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Welcome To The Future Brave Knight

Welcome To The Future Brave Knight

a part of “Welcome To The Future Brave Knight”, a fictional universe by Specmarine.

When a magical experiment goes wrong, a group of knights are sent into the future by mistake.

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Re: Welcome To The Future Brave Knight

Tips: 0.00 INK Postby MayContainPlagiarism on Mon Feb 01, 2016 10:02 pm

You don't have to apologize. I'm just a bit distressed; I'm probably far more invested in this than either of you. :)
Do you feel like you're a bad writer? PM me, and let's talk about it. :)

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Re: Welcome To The Future Brave Knight

Tips: 0.00 INK Postby MayContainPlagiarism on Thu Feb 04, 2016 9:21 pm

Hey, everybody, general roleplaying tip:

Don't make half of your post someone else's post.

It's great that you acknowledge and respond to other characters and their actions, but it's a lot better to say "She responded this way to his comment about X" or "He moved aside when she took this action," rather than rewriting and writing your character's response as one long sentence (or, worse, in two sentences).

It's certainly not an end of the world thing but it's a great habit to kick.

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Re: Welcome To The Future Brave Knight

Tips: 0.00 INK Postby Specmarine on Thu Feb 04, 2016 9:44 pm

I can finally do this!

The more you know *insert rainbow here*

But in all seriousness that is some good advice I will be using.

*Update*
Now you guys get to know what I truly look like!
Without the Dark, there can be no Light,
We have purpose
Without the Lie, there can be no Truth,
We have purpose
Without the War, there can be no Victory,
We have purpose
Without the Death, there can be no sacrifice,
We have purpose
Without the Hope there can be no Future,
We have purpose
Without the Loyalty there can be no one chapter,
We have purpose
Without the Emperor, there is nothing,...
And we would have no purpose

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Re: Welcome To The Future Brave Knight

Tips: 0.00 INK Postby MayContainPlagiarism on Sun Feb 07, 2016 8:47 pm

Spec, 2 things:

1: You just kind of repeated other posts again

2: ...does Martellus think that his speech made the group feel better? Do you think he made the group feel better?

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Re: Welcome To The Future Brave Knight

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Whoops. I will change a few words.

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Re: Welcome To The Future Brave Knight

Tips: 0.00 INK Postby MayContainPlagiarism on Sat Feb 13, 2016 8:47 pm

I want to preface this by saying I'm not upset with anyone or annoyed or anything. This is, purely, constructive feedback:

Spec, as the GM, you really should be the one driving the plot. It feels like every time it's my turn to post, it's also my sole responsibility to advance the story. Under normal circumstances I am more than fine doing so on occasion, especially if our characters are separated, but at the moment Martellus is kind of a huge pussy and I don't like being in charge to the story. I joined this to help you out, and so I'd have something easy.

SI, to a lesser extent, I think you've got the same problem. Vidari and Caclia are kind of just watching everyone else do stuff.

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Re: Welcome To The Future Brave Knight

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Yeah...I suck at being the GM for my own RP.

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Re: Welcome To The Future Brave Knight

Tips: 0.00 INK Postby MayContainPlagiarism on Mon Feb 15, 2016 10:35 pm

You don't suck. You're just new. Stay open-minded and willing to work with people, and you'll improve. For now, focus on making the story yours; you know more about the plot and setting than we do, and it's your responsibility to use that information as appropriate to direct the RP. Your character needs to be more active and less... well, less of a sad wuss.

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