Kingdom Hearts: A New Beginning, Part Two OOC

[holothewisewolf]

How could I have forgotten the torturous waiting lol.

[holothewisewolf]

I hope you realize a simple bonk on the head won't knock a trained fighter like Thomas out for more that a few seconds.

[holothewisewolf]

I hope you realize a simple bonk on the head won't knock a trained fighter like Thomas out for more that a few seconds.

[True_Grave]

Well, I need him to be out for more than a few seconds, though. This part is supposed to be that Jason and Rayn come to the rescue, and if Thomas gets up, he might cause complications.

[holothewisewolf]

He can be out for a few seconds just know he holds grudges pretty hard though.

[True_Grave]

I just need him to be out until Jason and Rayn get there and force Osden and Hym to retreat. Once Osden and Hym are gone, Thomas can get up. Oh, believe me, I know how angry Thomas will be over what they did to Odie, and Jason and Rayn along with him. This event is setting the stage for Part Three, when the Harbingers become the main bad guys.

[True_Grave]

So, Holo, Protoman, you guys going to post anytime soon?

[True_Grave]

Merry Christmas to the New Beginning family. I hope all of you have a wonderful day...if any of you are still out there.

[Xeynar]

Holiday craziness followed by settling into a new job over the last couple of months. That's pretty much been the story of my life. I think I was waiting for Holo but I could post some kind of something if it means the game doesn't die.

[True_Grave]

Yeah, Robin and Holo are gone and don't seem like they're coming back, so there's no reason to wait on them. You can go ahead and post and we'll continue the story.

[holothewisewolf]

Ugh children take up so much time and my tech is always breaking. But I'm back again XD.

[True_Grave]

Welcome back. We haven't had any posting since April, but I'm still willing to continue the RP if you are.

[holothewisewolf]

I'll wait lol. Not like i don't have time lol. My kid is crazy as ever.

[holothewisewolf]

I did just post btw feel me if i improved lol.

[True_Grave]

The only improvement I recommend is to break that big block of text up into multiple paragraphs of 4-8 sentences. It makes it easier to read. Also, proofread for any spelling or grammar mistakes just in case there are any. Content wise, it was just fine.

[holothewisewolf]

Dammit lol my darn auto correct just throws in wrong words willy nilly.

[True_Grave]

I can relate lol. I have a tablet that auto corrects even when the words are legitimate words in English. I have to double check everything before I send them, even if it's just filled with common words. My friend actually thought I was tired one night when we were talking on Facebook just because of the weird auto corrects.

On a side note, I look forward to seeing what your plots with Jessica and Thomas will bring to the table within the RP. Odie and Rayn (not Ryan) haven't been around in forever, so I was thinking of me taking Rayn and you taking Odie until they (hopefully) return. This will put me playing Jason, Shien, and Rayn while you play Jessica, Thomas, and Odie. It will be a bit of a job to play three characters each but it will at least keep things going.

[holothewisewolf]

Yeah. I'd rather wait lol. Heck i came back didn't i? Have faithin our friends.

[True_Grave]

Happy Thanksgiving everyone.

[True_Grave]

Why don't you have Jessica join the party and we'll move the story forward while we wait on Robin and Protoman to return?