro and the Hall of Traidor. Yavik who was a kin of the Hall of Mavro gave Drahn to a sentry of the Hall when he went to war, where he died. The Hall of Mavro lost the civil war, but were granted a small piece of territory at the edge of the realm. Here Drahn grew up under the sentry of the Halls and learned at a young age the ways of a sentry. The fighting, thinking like a soldier, but also drinking like a soldier. When a couple of his friends fell in an ambush, set up by a person he thought of as a friend, he started to distrust people. Now he's a full member of the Sentry of the Hall of Mavro. And when he's not on watch duty, he's in the inn. Here he enjoys everyone with the songs of old ages.

So tell me what you think and if you have any suggestions give them. Also if you know a fantasy setting here to join with my character, or if you like to work out this idea of Salvaxe, just tell me.